It is very hard to find a Naruto fic that is of good quality and I commend you on pulling such a feet off. Your writing is excellent and my only wish is that you would update more often. However, I recognize that you are doing this on you own time and will respect your schedule and how often you update. Just please keep writing.
Just Finished what you have written. So far it is nicely done. I find it interesting to see how you have slightly changed the characters and environment to reflect the changed history. Keep Going!
It took you so looooong to update that I had forgotten about this story. It0s pure luck that I came accross it today. Man I had missed it. Please post ASAP.
AMAZING FIC! Please post asap.
Huh. Their reuinion is almost sad seeing as Naruto has to cover his face. I'm glad they are back together though. I do like the AU in this. The whole deal with Itachi and Minato is a bit more in depth than it was with Hiruzen and Itachi. I like it all so far.
Author's Response: Thank you again, you are very kind. And yes, Itachi is going to be an important character in this story, as will many others. I do hope I won't disappoint. Thank you!
Wow just wow. I'm ashamed at myself for not taking a look at this before. You my friend have just hooked a new reader.
Author's Response: Thank you for your very kind words!
Awesome story. Its fantastically well writen. I know that you are like ytrès busy, but please do update, cuz this story is really outstanding.
Author's Response: Thank you.I should be updating by the end of the week.
Again, great chapters. It was nice to get a look at how Sasuke may have realistically developed if his family was still alive, and he was pushed in much the same manner as he and Itachi always were when he was a kid.
Author's Response: Believe me, it drove me insane to figure out how some of the characters' personalities would've turned out had things been different. Actually, Sasuke wasn't that hard to figure out as he's, at least for me, a very easily understood character. Naruto is much, much harder, as I'm not as good a person as he is.
I just started reading this, a chapter here and there when I have time, and I just wanted to drop a line to say, it's very good. It's well-written, and I like how you've developed both Naruto and Minato, and how they interact together. It's cool to see things that are a little different than canon with the Yondaime Hokage in charge, and things that are still going the same way--in particular with the Uchiha and the Akatsuki. I like how you've kind of pulled in all the major events from canon and changed them a little, it's interesting and I'm looking forward to seeing how things play out. Great job!
Author's Response: First of all, thank you for reading and reviewing. I'm very happy that you seem to be enjoying this story. Second, I must apologise for the delay in replying to your review (my computer will not let me access this site because it's supposedly packed with harmful software) and because of the insane delay when it comes to posting new chapters. I'm very sorry about that, but I'm a med student, and this semester has been beyond hectic. So far, things are pretty canon in the fic. I will still use canon stuff, yes, but I'm planning on a big divergence at some point. I mean, it woukldn't be all that interesting if you just read what you already know thanks to Kishimoto-sensei, right? Blimey, I gotta go back already to my studies. *Sigh* Thanks again!
I am definitely hooked. The emotion was raw...deep and personal. An excellent job!
Author's Response: Thank you! It's truly brilliant to hear such praise coming from the readers. Domo arigatou!
Just finished reading the prologue...and I am very very intrigued. Nicely done!
Author's Response: Thank you! I do hope you will enjoy this fic.
Please, please, please update this fic. It's totally amazing, and it's already been like almost four months!
Author's Response: I'm really sorry for the dreadful delay. I can only say that this is being a semester from hell.
please submit soon this is by far the best story that i have found on this website
Author's Response: Thank you, I'm really grateful that you feel that way. Right now I'm sleep-deprived because of my exams at med school, but I can't wait for them to be over so that I can go back to writing. Thanks for the support!
Really awesome fic. I love your writing.
Author's Response: Thank you, I feel very honoured.
Ummm.. I Gotta Catch Up, Lop. But I Noticed You Made Jaraiya 54 And Minato 43. Huge Screw Up In The Timeline.
Author's Response:Actually, it took me a long time to figure out Nagato's and Minato's ages. I'm not saying that I didn't make a mistake, since we know so little, but it is nowehere specified.
rnrnWe know that Jiraiya was a chuunin when he took part in the second Shinobi World War, where he met the three Ame orphans, who were at that time 8-12, and left them three years later (Nagato-tachi: 11-15), and went back to Konoha to become a jounin and get his own squad.
rnMinato graduated from the Academy at the age of ten. Which makes Minato between one to five years younger than Nagato & Co.
rnYahiko died when he was 25-30 in the Third Shinobi World War, which would mean Minato would be between 24 and 25.
rnI imagine that Minato and Kushina did not get the baby straight away, so let's add a couple of years until Kushina got pregnant with Naruto: 26-27
rnThe Kyuubi attacked sixteen years before the start of canon. That makes Minato around 42-43, and Nagato would be 47-48.
rnJiraiya died when he was 54.
rnrnLike I said, it is all speculation, but all these facts I got them from the Narutopedia, so it wasn't just random. If I'm wrong, please do tell me.
Wow, that was awesome, please post asap!
Happy New Year to you too!
Author's Response: Unfortunately, I have exams at med school, so I won't be writing in January. But thank you, you are very kind!
Lol, you made me laughg!
Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad I made you laugh.
Awesome. This was really one great chapter. I hope you get to update soon!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Chapter Seven Ended Perfectly. Great Job So Far. Im Still Reading So Keep On Writing.
Author's Response: I'm glad that you are still enjoying the story. I'll post again soon.
Minato blinked at him. “Sometimes, you are so much like your mother, it’s uncanny,” he told him, deadpan. “She had always liked it, but did you know that in the early stages of her pregnancy, she became obsessed with the colour blue?” A smile darted its way to his lips, despite his previous mood. “Everything had to be blue – and I mean everything. The walls were blue, our clothes were blue, she dyed my hair blue and even tried to paint me blue.”
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Loved the half-chapter. Please post soon, this story is really great!
Author's Response: Haha, I'm glad that I made you laugh. Thank you for reviewing!
Oh yeah that was awesome. Rally enjoyed the fight with Itachi, and the end of the chapter was excellent!
Author's Response: Thank you! I admit, writing this type of action is not my forte.
Wow. This is awesome. Keep up the good work!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Can't wait to the other half of this chpter, it looks promising! Post again soon, pliz!
Author's Response: Yeah, sorry about that. I tend to write very long chapters, and they seem to exceed the limits here.
Wow. This was really well written. Good job!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Yupp. Job Well Done.
Author's Response: Thank you! I will post the next chapter tomorrow. I hope you'll like it, too.