Reviews For Insanity
Name: JubileeOfPuppies (Signed) · Date: 26/11/11 - 05:36 pm · For: Living nightmare
A demon? That's so cool! I love demons in scary stories, they give you so much to work with! Great twist, love this story more every chapte- What!? There's no more!? Update please! I neeeeeeds it! Okay not really, but I do really want it update. Please?
Name: JubileeOfPuppies (Signed) · Date: 26/11/11 - 05:32 pm · For: Venting
... Am I psychic? Just after I say I hope it gets spook, it does! YES! I must read for! You know, I thought of a plus to short chapters. You can write more of them faster, and it kind of gives the illusion of the story being longer than it is. Neat right? I really like this, so I must get to the next chapter
Name: JubileeOfPuppies (Signed) · Date: 26/11/11 - 05:28 pm · For: Talking
Very interesting story. I hope it get really creepy lol. I actually reviewed all of your chapters, but I forgot to sign in, so they're under anonymous :( ANyhow, good chapter, and don't worry too much about length, think for about the quality. That will make up for the shortness. Keep up the great work!
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 24/11/11 - 09:38 pm · For: Living nightmare
Oh... My... Freaking... Gosh...
I... Cannot say anything except that was pretty epic in a sick way. Now I really need to know what happens next. Please update soon. Please?
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 23/11/11 - 03:04 am · For: Venting
OMG! Just when Naruto and Sakura were getting all sweet and cozy, he leaves her to get attacked by a ghost?! My goodness, the suspense is killing me! Great job on this chapter! Your spelling is still a little off, but it was otherwise very good! Keep up the awesome work!
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 21/11/11 - 03:24 am · For: Talking
"I would believe you if you said you found Sasuke and he was pregnant with Orochimaru's baby."
Best line ever. ^^
Anyway, I can't wait to see how Naruto reacts to Sakura thinking she's going crazy. He'll either freak out or try to track down Sasori to re-kill him. Either way, I can't wait to find out! Keeep up the good work!
Author's Response: Lol glad you like that line! I couldn't resist! XD Thanks for reading!
Name: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: 20/11/11 - 01:57 pm · For: Voices
Spooky. I like! I noticed a little tense jumping, like saying Sakura needs, instead of Sakura needed. I do that a lot... Anyway, I like how Naruto calls her, "Saku'chan." It's cute, and she'd kill him in the anime. You portray their relationship in a very nice innocent way.
Author's Response: Wow, really? I didn't notice that I did that... *_*' I'll be more careful next time. I'm glad you like the Sakura and Naruto interaction! ^.^
Name: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: 20/11/11 - 01:52 pm · For: Confusion and frustration
Horror stories are indeed hard to come by. May I suggest that you write a little more for each chapter? Other than that little detail, this is a nice change in writing genre.
Author's Response: Yeah... I've been trying to write longer chapters.
Name: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: 20/11/11 - 01:49 pm · For: Writing
Why so short? I was enjoying it so much! Ha ha, nice job. I'm usually kind of picky, but I liked this. On to the next chapter!
Author's Response: Well i'm glad you enjoyed it so far! :)
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 18/11/11 - 04:42 pm · For: Voices
First off, just to let you know, half of this chapter was italicized, so I'm guessing you forgot to place the reverse html tag at the end of your italics.
Anways, this chapter was really cute right up until the spooky part. I love the idea of Naruto and Sakura being so friendly with one another, it's really sweet. Then the part where Sasori comes in was completely scary and had me shivering a bit.
There were more spelling and grammar mistakes than normal, just slow down with your writing, and remember to check what you're writing.
Other than that, great job on this chapter. Keep up the awesome work.
Author's Response: Yeah... alot of times I write the chapters late at night so they have mistakes. *_*' Thank you for the reviews! I just love reveiws. Thank you!
Name: Rezzalia (Signed) · Date: 17/11/11 - 09:56 pm · For: Confusion and frustration
Again, great job! The only thing I really have to say you should fix is how much you say Sakura does something or Sakura says something. After so many "Sakura this" and "Sakura that" it starts to sound very bland. Unless another female character comes in, it'll be okay to say "she" more often. ^^ Anyway! I can't wait for the next update!
Author's Response: O.k. I will definitely work on that. And thanks again for liking the story. :)
Name: Rezzalia (Signed) · Date: 17/11/11 - 09:53 pm · For: Writing
Oooohhhh! Interesting! :D I've never read a Naruto-based horror fic before, but so far, I'm liking it! Great job!
Author's Response: Well i'm glad you like it! ^-^
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 17/11/11 - 03:20 am · For: Confusion and frustration
I really do like this. There aren't too many ghost stories out there, and I kinda like where this is going. There are still some mistakes, I would recommend reading through it slowly to spot anything that seems out of place or something. But other than that, I continue to enjoy Sakura's awful nightmares and disturbed feelings ;D Keep up the good work!
Author's Response: Haha thank you.
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 16/11/11 - 03:27 am · For: Writing
Holy crap, this is like a horror story! And it's brilliant so far! I loved the suspense of this chapter, it was written really well. Even if it was short, it was still really suspenseful and interesting. There were a few mistakes in capitalization and spelling and such, but I really liked this anyway. Keep up the awesome work with this!
Author's Response: Thankyouthankyouthankyou!!! This review made my night! I will fix the mistakes and stuff too. XD