Reviews For After the Ashes
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 23/07/12 - 10:19 am · For: Episode 22: The War against Awkward Feelings
Haha you did just fine, DDTD. Especially for 13 year olds. Emotions are...... Very confusing to say the least, so being young like them and experiencing it would be strange for them. I'm 15 and still have difficulty understanding what I feel. So, again, with their feelings, especially this type, the most confusing of all, you did a fantastic job.
This was a really good chapter, DDTD. I'm actually sad to see this arc ending. I really enjoyed being with this team like this.
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 23/07/12 - 10:06 am · For: Episode 21: Fighting for Pride
Yep. I definitely love Kaze. She's just so great and awesome, yet kind and caring. She just needs to find herself more. I'm looking forward to see her, and this team, grow. If you were to make a story focused on this team, I'd be in love.
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 23/07/12 - 09:55 am · For: Episode 20: The Battle for Respect
So it seems like he feels like he's trying to be like his older sister. That's pretty sweet. Another thing I can understand *sigh*. It was an awesome fight, DDTD. The more I read about these characters, the more I love them. Now I'm off to read about Kaze and Choukan. Yeah!
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 23/07/12 - 09:42 am · For: Episode 19: Choukan
I'm loving this team more and more. I definitely like Kaze, mostly since I can relate to her a lot. But Choukan is so cool...... Gah, now I'm conflicted. Oh well. I do love Choukan's plan, though, and can't wait to see how it turns out. Your fight scene was really good in this. I never noticed before, but it seems almost like doing Karate has made it easier for me to visualize fights I read. Haha. If we ever get to the OCT, I'm eager to take you on.
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 23/07/12 - 09:29 am · For: Episode 18: Kaze
Sheesh. How can someone so nice be related tithe jerk , Soikoro? Kaze is so sweet. I love her. I can see how she'd be like Hinata, but she is also her own person. Hm...... It's strange to describe. But I like her! I really want to see her grow as a ninja. And cool test! I wanna read XD.
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 23/07/12 - 09:25 am · For: Episode 17: Futoji
Haha. Futoji is fun to read about. He seems to be the most laid back of the three. I liked seeing his view on everything, and I loved seeing the flashback because I was able to imagine Choukan as a little kid again XD. Great chapter, DDTD. I can't wait to see what looking through Kaze's eyes is like.
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 18/07/12 - 11:54 am · For: Episode 16: Tsunade's Office
Haha. I love when anyone ticks off Tsunade. It's so fun to read about. And Zabuza is trying to catch up. How sweet. As for Ross.... Looks like she's a kid at heart, but growing up is no fun anyway.
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 17/07/12 - 01:53 pm · For: Episode 15: Kakashi’s warning
Hm....... I'm just curious - why is it that nobody her own age likes Ross? Anyway, this was an.... interesting chapter. I didn't expect Kakashi to like her, too. I must say, if it's between Zabuza and anyone else, I'd say Kiba. I just think itfits more. No clue why, just do.
I do, however, love the fact that Kakashi would warn Zabuza first. Now that was great.
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 17/07/12 - 01:42 pm · For: Episode 14: Kohaku’s Scarecrow
I can so imagine the Kakashi thing, just because that's how he is. But I do wonder why he was there. I guess they bonded over the time skip or something.
I feel bad for Kiba, but I know he'll be fine. There's someone for everyone. As for Zabuza and Ross, they're so fun to read about. I love how everything is mostly normal with a bit of drama thrown in. I doubt that will last for very much longer, though.
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 17/07/12 - 01:32 pm · For: Episode 13: The Nightmare Returns
Hm..... With those red lines in the bracelet, it makes me wonder if something's wrong. And the Prophetess is suddenly back...... Could Interepono really be dying or something? Could the previous people be coming back? Great job, DDTD. Now you have my mind spinning.
I find to funny that you go from having the cute Kohaku moment to the tense moment of Kiba coming. I don't know why, but I findit amusing, and I can't wait to see what happens.
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 17/07/12 - 10:04 am · For: Episode 12: First time Dad
Awwww. That was so cute and sweet. I loved it. It was fun seeing Zabuza adjust, and I say younger spot on with how he'd act. And it's always great to see how Kohaku works. She's so determined and bright. It's so adorable. And I loved Choukan's appearance at the end, seeing as he's tied with Kohaku as my second favorite character. Anyway, off to read more.
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 17/07/12 - 09:53 am · For: Episode 11: The Eyes of Innocent Love
I had chills and I think I was crying in happiness at this chapter. It was just so darn sweet and cute and heart warming. This is my favorite moment in this story so far, and is in third place with favorite moment of the story (first being when she told Zabuza the truth of where she's from and second being when she stood up for taking Choukan with her). I'm so glad you made this in Zabuza's PoV. It made it even more complete. And I really love little Kohaku. I just loved this chapter and everything I'm it, especially seeing Zabuza's thoughts, both concerning Ross's growth and Kohaku.
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 17/07/12 - 09:41 am · For: Episode 10: The Missing Part of Me
Wow. Maybe I should listen to my instincts more often....... I cannot believe I was right there.
The scene was very sweet, and especially a turn around after the massacre only two chapters back. And now he gets to meet Kohaku....... Let the fun begin.
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 17/07/12 - 09:34 am · For: Episode 9: The River Front
For some reason my mind said Zabuza or something, and I have no clue why. Anyway, that was an epic battle scene, and I can't wait to find out who it is.
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 17/07/12 - 09:25 am · For: Episode 8: The Witch
*jumps up and down repeatedly*. Ohmygoshohmygoshoymygosh!!!! I remember Lance mentioning the Prophetess when he was thinking of the older people. I don't believe it was Jubilee. I think she was something else. Gah! I wanna go back, but I refuse to.
This was an amazing chapter. I enjoyed seeing this tough Ross. Near the end, after the incident with Choukan's family, it seemed to calm down, and the beginning of this was, too. So it was fun seeing Ross's tough ninja side again. The mission is over now, but the witch remains. Who is she?!
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 14/07/12 - 06:54 pm · For: Episode 7: Blood Streaked Justice
Wait, so there are traitors among them? Or are the other people calling them traitors for joining the group? I must know!
Haha. Cocky people never prosper in life. Take that, Ko! Though I do hate killing, at least he was shown he's not all that.
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 14/07/12 - 06:51 pm · For: Episode 6: Trapped in a Box
I loved this. I don't know why - maybe because of how easily she fooled them? And so, the infiltration now begins. I can't wait to see how this mission turns out.
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 26/06/12 - 09:05 am · For: Episode 5: Mission Objective
That bracelet sure is an amazing tool. I bet it's proven very helpful over the years. And it would be very hard to imagine Zabuza just not being there. I really hope that he comes back.
This was a great chapter, and I loved seeing Ross's fierceness. Well, off to read more!
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 26/06/12 - 08:55 am · For: Episode 4: The Life I Lead
Sheesh. With both your and Silverwolf's White Rose story, I'm falling in love with Kiba. Darn you! Oh well. They would make a cute pair, but I still love Zabuza x Ross. Darn, I'm so conflicted right now T_T. Anyway, great chapter. I'm off to read more.
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 23/06/12 - 09:27 am · For: Episode 3: Choukan’s Growth
I like Choukan more and more with each chapter I read about him. Watch out, Ross. You may have competition for my favorite XD. Anyway, I really enjoyed this chapter. It was a fun read and it makes me eager to see what will happen with Kaze's brother and this strategy thing they're doing. Off to read!
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 22/06/12 - 07:41 pm · For: Episode 2: Of Mothers and Babies
I love Kohaku. She is a lot like her mom. I love how much love there is in that family. I think I would have had to strangle Ross if she treated little Haku any other way. I loved seeing the interaction between the two babies. It was beyond adorable. It makes me miss Rugrats T_T.
I loved seeing through Ross's mind again. It was nice to see if she'd changed any mentally. If anything, not really. Of course, she has matured in some ways, but she still had that strong personality that I absolutely love.
This was a really great chapter. Sadly, I'm not sure I'll be able to read any more tonight. I've read 28 chapters today. I loved every last one of them, but I'm both mentally exhausted from reading and physically since I walk while I read. So, possibly good night and great chapter, DDTD.
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 22/06/12 - 07:29 pm · For: Episode 1: Haku
Yeah! That's right. You read that name correctly! I HAVE FINALLY FINISHED FIRE ESCAPE!!!!! You now have a total of 101 reviews from me, each for a different chapter that I absolutely loved. I don't know about you, but I'm proud of me. And every single chapter was so worth it. Now I just have to catch up with this one T_T. Then again, that means no cliffhangers for a while XD.
This was a good, heartwarming start. I really enjoyed having it in Choukan's PoV simply because he's one of my favorite characters. It's nice to see how much he's grown and how great he's becoming. Then again, he has been raised by Ross about half his life.
Ross is doing really good for herself, and I am so glad reading about her. Even if it was a short gap, getting from one story to another was too long a wait. And of course nobody wants to mess with her. Except me just because I love her.
Kohaku is so cute. I absolutely love her. I think the speech thing just makes her more lovable to me. I'm a big baby person, so yeah..... I can't wait to see her grow, and I love that she has a lot of Ross's personality. It'll make her so fun to watch grow.
I am so glad to have finished Fire Escape. This was so worth it and it has me stuck already. As for a series name..... How about From Fire to Ashes XD.
Name: RawrTheDinoLycan (Signed) · Date: 16/06/12 - 07:40 am · For: Episode 28: The Odd Friend
Wahoo! Drinking buddies are Anko and Genma? HELL YEAH! YOu go girl hahaha
Geeze, I feel like it's all about to hit the fan O.O
Name: purpledinosaur (Signed) · Date: 15/06/12 - 04:59 pm · For: Episode 28: The Odd Friend
Amazing chapter! I really liked that little scene with Zabuza, and I wonder what will happen since they're gonna be alone on the mission together XD
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Name: ShadowXNight13 (Signed) · Date: 15/06/12 - 11:55 am · For: Episode 28: The Odd Friend
'Everything will be all right' Zabuza says. thats a right thing to say :). and please dnt kill of lance... i'll miss his crazy orange hair... :( *goes back to *Fire Escape. tries to hug lance but misses* damn it...