Reviews For From the Ashes of War and Tragedy
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 20/07/12 - 07:04 am · For: Impending Doom
It's not that great, but your welcome with the summary.
Anyway, this was an awesome chapter. The fight was really cool, and definitely fun to read and imagine. I can't wait to see the fight between them and the guardian. I'm sure it will be epic.
Great job with this chapter. I can't wait to read more, Itoko-san.
Author's Response: It is great don't deny it! Glad you liked it and thanks for the review!
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 18/07/12 - 08:05 pm · For: Impending Doom
Those last like five sentence just sounded so evil and cruel, I kinda gawked at how violent War was thinking. But then... he is War...
The battle wasn't as gruesome as you told me it was gonna be! Phew, thank goodness for that, I can only take so much haha.
Awesome epic chapter, Shizake-nii-san! Keep up the good work!
Author's Response: The Four Horsemen take no shit from anyone. A "Take no Prisoners" attitude if you will. War literally represents all the hatred and "war" mankind has brought upon himself so it's only fit that he shows it. Dammit! That means I gotta make it more gruesome than that. Thanks for the review :D
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 09/07/12 - 10:15 am · For: Hell Rider
Sheesh. I mean, seriously, Kyuubi/Naruto ATE War. I mean, I guess that's one way to defeat an opponent, but still, strange. It was an epic battle, though, and I'm glad to see Naruto back to normal. I wonder if he'll be able to master the Kyuubi...... And more epic battles! Yeah! I can't wait to see who (or what) the guardian is.
Author's Response: Hah :P I figured it was one way the Nine tails would win a fight right? Hopefully he won't need to use all of Kyuubi's power against the guardian but...we'll see... Oh this story will be full of epic battles trust me :P Thank you for reviewing.
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 09/07/12 - 10:05 am · For: Spilling Blood
Sheesh. I can actually picture this in the game even though I've only seen my brother play it a couple times. No clue why that is.........
Anyway, great chapter. I love the battles, even if it still bothers me to see angels being killed and the bad guy. Now I know how Percy Jackson felt seeing evil cenataurs and Cyclopes. If you haven't the the books, don't ask. And then Satan appears....... DIE!!!
Now he just has to go deal with 8 tailed Naruto. No biggie.
Author's Response: It's epic isn't it? Heh sorry about killing angels, but it's the only way to restore balance and stop the whole Armageddon altogether. I've seen the movie but not the books. Yup :) No biggie :P
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 07/07/12 - 02:02 pm · For: Hell Rider
Wow, War's powers are incredible if he was able restrain the Nine-Tailed Fox. But I'm nervous for Naruto if he has to go into the phase again. That's a lot to ask, so I hope it'll work out. But if it means more epic battles... Cool!
Good job on this, Shizake-san! I'm looking forward to more!
Author's Response: War is just a bad ass ya know? Definitely more epic battles to come. Thanks for reviewing
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 03/07/12 - 08:55 pm · For: Spilling Blood
Whoa, whoa, whoa.... Very intense plot development here. Should I worry for War? I mean, it's War. But against the Nine-Tailed Fox, I wonder how he'll do.
Good job on this chapter, Shizake-san! Keep up the awesome work!
Author's Response: We'll see how War fairs up against the Nine Tailed fox. It'll be the first intense battle. I hope you liked it. Thanks for the review :)
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 26/06/12 - 07:29 am · For: Drawing Nearer
Finally! I have remembered the game this makes me think of! This game you're obsessing over - it's Darksiders, isn't it? I thought it was just a coincidence it made me think of it, but then I actually looked at the game description (my brother has and has beaten the game. I only watched him play a couple times, so I don't know the overall plot), and I saw it's about War! I feel so accomplished right now XD.
Anyway, great chapter. I really enjoyed it. The fight scenes are really cool in this story, as well as gruesome, which may be why they're so cool. And I have to see what's going to happen when they go to Konoha. And who the freak is the guardian?
Author's Response: Ding Ding Ding Ding Ding!!! You are correct Itoko! I love that game, and I can't wait for Darksiders 2 to come out in August. It'll be about Death. My section about War will be similar in a sense but not entirely. I'll have to totally make up stuff for Death, Famine, and Conquest. Konoha will be intense especially with Naruto. The guardian...Well you'll find out soon enough ;)
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 23/06/12 - 08:14 pm · For: Drawing Nearer
Gosh, this story is so grim and intense. But I'm so interested in reading more. This seems like a really cool story that just gets better with each chapter thus far. Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: I hope you'll continue to like it Nee-chan. There's a lot more to come especially since I'll be doing each horsemen's adventure and even more after that. It'll probably be my longest story to date. Thank you so much for the review
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 22/06/12 - 12:11 pm · For: Forward unto Dawn
Darn it! Another thing you write that has my mind creating things I think are cool but will never happen.
Anyway, this was a great start. Though it kinda feels wrong reading because it's making Heaven the bad guys..... Though it was epic, just like the movie Legion. I'm ver curious to see where this will lead, and I really can't wait to find out about these guardians. And haha. Anko was in this. I don't know why, but it made me laugh.
Author's Response: Well they aren't as evil as hell (you'll see why soon enough). Glad you liked it and there will for sure be more to come. Thanks for the review.
Name: purpledinosaur (Signed) · Date: 21/06/12 - 11:16 am · For: Forward unto Dawn
I really liked it, Shizake-San. You have a few grammar mistakes...wow...I actually picked them out...must be Masumi's influence...well, I can't wait for the next chapter and I really liked that banner you have for it. Strange, hooded horsemen...again, as I said in my last review, it gave me chills. Keep at it, Shizake!
Author's Response: Glad you liked. As for grammar mistakes I could care less. I'm just providing a story. If this was actual English class I would care but this is for fun so I don't really bother proofreading. Glad you liked it and the banner! Thanks for the review.
Name: purpledinosaur (Signed) · Date: 21/06/12 - 11:05 am · For: We Ride
Wow...just wow Shizake-San! Great starter! It actually gave me shivers, and I don't really say that to many authors! Nice job!
Author's Response: Haha didn't you already review on the opening? eh oh well thanks for the review!
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 20/06/12 - 09:07 pm · For: Forward unto Dawn
Ah, this came out so much cooler than I thought it would! This was so epic, and I really like the horsemen so far. I'm looking forward to more :D
Author's Response: War may seem distant and grim but his motives are good. Same with all of them. Thanks for the review :)
Name: Hazard (Signed) · Date: 20/06/12 - 08:20 pm · For: We Ride
*Cue epic music* nice story, I was wondering how you would open it up, and I say, it's very interesting! keep it up!
Author's Response: Glad you liked. It'll only continue to get more epic from here on out.
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 19/06/12 - 03:06 am · For: We Ride
I had already told you my opinions before, but then I never left them in a review.... *facepalm*
This was an interesting intro, I'm just seriously wondering how the four horsemen will tie in to the Narutoverse. I don't even remember seeing horses in the Naruto world, now that I think about it... O_O Well, that means you can definitely do a lot with this and create your own story. Now that sounds exciting ;) I'm looking forward to this. Good job on a very captivating opening.
Author's Response: Haha it's all good I'm glad you liked the intro. It'll be an odd fusion fic (I think that's what it's called) but epic nonetheless. Thanks for the review.
Name: purpledinosaur (Signed) · Date: 17/06/12 - 04:14 pm · For: We Ride
Very nice, Shizake-San! This aould definately be number one on my top ten things to read on here. I agree with Sasaui-Chan that this ''trailer'' reminds me of WoW. I cant wait for you to start it!
Author's Response: Glad you liked. I'll be starting it when I get Retribution rolling along nicely. Thanks for the review
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 17/06/12 - 05:37 am · For: We Ride
For some reason, this made me think of an opening or trailer for a WoW game. Weird, but it just made it seem cooler to me.
I know you said you were unsure of this before, but if you do post it, I will read it and love it.
Author's Response: Haha that's good I guess Well I'm probably gonna stick with it. I always loved the story of the four horsemen because they are such anti heroes. So I hope you do enjoy it when I get chapters going. Thanks Sasaui :)