Again this story is Great and I hope you haven't given up on it, I would like to see atleast one update that would satisfy my craving to know what happens next so please if you get the chance to read this I hope it inspires you to continue. Love the Story by the Way.

Author's Response: I will never give up on this story, even if it takes me 5 more years to finish. I hope you're still around to read!

Look I understand that your busy and stuff but this Story needs to continue till the End don't do us Injustice by stopping 11 chapters in because Fans love this Story and want to know what happens Next, I hope you read this and consider continuing.

Please Continue, it's. been sometime since you updated, you probably even forgot about it but I urge you to Continue We as Fans need to know what happens next.

Please Update, I can't read any other story till I know what happens Next Please Come back to Continue this Incredible story.

can't wait for your next chapter :D

Author's Response: I finally updated ;u; Thanks for waiting

Hi me again 😊 I was just wondering how's it going with the story? I hope you're not having a hard time and if you are I wish you luck 👍 Sorry if its too much pressure for you, I just can't move on with my life, I have to know what happens. Does Sasuke admits his feelings? Do they get it on? Jk 😉 well I wish you lots of luck. Hope you update soon! 😁

Author's Response: Lmao "do they get it on?" xD Ah, thank you, sorry I took so long. I hope you're still around!! Xoxo~

This is a great story! When will you update soon, I'm just dying to know what happens next. Please update as soon as you can :)

Author's Response: Thank you so very much! I've been thinking about updating; I can't convey how bad I feel for not being able to ): Soon!!

I am pretty sure I can diagnose Sasuke for you, Rayne; he suffers from what is commonly known as ‘I-Am-A-Dick’ Syndrome. He will get over it in his own time, but first he has to come to the realization that he is fucking retarded. Just wait, I promise he will go back to being a robot-like character who can only react with the expression ‘hn’ when a new Uchiha walks into the room. It may not be the level-out that you wish for his personality, but hey, he is an Uchiha. They only know how to extreme.
Rayne mentions Jugo and Suigetsu, but I wonder if Sasuke is aware of how she knows them. Unless I am not remembering correctly, she only saw them and knew of their existence when she was pretending to be Samui. (Isn’t it funny that I can remember her name but not the long title of the first story? >.>) I know I have asked this before, but is Sasuke aware of Rayne being around that one time? Did he feel the bracelet heat with her energy? Just curious if he is putting two and two together.
Thank you Rayne for pointing out that retard’s inability to realise that bleeding from your eyes for like one-hundred chapters is not fucking natural. Sasuke you need rest; go to bed, drag Rayne into the bed with you, and snuggle while being jealous of Izumo, okay? Why can’t you be fucking normal?
LOL. OH MY FUCKING GOD, RAYNE, YOU CANNOT JUST TELL SASUKE TO SUCK ANOTHER WOMANS TITS. I…am…dying… *Reaches for the light.*
And thank you again, Rayne. You are really helping me out. Karin’s abilities are retarded. Sasuke is a gullible fool if he thinks the only way Karin can give him chakra is if he bites her. Come on Sasuke…they told me you knew what fangirls were like. THEY CALL YOU INTELLIGENT.
“The warm feeling of Sasuke’s cheek pressing against her skin made her smirk as she thought of how often they seem to repeat the past.” All I could think about when I read this was…’He just smeared hot blood on your neck. Ew…’ She has the cooties now. It’s official.
Itachi must be a match-maker extraordinaire in your story. Like Kakashi is in mine. Yeah, I totally did that. I totally just referenced my own Couples Development Meme to comment on YOUR story. Ha! Aren’t I funny today?
The fact that she said she already celebrated and Sasuke is ‘unconscious’ on her shoulder made me laugh. They had one hell of a celebration didn’t they, if ya get what I mean. *Winks*Oh Sasuke, you’re being dominated by a girl. How funny.
No Rayne, you’re going to have wild and dirty sex with a blind Sasuke. Admit it. Then you’re going to go to Konoha and have your way with Izumo. You know, cause you’re that kind of girl. XD

Author's Response: DUDE. FUCKING LOL. I SPIT OUT MY SOUP READING YOUR REVIEW ON MY BREAK. MY STOMACH HURTS xD I'm trying not to look like a laughing weirdo across from my coworkers. I don't think it's working. So hilarious.I'm glad you liked the chapter. It's been a while since I've just been able to write creatively without worrying about sticking to plot. Rayne didn't meet Juugo or Suigetsu, but when she was observing thir fight with Killer Bee in Kimo, she heard their names. When she confronts Sasuke at the akatsuki hideout, they talked about how she was th one that healed and saved him that day, so I did go over it >u> I made sure I did for the sake of loopholes.
Point out that retards inability to realize bleeding out of your eyes is not natural. I died. *rolls around floor* It's silly, but I can't tell you how hard I laughed when I wrote thy in and imagined her saying it in my voice. Did you like that tit part? ;D I thought it was dashing. LOL DIDN'T EVEN THINK OF HIM SMEARING BLOOD ON HER FACE. I should have made her comment something along the lines of getting AIDs from his blood since he's bitten Karin...you know, think about it. He could have TOTALLY contracted an STD from her. Moron. This is why they need sex Ed. Oh yeah, they certainly celebrated :| absolutely nothing. Hah. "No Raye, you're going to have wild and dirty sex with a blind Sasuke." *reaches up for break room table to save self from ROFL death* have your way with Izumo xD "Sasuke, sex with you has given me a new found confidence. I'm leaving you for a man that actually knows how to use it, without me telling him which hole to aim for. Seriously, you poked my butt. How do you fuck that up?"

That was great! The old woman at the Inn was hilarious lol.

Author's Response: Thank you! -bows and falls off stage- That little old lady was my own self insert of perverse humor. I'm glad you enjoyed it xD

so he did save her. i really thought he wouldt :p
standing out side just to see rayne fall flat on her face, way to go XD.
well, i thought he would have trid to kiss her, i duno, just kinda had that feeling near the end of the chapter...
going back to kohona to see the compound? soo not good. *enter warning music*

“She was underneath a tree…okay.” I laughed so hard to that, I don’t know why, but I could just picture Rayne’s face of confusion.
Sasuke is standing around shirtless, huh? It’s like he planned this moment. I will stand right here when she wakes up and be shirtless so I can make an entrance. What an attention whore he is. :P Stop giving in to him Rayne! Stop questioning it, you’re only letting him get the attention he wants! Remind me to show you the secret Uchiha powers comic. You’ll laugh.
I really like Sasuke explaining his actions to her, it feels very like him…but I think he’s being a tad too open with her. But Rayne’s reactions to his thoughts were sooooo funny. Shove his face in the fire, girl! DO IT. DO YOURSELF A FAVOUR. GO BE WITH IZUMO.
LOL SHE SAID IZUMO. SHE SAID IT. OMG, I CAN’T BELIEVE SHE BROUGHT THAT UP WHEN I WAS JUST YELLING AT HER TO GO BE WITH HIM.
However, I do have to point out that I don’t think Itachi was aware that Tobi was Obito; I don’t think he ever even really knew Obito. I think he was genuinely under the impression he was Madara because Itachi had nothing to compare him to. He never knew Obito and her certainly never new Madara, so I think he actually believed Obito’s lie. Like everyone else. Don’t even get me started on how much I hate that plot line…you know I do, you know I will explode.
The point where Sasuke is being remorseful, I feel he should be angry too. Because despite missing all of those people, he’s mad that they never knew what Itachi did and that they lived in the peace he sacrificed his entire life for. He hates them for it as much as he misses them. I think you’re missing a key part of Sasuke’s character and I feel there should be more tension in parts of this chapter, especially when he is talking about the people from Konoha.
AND NOW I WANT TO SEE THE NEXT CHAPTER.

I mostly have a problem with Itachi being characterised to do all this because when he was resurrected he was so ashamed that he didn’t want to face Sasuke. He kept on telling Naruto it was his destiny to fix Sasuke and that he couldn’t have any part of it. Mainly because he felt like he didn’t have to right to see Sasuke. So it kind of makes this part feel rushed in a sense, I think Itachi shouldn’t have told him the truth of everything here…it just feels rather contradictory for seeing Itachi is almost a vulnerable state later on; I rather liked those chapters because Itachi’s flaws become obvious.
But Itachi beating around the bush and Sasuke commenting that he makes no sense was great. You write Itachi very well, right down to the way he talks. Super impressed here because he is one of the more difficult characters to write. I also like that Itachi was such a dick about dragging Rayne into this whole thing because it really does show off his selfishness. I chant to people like I am preaching a religion, above everything else Itachi cares about Sasuke. His actions are always to help Sasuke in some fucked up way and he is willing to allow others to get hurt about it. However, to not feel remorse? That’s unlike him. But I get he was hiding it from Sasuke because he is so used to putting up that barrier between them.
The ending paragraph was amazing…that is all.

Author's Response: I knew I could count on you to rip me one :'D ..I know it felt rushed, which is why I felt unconfident when posting it, but because of the direction I want to go with the story, I feel like Sasuke needed to hear Itachi's thoughts on this. At least him saying that he didn't leave him alive so he can undo all that he sacrificed to save the village... I might think on your words, and do some revisions for the dialogue in this chapter. I wanted it to come across as a reality check for Sasuke, where in Itachi is meaner than I probably made him sound. I wanted it to seem like Itachi was basically telling him that while he loved him and hoped he'd be the change he wanted to see for the future, he understood that Sasuke was headed down a dark path, so he prepared Rayne to kill him. "His actions are always to help Sasuke in a fucked up way." So true xD He even thinks killing him will help him.

I made Itachi and Rayne sound really close, but in the end, I felt like that was out of Itachi's character. Of course he basically used her, and threw it in Sasuke's face to gauge a reaction from him. Not because he didn't feel remorse, just because he wanted to jab at Sasuke with a pitch fork. Thank you! I liked the ending paragraph myself :D Isn't it romantic for Sasuke to watch her drown? Truly a moment to be written down in their scrapbook.

OMG OMG OMG. I AM SO EXCITED TO BE REVIEWING AGAIN FOR THE FIRST TIME IN WHAT FEELS LIKE FOREVER. *throws confetti* YAY SHANN! I am so happy you were able to find the inspiration to update. =)
So far, Sasuke is smack dead in character. I really liked the line about ‘digging your own grave.’ It’s just something he would say to an opponent. It’s completely pompous and presumptuous. Great start, it really sets the mood between Rayne and him.
I know Rayne is confident because she has analysed Sasuke’s style and attack pattern, but it’d give off a bit more tension if she still worried about the gap between fist fighting and sword fighting. There is a difference between intelligence and arrogance. However, at the same time, it shows a good character-flaw. Rayne has always been confident, so it shows through here.
Again, I spy a similarity between Rayne and Hikari. >.> They both have an ability that allows them to reverse an attack in a condensed and concentrated form. :3 You might remember it from her fight in the preliminaries matches of the Chuunin exams. Great minds, right?
Again, as what happens with many of your fight scenes, you try too hard to describe exactly what is happening and it can lose the reader at times. Clear and concise sentences with spark their imaginations into seeing exactly what you want and the more you bog it down, the more clouded the picture becomes. However, this fight scene between them is a really great effort. I like the intensity of it. Sasuke is amazingly in character. You put a lot of thought into this and it shows.
FINALLY SOMEONE FUCKING TAKES ADVANTAGE OF SASUKE’S WEAKNESS. Just hit him AND the ultimate shield people. Send them both flying. >.<
Oh, I liked this chapter a LOT!!!! So intense, I loved how in character Sasuke was. I loved Rayne’s resolve! There were some grammatical errors, but I don’t even give a fuck! This chapter was well worth them.
Oh, and about the last sentence, thanks for the credit! I remember writing it over skype. :P I do like it a lot. >.>

Author's Response: I loved hearing when people say they love how bad ass Rayne is, and how powerful she is, but I don't always want her to be like that. She's getting older now, stronger, as well as everyone else. Right now she may seem really strong, but I want to begin adding character flaws, and breaks in her strength. I don't want her to come off as Mary-Sue in that aspect, so soon, you will definitely see some struggle!

I'm sure I've brought it up before, and I know you understand, that fight scenes are SO. HARD. to describe. If I were drawing it out, fine, that's easy. But writing it down, every twist and turn of the body I feel needs to be described so readers actually get it. I might be going a little overboard with it..but that's just ^^;; and something I need to improve on.

THANK YOU!! :D You're damn right she took advantage of him >_> purrr ;D ..He's half fucking blind xD But, Sasuke being Sasuke, accepted the fight anyway. Ah, stupid, stupid boy. I think that last sentence is brilliant. I needed it @_@ And I realized I messed up your account name in the credit, so lemme go fix that!!