Reviews For Drawn Together
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 12/04/12 - 01:52 pm · For: Surprise! Ezra Kokoro’s Friends!
Sheesh, tons of Ezras....... And you have the people from BELIEVE! I couldn't believe it when Kyoan mentioned the Assemblage. That was a very intriguing twist. So, there's a ton of different universes in this or something, right? And I absolutely loved this chapter. It makes me wonder if Reloe will appear and just who Ezko is. Darn it! So many questions.
Author's Response: Thanks! You'll see what'll happen next...
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 11/04/12 - 06:56 am · For: Ezra Kokoro's Profile
Yeah, you can use Yuki, that's fine :)
Author's Response: Thanks!
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 10/04/12 - 07:48 pm · For: Surprise! Ezra Kokoro’s Friends!
Who are the two? Who are the two?! Gah, I really want to know now!
And seriously? More Ezra's? Or... Ezko, whatever... Same thing... I can't deal with so many Ezra's :P
Awesome update, theez! This just gets more and more interesting!
Author's Response: Thanks! Is it okay if I use Yuki Ookami? I just want the OK.
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 24/03/12 - 05:14 pm · For: Ezra Causes Confusion
Holy cow. This is so.... Well, I wanna say sad because the shy Ezra from here is taking all the credit for what the fight-loving Ezra is doing....... Okay, this just isn't right. That's just too cruel to poor Ezra K. I feel so bad for the guy T_T
And what the heck, Ezra (U/H)!? Why in the world would you except something that makes you hurt random innocents? *sigh* Never, ever let him not fight for a week again.
Author's Response: Haha! Sorry, I'll write another chapter soon. Oh, and about Yosuke, if he was paralyzed, I didn't read or remember. Or you didn't write. But hey, that's how it goes. I'll make that happen.
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 24/03/12 - 05:04 pm · For: The First Mission
Wow. Ezra U/H is with the bad guys in this...... I didn't exactly see that one coming. So, is he like from his own universe and teleported there or something? Darn it. Now you're making it impossible not to read more and find out. This is just so interesting.
Oh, and I'm really sad that they're still fighting (or possibly were). I really hope they can work it all out.
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 24/03/12 - 04:49 pm · For: The Conspiracy. A Bitter End.
Oh boy. First two Akemis, and now two Ezras. That's going to get confusing to someone. Quite possibly me =P. But it is a nice twist to suddenly have the other Ezra appear. I really want to know what his purpose is and how his appearance will change everything. And you've got me even more curious about this Arrangement of DarkLight. Oh, and Kyoan is a big buttmunch.
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 24/03/12 - 04:44 pm · For: Together Is Broken! Ezra, Defend the Peace!
Sheesh. I read this a long time ago, and I just now did remember I needed to review it.
It was an amazing chapter, Theez. I'm really curious about this Arrangement of DarkLight. And I find it interesting that you have Sakurako on it (at least I think you do since she could do the same teleport thing the old man could). Oh, and one other thing. I think (I'm not entirely sure) that I had Yosuke being paralyzed from the waist down, so did you just forget or what? I'm not mad if you did. If it fits your story, you can change it, but I was just wanting to see.
I really hope this fighting stops soon. I'm ticked at the old man for creating all this chaos. Stupid old dude =P.
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 22/03/12 - 04:00 pm · For: Ezra Causes Confusion
Drama, haha. I love it!
My only issue is that since there are two Ezra's, can you sometimes put in Kokoro and Uchiha/Hyuuga? To make it easier to distinguish?
Anyway, good job!
Author's Response: I will. Thanks!
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 20/03/12 - 06:18 pm · For: The First Mission
Oh my gosh, with Ezra Uchiha / Hyuuga involved in this universe, everything is going to be flipped upside down! I feel so nervous for everyone in this story, I feel like something isn't going to end well!
Awesome update, theez! Keep up the awesome work!
Author's Response: Thanks! This should be awesome!
Name: shadow9000 (Signed) · Date: 17/03/12 - 10:39 am · For: Ezra Kokoro's Profile
but kokoro and uchiha/hyuga will be kool
xDD
Kool thinkin bro xD
Oh and Happy new Year :P
Author's Response: Thanks!
Name: shadow9000 (Signed) · Date: 17/03/12 - 10:14 am · For: The Conspiracy. A Bitter End.
lol some of our OCs are not introduced yet xD
And where have u been dude...?
LOOOOOOOONG time no see =OO
Author's Response: I know. I'll introduce them in the next chapter, I'm writing it right now!
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 17/03/12 - 06:51 am · For: The Conspiracy. A Bitter End.
?!?!?! Ezra Uchiha / Hyuuga?!?! That's so crazy! Now there are two Ezra's! Whoa, I can't wait to see what happens with this. And Ezra's dad is a real jerk, seriously. Awesome installment, it's good to see you around. Keep up the awesome work!
Author's Response: Thanks!
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 07/10/11 - 03:22 am · For: Ezra's Mother! The Secret's Of His Last Name!
Yeah! Ezra is loved! I mean, I know he was by Hinata, but he never felt his parent's love. I feel so bad for him in all of your stories (speaking of which, why is it that I seem to find myself needing to catch up in your awesome stories the most, because I'm now behind in BOTH as well *sigh*). I hope that he does get to revisit his mother, because I like seeing him happy like he was right then. It was a really sweet chapter, and I can't wait to see what's going to happen next (which I now can). It was an awesome chapter, Theez. I absolutely loved it!
Name: shadow9000 (Signed) · Date: 06/10/11 - 08:21 pm · For: Together Is Broken! Ezra, Defend the Peace!
woah...!!
Fights after fights.....
This is getting intense.... :O
haha....
Y r all planing against ezra...?? O.o
oh..... I think i knw.....
Its Ezra's father's association right...?
N ezra didnt join it or didnt join it.... Thanx to his mom i guess...
N they wantd him in bcoz of his kekkei genkai.... Bt since he isnt..... They want to gt rid of him in anger.... N they r continuing they kilin streak n using ezra as bait fr revenge....
Awesome chapter....!! :D
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 06/10/11 - 05:48 pm · For: Together Is Broken! Ezra, Defend the Peace!
Haha, two Akemi's. I think it's funny. It's a good thing they don't look alike, or I might just get confused XD
Wow! The story is really picking up! This is so exciting! All this epicness and deceit and betrayal and stuff, it's awesome! I'm loving this! Keep up the good work!
Name: shadow9000 (Signed) · Date: 03/10/11 - 10:00 pm · For: Ezra's Mother! The Secret's Of His Last Name!
aww
wasnt tht cute.....
He finally met his mom.....
A random question.....
Cn kekkei genkais b taught...???
Antother random que..... Is kaz coming in this story....? :P
anyways.....
It was a cool chapter.....
Update soon plz....
Author's Response: Thanks!rnrnI'm not sure if they can be, but I knew that Tsunade didn't have a Kekkei Genkai, so...rnrn
Kaz is coming, no worries! Thanks again!
Name: SabakuNoAkane (Signed) · Date: 03/10/11 - 08:41 pm · For: Ezra's Mother! The Secret's Of His Last Name!
Ooh the plot thickens (: lol
Name: SabakuNoAkane (Signed) · Date: 03/10/11 - 08:40 pm · For: Ezra's Mother! The Secret's Of His Last Name!
Ooh the plot thickens (: lol
Name: SabakuNoAkane (Signed) · Date: 03/10/11 - 08:33 pm · For: The Date
Lol cute chapter :)
Name: SabakuNoAkane (Signed) · Date: 03/10/11 - 08:30 pm · For: Ezra's Confession.
Aww cute chapter (:
Name: SabakuNoAkane (Signed) · Date: 03/10/11 - 07:44 pm · For: Ezra Kokoro's Profile
Aw crap, shoot me now, I just looked at the other reviews to see if you has already has a sword submission - and whattya know, you do. and she was named Akemi too. Of course. Oh yes. please shoot me lol I feel like a nincompoop. greeeat. lol
Author's Response: That's okay. I'll still use her the way she is. Thanks!
Name: SabakuNoAkane (Signed) · Date: 03/10/11 - 07:38 pm · For: Join!
Hmm... here's one for sword wielder
Name: Akemi Hiiroken (Name means "bright scarlet-sword)
Age: 23
Appearance:
Has dark red hair that reaches just past her shoulder blades and is parted on her right side with nose length bangs pulled to the side though falling across her forhead and left eye. She has bright, intelligent green eyes, and usually a half smirk on her lips. She wears a creme tunic lined with red that crosses low on her chest revealing a dark red tank underneath the tunic reaches halfway down her thighs and is split on the left side up to its red belt that rests on the top of her hips. She wears dark red leggings reaching just past her knees. She also wears light red knee pads and bandages under her kunai pouch on her right thigh. On her right forearm she wears a dark red leather bracer used for blocking attacks. (she weilds her sword with her left arm). She also wears a bandage on her left arm with a string tied around it.
Family: She never talks about it, so no one knows.
Romance: Kakashi
Past: She lived a hard life, but little else is known about it as she never talks about it. She is a superb sword fighter known around the world, yet no one knows who she trained with.
Personality: Easygoing, yet can be extremely serious, will never let anyone down, optimistic yet realistic. Will never ever give up. Although she typically travels and works alone, she makes great friends everywhere she goes. She and Kakashi are in love, but they rarely see eachother, knowing that they each have things they need to focus on.
Introduced: When Ezra and team are in the city, a foreigner gets irritated with Ezra and is picking on him, then he tries to slice Ezra when his back is turned, Akemi easily deflects it, and tells the stranger he has bad manners...
Fighting abilities: One of the best sword fighters, probably the best current one. Also skilled at throwing weapons, though prefers her sword, which she wields left handed. She can perform jutsu, but rarely does, only when she loses or leaves her sword, as the seals require two hands - although she has developed a few using her sword. She can cast genjutsu taught to her by Kakashi, but doesn't use it as it "isn't her style". Her bright steel sword turns increasingly more red the more blood that is shed by it during a fight. It is indicative of the chakra Akemi stores in it as the battle progresses which leads to her Kekkei Genkai:
She can use chakra she stores in her sword (which she only does during battle so as not to give her sword away immediatly) to create bright red chakra around her sword, this can extend and even shoot out towards enemies.
... I only ask that you do not use this character other than here, if you choose to use it at all, this is based off a character I am going to be using myself.
Btw good story so far :D
Name: SabakuNoAkane (Signed) · Date: 03/10/11 - 06:14 pm · For: Introduction!
I liked this - my only thing was how all the talking is together in a paragragh. It might read easier if you made a few shorter paragraphs... and also, it was confusing in a couple places where you said a name right after someone talked - but it wasn't that person, it was the beginning of the next person talking.
Otherwise, I liked it, and look forward to seeing how it develops.
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 03/10/11 - 06:11 pm · For: Ezra's Mother! The Secret's Of His Last Name!
Ah, haven't seen this in a while :D And wow, with an interesting chapter involving a sweet reunion, very nice ^^ Ezra and Hoshi are so sweet together already. I'm glad he finally has a parent to be with him.
Great job! Keep up the awesome work with all of your stories!
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 05/09/11 - 08:26 am · For: Ezra Kokoro's Profile
Okay, well, more on Krino. Most of the information I have on him is in the Prologue. He's very protective of Kina. He's been raised since birth to protect her. A Jikoku's job has always been to keep the Katachi clan protected due to them saving them a long time ago. He'll do anything to protect her. But he also wants to protect others. As seen in the Prologue, he will kill to protect her. And that was when he was nine (he's a year older than Kina). He was then captured by Yuma and Toshiro, though. I can tell that he will be in Konoha by the time Kasumi would be in Konoha, though I will not tell you how he gets there or why he's there. He's very good at the Jikoku's kekkei genkai to use time, but he is not strong enough to completely strong enough at nine. If you want him to be in Shippuuden, you can because I might just do that, too. He can also use fire techniques, as demonstrated by him using the Fire aura jutsu to burn a hole in the church to escape. Is there any other information you need?
Author's Response: Nah, that's enough! Thanks!