Reviews For Bite Back The Curse
Name: Charlie (Signed) · Date: 09/06/12 - 11:14 am · For: Act 6: Rescue Dog
I keep forgetting she's not a dude lol
Okay, so it's not s dead person, but whatever. Instead, it's some random person she has to deal with XD
Has Makita been kidnapped? She made it sound like she knew all about it, like, she'd been there, done that. I dunno.
Name: Charlie (Signed) · Date: 09/06/12 - 11:09 am · For: Act 5: The Animal Kingdom
"so it had to be a mission of some kind of mission" Sorry, I had to point it out.
She found a person, like, a dead person? Man, this just got more interesting. I was kind of wondering how you were going to keep the dog story cool lol
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 08/06/12 - 07:09 pm · For: Act 7: Breakfast
My, my, so very vicious. It shocked me that she killed them, but then, she was a killer as a human. She would mutilate those that annoy her. Especially if they make for a nice breakfast XD
Good job on this chapter, I found it quite entertaining.
Name: purpledinosaur (Signed) · Date: 08/06/12 - 06:23 pm · For: Act 7: Breakfast
Out of the story so far, I have seen a few spelling mistakes, but other than that, it was really good. Your idea of having a shinobi turned into a dog is very original, and I laughed whenever you called the group of men bastards because it was very true, but I can get why they would think Makita to be a boy in the beginning, because whenever people see a stray, they think it's a boy. Again, nice chapter and I wonder where you will go with this.
Name: Shizake Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 08/06/12 - 04:14 pm · For: Act 7: Breakfast
Lol she totally pwned those birds.
Nice update. Can't wait for the next one!
Author's Response: Wow, Shizake, I'm surprised you're reading this, but thanks for all the reviews you left on this story. Much appreciated!
Name: Shizake Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 08/06/12 - 04:11 pm · For: Act 6: Rescue Dog
Ok so Makita is a girl ha. cleared that up.
So I'm glad she saved the girl. Wonder what'll happen next. Good chapter!
Name: Shizake Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 08/06/12 - 04:06 pm · For: Act 5: The Animal Kingdom
Wait is Makita a boy or a girl? It was probably somewhere and I just missed it lol. Ok well sorry if I got it wrong in the past reviews.
Anyways, dayum. Makita would get into some business with kidnappers. I only hope it goes alright. Well i'm about to find out anyways. Nice update.
Name: Shizake Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 08/06/12 - 04:00 pm · For: Act 4: Good Samaritan
Makita has some luck if she keeps finding herself in these predicaments.
Great chapter!
Name: Shizake Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 08/06/12 - 04:00 pm · For: Act 4: Good Samaritan
Makita has some luck if she keeps finding herself in these predicaments.
Great chapter!
Name: Shizake Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 08/06/12 - 03:54 pm · For: Act 3: The Interesting Curse
huh. Even dogs can have bad pasts.
Nice. I liked it. Next chapter
Name: Shizake Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 08/06/12 - 03:47 pm · For: Act 2: Woof Woof
Lol Makita deserves the title of, "Good doggie"
I like it so far. Off to read more
Name: Shizake Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 08/06/12 - 03:41 pm · For: Act 1: Not the Average Hero
Ok so I decided that I'm going to read this. I really like it so far. Makita seems like an interesting character even if she is a dog. I like her personality lol.
Awesome! I like it so far.
Name: ShadowXNight13 (Signed) · Date: 08/06/12 - 11:32 am · For: Act 7: Breakfast
that was cruelly awesome. way to go girl! she killed those birds for the little's breakfast. and you're not updating slowly. its at a nice rate. thank for the update! and cute chapter!
Name: RawrTheDinoLycan (Signed) · Date: 07/06/12 - 11:31 am · For: Act 6: Rescue Dog
You and your talent for amazing stories :))))
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 07/06/12 - 03:52 am · For: Act 6: Rescue Dog
Gosh, Makita is so sweet... Never would have guessed, though I suppose a girl who has been turned into a dog and must rescue others really does need to be somewhat nice.
An excellent chapter. Very nice setup on the rescue. I enjoyed it.
Name: Rowanrose (Signed) · Date: 06/06/12 - 05:55 pm · For: Act 2: Woof Woof
huh. so i wonder, Makita was human? And I just realized Makita's a girl! Awesome story, awesome chap. XD loooooving it.
Name: Rowanrose (Signed) · Date: 06/06/12 - 05:51 pm · For: Act 1: Not the Average Hero
Oh my gosh, cute as HECK. Me loves it. XD
I'm sorry about that, your job Dance-chan.
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 06/06/12 - 12:31 pm · For: Act 5: The Animal Kingdom
Haha, I really am enjoying this story. It's great having a main character as a dog, it gives everything such a different perspective. It reminds me of those little kid stories I used to read where the dogs were always outstanding creatures. Oh, nostalgia...
Name: aperson (Anonymous) · Date: 06/06/12 - 11:37 am · For: Act 6: Rescue Dog
hahaah its like the little'st hobo
i love it
Name: ShadowXNight13 (Signed) · Date: 06/06/12 - 11:33 am · For: Act 6: Rescue Dog
that was cute. i really wonder how big she must be in order to drop the guy gently so he won't wake up. I'm thinking the girl is a nin in training of some sorts? great story DDTD! Awesome chappie
Name: ShadowXNight13 (Signed) · Date: 05/06/12 - 11:34 am · For: Act 5: The Animal Kingdom
that's really awesome. i would love to meet her, even if she does kick my butt for some odd reason ;). i wonder why people don't notice the collar, or does she hide it at times?
Name: aperson (Anonymous) · Date: 04/06/12 - 12:12 pm · For: Act 4: Good Samaritan
i love it!! i hope u keep updating and not give up!! keep up the good work!!
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 04/06/12 - 03:18 am · For: Act 4: Good Samaritan
Aww, I love how she saved that guy. That was such a good scene. And I love how she interacts with other animals. She does seem quite social for a dog XD
Awesome job on this! Hope to see more soon!
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 03/06/12 - 06:00 pm · For: Act 4: Good Samaritan
Ha.... ha..... They got their butts kicked by a dog. Then again, it's a dog that has probably killed a dozen times more people than they have.....
This was a great chapter and it's interesting to see action with a dog XD. I really enjoy reading from such a different PoV. It's truly interesting. And it's fun to see the animals talk. YEAH!
Great job with this chapter, DDTD. I really enjoyed reading it and I'm psyched for more of it. This is one awesome story that I can't wait to see grow and totally deserves all the attention it's getting.
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 03/06/12 - 05:25 pm · For: Act 3: The Interesting Curse
So, it looks like you were planning on explaining it, and you did a great job at summarizing it to make it shorter, and at the same time not have it just be a big information dump.
It was quite an interesting chapter even if not too much stuff happened. I can't wait to see what will happen in this new town, but I'm sure it will be interesting.
The only thing that really stuck with me was you used site instead of sight. Otherwise it was nicely written with a good flow. Great job, DDTD.