Reviews For Gates at Dawn
Name: Kym Hatake (Signed) · Date: 29/08/12 - 08:02 am · For: Chapter 1
I just noticed that there are no reviews to this story. But I liked your summary and so decided to give it a shot. I was not dissappointed.
I think you managed to catch the moment pretty well. While I prefer longer stories I like it how you describe a moment that is very short but has so many fears and thoughts in it.
But I think you could have reflected on Irukas relief a bit longer and I don't really get why Kakashi calls him "Iruka-Sensei" in a moment like this.
Otherwise nice one-shot.
Thanks for your time and effort
Me