Reviews For Naruto GX
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 13/06/11 - 06:23 am · For: Chapter 6: Ezra and Sasuke's Mission
Sweet jutsu. I'd hate to have to fight him. He's awesome with both his strength and personality. I can't wait to read more. Good thing I can =)
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 13/06/11 - 06:15 am · For: Chapter 5: Siblingly Love
I love this story. I didn't think I'd liked it, but after forcing myself to finally try to read it, I found out I LOVE it! I'm so glad I try new things sometimes.
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 12/06/11 - 04:21 pm · For: Chapter 4: Dr. Crowler meet's Ezra.... again!
One, Crowler seems nicer in this fanfic than in the show. Maybe he's just that way to Erza, which I'd understand. It's a great chapter by the way. Two, I just now remembered that you told me to tell you about Harro's deck. Yeah, it's basically like Hitomi's deck. He's got a new Holy and Chaos card after giving them to Hitomi.
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 12/06/11 - 03:58 pm · For: Chapter 3: The Race
Go Erza! The race was interesting yet deadly. I'm not so sure I would have wanted to participate in it. It was, like the others, a great chapter.
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 12/06/11 - 03:56 pm · For: Chapter 2: 10 Years later....
Short but good. I'm a little afraid because I'm not sure how long before Orochimaru comes for Erza. I hope it's never. Anyway, I'm off to read more. Once again, thanks for putting these chapters us again!
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 12/06/11 - 03:54 pm · For: Chapter 1: Memories
Other than a few spelling mistakes I saw, it was awesome. You made the same mistake I used to with aloud and allowed. I can't wait to read more. This is very creative and original. I'm so glad you redid these chapters or I'd be hopelessly lost.
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 12/06/11 - 10:09 am · For: OC's invitation!
Name: Hitomi Yamamoto
Age: 15
Gender: Female
Rank: Slifer (since she's in GX, I didn't know what else to put)
Series: Yu Gi Oh GX
Family: Mother: Aiko
Father: Toshiro
Twin Brothers: Taro and Tora
Older brother: Harro
Sister: Yumi
Transformations: None
History: Her parents own a card shop. Her older brother, Harro, is a well known duelist around the world. When she was young, Harro taught her about dueling. Since then she's been improving her skills. She was only now allowed to go to the academy because her parents just now got money.
Crush: Syrus
Deck: Fanmade - Fallen Angels deck. Top four cards are Chaos the Fallen Angel and Holy the Fallen Angel. Chaos is more for attack and Holy is more for defense. Another card is Avenging Angel, the fusion of Chaos and Holy. The last card is Rising Angel Child, which can become Heaven's Angel when you use the Rising Light spell card, but she doesn't get that until later on. All of these but Angel Child were given to her by her brother. She found this rare card in a Fallen Angel's duel pack.
Goal: To beat her brother.
I haven't read the other part of the story, but I was told chapter 50 was the deadline and I wanted to get my character in.
Author's Response: Cool character! Fallen Angels, that is a pretty cool deck. And a crush on Syrus, I did not see that coming, but cool! She sounds a lot like Syrus, since Zane is his older brother, and Harro is her older brother. By the way, can you give me a good description on Harro's deck, I'm planning on some Duel action between Her and Him, and Ezra VS Harro. But if it's the same type of deck, just tell me. I'm re-writing Chapter's ten and eleven today, so don't worry! You'll know what happen's soon enough!
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 09/06/11 - 05:28 pm · For: Christmas Morning!
Thank goodness! He finally got a gift! Seriously, if he didn't get one, I was considering... nah, I won't tell you since I don't have to commit such a terrible act now ;D
Christmas has come, yay for presents! I loved all the presents you showed. And Ezra got a sword, how awesome! Good job with this chapter, it was great!
Hmm, if I come up with a character, I'll definitely post quickly. And I think I'll tell Sasaui to join as well, since she wanted to read this before.
Well anyways, keep up the great work!
Author's Response: I was planning to get him a sword, I just couldn't spoil it for you! Sorry. Yes, yay for Christmas and presents! Sorry I haven't updated since the Christmas morning chapter, I just want to get the Chapter's that were down re-written for Sasaui and other's who want to read. But once thats done, I'm back on track! Thanks!
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 09/06/11 - 01:26 pm · For: Chapter 11: Hinata's Care! Ezra's landed in.... Slifer?!
Up to here is gone. I'd been wanting to read it, but well...... I'll read the other chapters soon, but for a few days I'm not going to have internet service =(
Author's Response: I know, sorry............I'll put them back soon, as long as I know what has happened.........I'm still sort of waiting to see if they come back, this has happened to a lot of people......... Again, sorry!
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 09/06/11 - 11:03 am · For: The Christmas Party!
Aww, a party, how sweet. And at least Ezra wasn't partnerless for the dance. Well, can't wait to see how Christmas actually goes... presents for Ezra perhaps? *hint hint* Haha, keep up the good work. And now I'm going to go read your other story.
Author's Response: Oh, thanks! You didn't have to, but it will explain some stuff. But enough of that, you'll see in the next chapter, which I'm writing now! Thanks, and bye!
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 09/06/11 - 10:34 am · For: Christmas Is Almost Here! Ezra Is Finally Home!
Yeah.... I'm heartbroken again. Darn you! Seriously, more info on Ezra's past continues to make me so sad inside. It's so disheartening.
Seriously, Ezra needs to get a gift this Christmas. If you don't give him one, I'm getting something for him myself! Yeesh, let's hope someone's nice to him and defies Hiashi.
Hmm, I've been meaning to ask to, but I honestly kept forgetting (hehe, my bad). I know you had still wanted characters, I'm not too sure when the deadline was. But if you're running out of people, I could submit another if you really wanted.
Anyways, I would like to see some Christmas spirti... in June...? Keep up the great work!
Author's Response: Hey, it would be nice to have another character, but you don't have to if you don't want. Although, if it's a she, I can't make it Ezra's next girlfriend. Sorry about breaking your heart............And it would be nice if I had another OC that I hadn't created that was working for.........Ganon! But you don't have to..................... But if you want to add another OC, be my guest. By the way, if you want a sort of preview into the next book, there's another that I wrote called The Legend Of Kingdom Hearts Z: Gundalian Invader's. It happen's during this book, but it explains a lot that is going on.
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 08/06/11 - 02:42 pm · For: Ezra Has Changed!? Darkness Flows In His Heart!
Ezra was possessed?! Didn't see that one coming. Seriously, what an intense battle. It was amazing. And everything ended well. Can't wait to see what else you come up with for the upcoming twists. I'm sire that whatever it is, it will give me whiplash ;D Keep up the great work!
Author's Response: Ezra was possessed, that is true. I love writing battles, they are so fun! And I also loved the ending. I don't know if what is said in the next chapter is a twist or not, but it might be........Thanks!
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 08/06/11 - 11:12 am · For: The Truth Behind Ren!
It's Ezra?! Wait, what?! WHAT?!?!?! There are so many twists in this story, seriously. I don't understand! Get the next chapter out soon because now my head hurts from all of the random possibilities and explanations running through my brain. Why is Ezra Ren?! I'm so confused!
Author's Response: Sorry! Nice twist, huh. Sorry about your head hurting............I can't tell you anything! Thanks!
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 08/06/11 - 07:35 am · For: Hinata and Naruto Have Gone To The Next Level! A Switch Color Transformation?!
Another epic battle! Great work. Naruto and Hinata have finally gone Super and are just as strong. Nice job. Just be sure to not constantly bring Sora and Hiashi in just to lose, it will become overplayed and predictable, and no one wants a story like that. Keep progressing the story, that's all.
Nice job though. Keep up the good work, you're doing great!
Author's Response: Oh, Sorry about that.............They are just like the only enemy they all have that can fight, you know what I mean? Although Zetsu is still out there............. Oh well. The next chapter will be a huge twist, trust me. Thanks!
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 07/06/11 - 06:14 pm · For: Sasuke Can't Fight Sora Without Ezra? Ren is the Perfect Substitute!
Oh gosh, where is Ezra, darn it?! And who is Ren? He seems really interesting, I'd like to know more about him. This is going very well, and you continue to leave me in suspense. Keep up the good work, I can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Ren is pretty much a filler for Ezra, except not in Slifer and has no deck. Thanks for all of the review's!
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 06/06/11 - 06:09 pm · For: Hinata's not Buying it! Ezra Can't Hide Everything!
What?! He's leaving?! What happened to Ezra! Gah, forget the heartbreak, you're giving me whiplash with all of these twists! And yet... I'm so loving it! I definitely never know what to expect. I love it! You've always got me on my toes! Excellent, great work! Can't wait to see what happens next! Keep up the fantastic work!
Author's Response: Sorry! A lot of stuff happened to Ezra. A lot more than this chapter explained. Again, thanks! Oh yeah, and thanks for reviewing so much, I really like it!
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 06/06/11 - 02:45 pm · For: Trunks is Baffled! Things weren't supposed to happen so quickly!
Yup.... I'm still heartbroken. Don't worry, after the next chapter comes out, I'm sure I'll be okay *hint get the chapter out soon hint*
I was expecting Ezra to go crazy once he went all Super Sayain, but I guess its for the better. Can't have him destroying Duel Academy, I suppose.
I will say that that was sort of unexpected yet very mature of Ezra to shake her hand and want to be friends. It was very... I don't know, Ezra of him...?
Nice work with this, I definitely look forward to more.
Author's Response: Hehe..........I'm working on it now. Sorry to break your heart.....I guess around a Super Sayain, a Super Sayain doesn't go crazy. But thats fine! Ezra wanting to be her friend, I had that planned from the start. Thanks!
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 06/06/11 - 06:58 am · For: Ezra and Yuki are a sweet tag-team! The Truth Behind Sakura!
Yuki and Lee?! Seriously?! Gosh, you're killing me.
Oh, I'm sorry I spooked you out in my previous review. Don't fret, I'm just being my usual over-dramatic self.
That was a pretty awesome duel. I love tag-team duels, they're so much fun. Nice work with it. And Ezra's mom is so cold to Yuki, but I guess that's only fair. Yeesh, does literally everyone know except for Ezra and Yuki? Oh darn, I love their relationship.
Anyways, I look forward to more. This continues to wow me, what with all the twists and whatnot. Keep up the great work! And if I haven't told you, you've really improved in your writing since the first chapter ;D
Author's Response: Sorry for killing you. :D It's fine, and did I explain that Hinata and Sora will not be married? I just need to clear that up. I love Tag-Teams as well, and yes, pretty much everyone that has to do with DBZ in that chapter and Naruto know. To bad they can't do anything about it or some people will just blip out of existence..........But oh well. I think you told me about the first chapter a few times. Thanks!
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 04/06/11 - 03:42 pm · For: Yuki see's her parents! The Afterlife is a small world!
Ohmygod, I can't believe you're going to do that! Yuki's still going to break his heart?! Why, why, WHY?! You are so cruel! And Hinata's still going to marry Sora?! What the heck?! Why are you doing this to me, this is just torture to know everything in the future!
*deep breaths for the next 10 minutes*
Okay, now that I have ranted, I will confess that I am very pleased with how you are handling this story. Of course, I'm... upset that Yuki will be out of the picture eventually, but you are a very good writer to challenge your characters and make them go through such situations. It will be interesting to see how this turns out.
I liked this chapter.... well, the beginning at least. You completely tore me apart during that last scene, but I'll get over it.... I hope.... maybe.... eventually.... perhaps.
Keep up the great work you have going with this story. Can't wait for more, definitely!
Author's Response: No, no, no, thats not how it go's. Trunks's future was bad, and this one is good. Sora and Hinata will not be married, and Yuki will break his heart, but all will be well, do not worry. And Yuki will still be a friend, just Naruto and Sasuke will be giving her a cold shoulder............Ezra is nice, right? Sorry about tearing you apart, I hope you do recover................Was any of that serious? But back on topic, Trunks was right........AHHHHH, to many spoilers! Sorry............about making you know bad stuff, sorry that I didn't make it clear that almost none of it will actually happen......Thanks, and again, Sorry!
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 01/06/11 - 06:47 am · For: Chapter 27: Ezra and Yuki's decks! The first of the exams!
Sweetness! Yuki's deck is amazing, just like I had hoped! Great duels here, they were awesome! And what?! Sasuke now has a girlfriend?! Definitely did NOT see that one coming. But hey, at least now he's happy and he can't tease anyone else about being a couple. And I also would just like to say that Jaden is such a snoop for watching Ezra and Yuki through the window.
Anyways, nice job as always. Can't wait for more, keep up the great work!
Author's Response: Yes, I had that idea with Yuki's deck being awesome, but I had no idea what abilities that her cards should have, then I thought, "What if I gave her a card that could instantly win her a duel?" Then I figured Dark Wolf out, and Whala! A winning deck! Sasuke having a girlfriend, that was a fast decision. But oh well.......... I'm working on a story that takes place during this one, called The Legend Of Kingdom Hearts Z: Gundalian Invaders. It takes place during this story, but the two story's will meet in summer break. Thanks!
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 31/05/11 - 06:54 am · For: Chapter 26: Hiashi as Evil as Ever! The New Curse Mark.
Awwwwww!!!!!!
Such a cute ending! Of course, Hiashi completely turning evil was such a great twist, making this chapter really cool. It's so sad about Ezra's duel monsters, though. It makes sense for their reasoning, but it's still so depressing!
Loved this chapter so much! I especially can't wait for more now! Keep up the great work, this is going really good now!
Author's Response: Thanks! I really am enjoying this! I really like Ezra X Yuki. Duel Spirits have Ego's, we all know that........ But Oh well, at least he has a few rare cards now!
Name: theez (Signed) · Date: 27/05/11 - 09:56 am · For: Chapter 1: Memories
Just so people know, there are still spots open for OCs. Once I'm done with like Chapter Forty I might have to stop, but if It's a character I'm always happy to accept! Also, they don't have to be good guys, they can be evil if you want!
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 26/05/11 - 07:47 am · For: Chapter 25: Sasuke is Tricked? Sakura and Lee have a surprise of their own!
Aww, that is so cute! I totally saw that one coming!..... Okay, that's a complete lie. Ezra's feelings for Yuki completely took me by surprise, but I love cute little romances, so all is good! And the fight was epic, as your battles always are. Of course, I am so angry at Sakura and Lee for spying, they ruined a great chapter ending, darn it! And I really enjoyed hearing about Ezra's past. It was so unexpected, but it fits so well, especially when it deals with his difficulty to accept someone else's love for him. But I'm glad Yuki and Ezra are together, I wonder how her mission will end up. Again, darn Sakura and Lee!
I love this story so much, keep up the great work with your writing. This is really good, please keep up the great work! Your improvement is really showing, good job!
Author's Response: Thanks! And yes, Sakura and Lee make me angry to! And they have Super Forms to! I loved righting the ending with Yuki and Ezra kissing and all of that, and Sasuke and everyone else [the reason I say Sasuke is that he and Ezra share a close bond] supporting them was fun to write! I am in the middle of the next chapter as we speak [I might be able to finish it to!] So hopefully I'll update soon. Thanks!
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 24/05/11 - 07:36 pm · For: Chapter 1: Memories
Since you are allowing OCs to enter, I figured you could probably consider this a joint story. I made joint stories a challenge under my name. You can submit this to my challenge, it's called 'Joint Stories!'
Author's Response: I just did! Thanks for issuing this Challenge!
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 24/05/11 - 07:00 pm · For: Chapter 24: Jaden VS Ezra! Two Awesome Duelists!
Dang... You make Yuki so heartless... Great! I couldn't have written her better myself, excellent work! Ezra vs. Yuki was epic, in all of its wolf/ninja goodness! And of course, Jaden and Ezra's duel was pretty cool. It was depressing to hear that Ezra was slowly losing confidence in himself, but at least everyone was able to cheer him up. Well, except for Yuki, who makes him feel worst.
But anyways, I can't wait to see how the next chapter goes! This is going good, keep up the great work!
Author's Response: Thanks! Yuki is really fun to write about! I'm having fun with Ezra and Yuki's relationship, it just seems like a good thing to make it that Ezra would love to be her friend, but she just turns him down like he's nothing. But enough of that, I was putting off Jaden VS Ezra for the right time, and it seemed like a good enough time. Thanks!