Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 20/03/12 - 08:01 pm · For: Chapters 176-180
.... I can't believe you killed Ino. That's so unlike you, to kill one of the good guys....
This really was dry heartwrenching... The entire time, I was in denial because I couldn't believe that she was dead...
You did really well with this chapter, even if it was horribly depressing... I think you did rather well with the emotion, in both Shizake and Nitachi. Keep up the good work, Shizake-san!
Author's Response: I know that's why it sucked writing it :/ Usually I wouldn't do that...but I have a plan with this whole thing that hopefully I can redeem myself with. I always consider myself sucky at writing heart-wrenching moments but I guess I did good so that brings relief to my heart. Thanks for the review :)
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 18/03/12 - 01:28 pm · For: Chapters 171-175
Hmm, I wonder what those Dusk ninja are up to... It sounds intense. Ah, I want to know what happened. I was worried the three Uchiha were I deep trouble, but Sasaui came through! Yay! Awesome chapter, Shizake-san! Keep up the good work!
Author's Response: This is the arc I was talkin about :) I hope it makes for an interesting one also. I wanted to give you a glimpse of Sasaui's power also. Thank you for the review wolf-chan!
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 15/03/12 - 04:56 pm · For: Chapter 141-145
Kuzake and Shizake still make me think of Goku and Gohan......
Sweet! Two epic battles. And we got to see some of the dragon's powers. This was an amazing chapter. I absolutely loved it!!!!
Author's Response: Haha it's a good father son relationship isnt it? I'm glad you liked! The dragon will be an epic spirit for Shizake to host. Thank you for the awesome review :)
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 15/03/12 - 04:40 pm · For: Chapters 136-140
Kill Madara! Kill him! I really want to see the battle. I'm sure after it they'll be able to rebuild. Until then, I'm jumping in excitement for this fight.
Author's Response: Hehe the fight is epic :D
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 15/03/12 - 04:30 pm · For: Chapters 132-135
OoO. Cool! New dragon spirit. That beats Kyuubi any day. I can't wait to see it's powers. It makes me even more excited for the Madara fight.
Author's Response: Hehe I got tired of the Kyuubi, I wanted to twist it up a bit. Plus Dragons are my favorite creatures :P
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 15/03/12 - 02:41 pm · For: Chapters 166-170
Ah, new mission. So exciting! Your missions are always so epic. I can't wait to see what happens with this. Good job on this!
Author's Response: Thank you wolf-chan :) I hope to bring about a whole new arc with this mission.
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 13/03/12 - 06:04 pm · For: Chapter 126-131
Sheesh. Everyone's against the Fire Country..... Crap! Dang you, Madara! Give Naruto back before I send Sasaui after you..... I should probably stop threatening people with Sasaui. But man, this is going to make for an epic battle. I can't wait!
Author's Response: Haha you'll just have to read :) It is an epic battle btw :D and your in for a treat
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 13/03/12 - 05:55 pm · For: Chapters 121-125
Man! I'm so excited for this war. I really want to see what's going to happen with your changes in the plot. I really hope nobody gets seriously hurt.
Author's Response: Guess you'll just have to read ahead :P which you did...:)
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 13/03/12 - 02:51 pm · For: Chapters 162-165
Wait... Really?!?! Yeah, didn't see that one coming. How interesting :)
So... Did she tell you that is really what the Guardian is in her story? Because it's still technically a mystery in Tainted Guardian, and if his is really what Sasaui is in the story... It's been spoiled for me! Nooooooo!
But anyway, nice plot twist! I was definitely surprised with it.
Author's Response: Haha no it hasnt been spoiled. This guardian isnt the same as her guardian. Just a different concept :) im glad you liked! I know most people wont expect it ;)
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 12/03/12 - 02:16 pm · For: Chapters 156-161
Such a happy time! Shizake has full control, and everyone is together and happy and safe and everything... It makes me wonder what you have planned for anything more. This was such a nice chapter, I'm afraid to see their happiness crumble... Great work in this chapter though! Loved it!
Author's Response: Thank you wolf-chan! I'm getting closer to running out of pre-written stuff but there is still more to come :D Thank you for reviewing!
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 10/03/12 - 01:04 pm · For: Chapters 151-155
I really liked this chapter. It was such a good chapter for reflections: everyone seemed to be looking back on the past and previous occurrences. Everything that led them to where they are now. It was kinda nice in a way.
Great job on these updates, Shizake-san! Keep up the awesome work!
Author's Response: Yeah :) your right. I actually never realized that until now i guess that's how i wrote it on accident lol. Thank you wolf-chan!
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 10/03/12 - 12:37 pm · For: Chapters 146-150
Ooh, Shizake and Naruto are off to the island, how exciting! I wonder what's in store for Shizake as he tries to control the dragon spirit... And oh gosh, it looks like its going to be an intense fight for Kuzake and Shezji... I hope they'll be alright.
Ah, I get to read another one! I shall be back soon!
Author's Response: It will definitely be interesting for him. I'm glad you liked, thanks for the review
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 09/03/12 - 02:41 pm · For: Chapters 114-120
Sweet. The war is in session. I can't wait to see how having Shizake will effect it as well as your other ocs and Sasuke's return. And awesome fights, Shizake-san! I really liked Kuzake and Shezji's fight.
Author's Response: Hehe thank you! The war is pretty epic
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 08/03/12 - 04:10 pm · For: Chapters 110-113
Holy macaroni and cheese! That was amazing. I love this mission. All the fights left me flabbergasted with their awesomeness. Everything about the fights was just mind blowing. I love how none were exactly the same. Great job, Shizake-san!!
Author's Response: Haha this review made me so happy! I'm really glad you liked the fights! Thank you for the awesome review Sasaui-chan!
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 08/03/12 - 03:32 pm · For: Chapters 105-109
Wow. Their training session was awesome. It was amazing seeing these four as a team. They are really in sync. I can't wait to see what is going to happen in this upcoming mission. I'm sure something is going to go wrong, though.
Author's Response: mayyyyybeeeee :D Thank you!
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 08/03/12 - 03:16 pm · For: Chapters 101-104
Sweet jutsu idea, combining Kirin and the Reaper's Blade jutsus. That was just awesome. Ooh! Team 7 is getting back together again. This ought to be awesome. I have to read more!!!
Author's Response: Hehe thanks! Read on ahead, the mission is epic! I'm glad you liked :)
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 08/03/12 - 02:57 pm · For: Chapter 96-100
I love the Shizake and Hinata moments. They're so cute! I'm glad that Shizake was able to help Sakura with her guilt. As for the Sound Village, I can't wait to see what they're up to.
Author's Response: Up to no good as usual :P
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 07/03/12 - 04:49 pm · For: Chapter 141-145
:D Madara is dead! It's about time! Everything is right with the world! New arcs now, yay! I look forward to reading what you have next. Keep up the good work.
Author's Response: Hehe yup! A lot more to come soon!
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 07/03/12 - 02:03 pm · For: Chapters 136-140
Ah, everything is getting so intense! I can't wait to see what happens with this! Shizake is going to battle alone with Madara, it's going to be so amazing! I am really looking forward to it. Nice setup for this chapter!
Author's Response: The fight is going to be intense! Like I said this is my favorite section of the story so I put all my creativity into it (I hope). Im glad you liked it!
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 05/03/12 - 03:50 pm · For: Chapters 91-95
I bet they didn't plan on being entertainment for the Chunin exams. It was a great battle though. I was also nice to see how everyone was reacting to Sasuke's return. And yeah! Go Kuzake. He finally learned the third eye =D.
Author's Response: Haha I know right? Did you expect Natsuro to still be alive? Yup everyone may be confused but they know it's for the best. You can tell deep down Sasuke cares for Kuzake for being a fellow Uchiha. He feels an obligation to teach him and protect him.
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 05/03/12 - 03:23 pm · For: Chapters 132-135
So Shizake no longer has the Nine-Tailed in him, now he has the fire dragon spirit... Coolio! That's amazing, I like dragons better anyway ;) I seriously thought you had killed Sasuke, thank goodness you didn't! That's be so upsetting.
Great work on this chapter! It was such an awesome twist, I really liked it!
Author's Response: Haha yes! I kinda got bored with Shizake having the nine tailed so I wanted to mix it up a bit. I know right?! I freaking love dragons. Haha that was the part where I originally had him die forever. I even had him transfer his Mangekyou to Shizake to form the Mangekyou Shanigan. But I totally changed that. Thank you for the awesome reviews Wolf-chan! I'm so glad you like it!
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 05/03/12 - 02:53 pm · For: Chapter 126-131
Gah, I knew Naruto was going to be taken! One of your epic twists! Oh my gosh, I hope they find him. Soon, they need to find him soon. Like, NOW!
Great updates, they were. Wry intense what with the was and all. Keep up the awesome work!
Author's Response: Ohhh it's gonna get more twistier than that trust me ;) Thank you!
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 05/03/12 - 02:43 pm · For: Chapters 121-125
I'm honestly quite happy you wrote this set if chapters. We never got the chance to see this type of thing happen in the manga, where everyone prepares to battle. So I'm glad you wrote this. Nice job!
Author's Response: Haha thanks! I felt it was necessary even if I didnt go too in depth with it. I know there was a little bit of it in the anime though. Thank you wolf-chan!
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 04/03/12 - 03:37 pm · For: Chapters 85-90
Yes! Sasuke finally gained a brain. I'm so glad that someone gave him one =P.
That was a really cool mission for the kids and Kakashi. I absolutely loved it and hope to read more kick butt fights, which I know you'll have.
Author's Response: Haha yup! Thanks for the review!
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 04/03/12 - 03:23 pm · For: Chapters 79-84
First off, Sasuke..... STOP BEING DUMB AND JUST SAY OKAY!!!! Okay, now that I've got that out of my system, great chapter, Shizake-san. I'm really glad he woke up. One year..... Sheesh, poor Shizake.
Author's Response: haha that made me laugh :P Im glad you liked it!