Reviews For The White Rose
Name: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: 18/07/11 - 04:00 pm · For: Supermassive Black Hole
omg loved it can't wait till next update I dident think Anna was acting fan girlish at all I thing she has a really good personality anyways awsome!!!!
Author's Response: Aw, thank you very much! I'm glad you liked it! And it's quite relieving to hear that Anna was not too fangirlish. Originality was a huge factor that prompted the idea for this story, so I didn't want the female protagonist to be sickeningly fangirl-like. Thank you so much for the kind review! And thanks for giving my story the light of day! I appreciate your thoughts!
Name: MelissaInWonderland (Signed) · Date: 18/07/11 - 06:13 am · For: Supermassive Black Hole
Yay, you finally updated! I've really been looking forward to the new chapter after such a long time. And seriously, your story is just... AMAZING!
Everything is really well written, good descriptions and narration aswell, 'cause I just tend to get bored of excessive dialogue. Doesnt help that I always end up reading well beyond any humans capibility of staying awake xD
And FINALLY a good story with Kiba as the main character! (Raise your hand if you have Kiba needs. -raises hand hyperactively:D) There just arent enough with him to be honest, he's just so jshfkjsdfkdgfdg right? :D xD (Hello, my name's Melissa and I'm a Kibaholic. Hellooo Melissa.)
Moving on from my fan girl stage, just want to let you know this is really good stuff and HURRY UP AND GET THE NEXT CHAPTERS UP, but don't feel rushed or pressured in any way ^^ haha. Keep up the good work love! I'll be sure to stalk this hourly expecting new stuff :) x
Author's Response: Oh my goodness, a new reviewer! And with such positive feedback as well! Thank you so much! I'm so honored that you like my story so much! It's really flattering and quite motivating. Haha, I'm a Kibaholic as well, and I'm proud of it too! He's amazing, and I agree with you that there just aren't any good Kiba docs in this world. Quite a shame. But oh man, thank you for such a motivating and exciting review! I appreciate it so much! Thanks a lot!
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 13/07/11 - 08:22 pm · For: Supermassive Black Hole
Seeing as my eyes hurt they want to close so much, this is the only chapter I can read. It's an amazing, well-written, completely original story. Complete epicness through and through. The characters were, well, in character. It drew me in like that black hole and refused to release me from its grip until the end. Now my eyes are complaining at me while my brain is telling me to thank you for providing it with such great awesomeness.
HOLY MONKEY TURDS! THE EVIL MONKEY JUST JUMPED OUT OF MY CLOSET!
Remind me to stop reviewing stories when I'm tired..... Well, at least chocolate monkeys aren't attacking this time. Man, monkeys really don't like me.......
Since I can't get my mind to focus on the review, I'm going to have to end it by saying great job, can't wait to read more, and good night.
Author's Response: Wow, I'm so honored that you decided to read this. Haha, don't worry about only reading this chapter, I'm flattered you read any of it at all. Plus, I don't want your eyes to burn out or anything, I'd feel really bad that reading my story did that to you. Yay for originality! Sort of what I was going for! Ah, well, you're welcome for providing the awesomeness... Hmm, it was that awesome? Wow, thanks for the compliment! *sweatdrop* I'm beginning to wonder why monkeys don't like you? Honestly, I'd rather have the chocolate monkeys instead of the evil monkey. Mmm... chocolate... What the heck, I just had chocolate ice cream, and now I need more chocolate? I'm definitely going to get a bad addiction... Thanks a bunch for deciding to even glance at this story! It seriously means a lot! And thanks even more for reviewing, I appreciate all of your kind feedback! Good night!
Name: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: 10/07/11 - 09:43 pm · For: Sweet Dreams
plz keep righting this is awsome
Author's Response: Actually, this will be updated either today or tomorrow :D Thanks for reading!
Name: Mj (Anonymous) · Date: 23/06/11 - 08:39 pm · For: Sweet Dreams
This is funny. Cant wait for the update!
Author's Response: Yay! Glad you like it! Don't worry, there will be more humor to come. Stay tuned! Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Name: SandShinobi21 (Signed) · Date: 23/05/11 - 03:14 pm · For: Sweet Dreams
It's official. This is my new favorite story by you. -nods head- mhmm...I Love the others too, but this is the best by far. Pleaseee update as soon as you can for this one! I'm seriously enjoying it, and you're keeping Kiba in character really well! He is one of the best after all. OH, random thought, I wonder how funny his reaction would be if he found out that Naruto was the main character!? xD That's a funny image. Haha
Author's Response: Okay, so I saw the words 'It's official' and I nearly had a heartattack. I don't know, for some reason, those words scare me. Good news doesn't usually follow that phrase. And yet, you gave such an amazing review! Oh my goodness, I'm so glad to hear that this is your favorite story out of all of those that I have posted. Kiba is obviously the best XD He is my husband, and I must do him justice when I write about him. And I actually have that scene mapped out in my head. When Kiba finds out that Naruto is the main character, it will either be funny or dramatic.... I'm not telling which though, you'll just have to wait and see ;) Anyways, I'm so happy that you like this story. Thank a bunch! Thank you so much for reading and enjoying, and thanks even more for telling me how much you like it! You're an awesome fan!
Name: Katherine (Anonymous) · Date: 16/05/11 - 01:24 am · For: Supermassive Black Hole
cool story
Author's Response: Yay! Thank you so much! It means a lot to me that my readers enjoy this. Thanks for giving my story the time of day and thanks even more for reviewing!
Name: Miko_Yami (Signed) · Date: 01/05/11 - 08:57 pm · For: Sweet Dreams
Cliffy…-.-…I really liked seeing how Adrianna acts around her family good character development, it gives us a feel that her world is going to be turned upside down when Kiba finds her again. Reading how she describes her father I get this feeling that her father might play a major role in this story, even as going as far as learning a little bit about Kiba? But I could be wrong…Awww I wish my sister liked anime but they don’t XP. What can I say Alicia she is cute and the normal cliché sister but we all like that about sisters don’t we ;).As for Kiba I can’t wait to see how he reacts to the human world…that’s going to be too funny. Can’t wait to read about Kiba in the real world that is going to be funnyJ
Author's Response: Sorry about the cliffy. I had to end it there. Yay for character development! I'm glad you enjoyed the family scene; I was afraid readers might get bored with it. Sorry, but I can't reveal anything about the father, except that he does play a somewhat important role in this story. Yeah, Alicia is cute but devious, just like the stereotypical sister that we all love so much. And we will just have to see how Kiba reacts to the real world. That will be interesting and funny, don't worry ;D Thank you so much for reading this chapter, it means a lot to me. And thank you so much for the reviews. You're awesome!
Name: Miko_Yami (Signed) · Date: 30/04/11 - 11:04 pm · For: Haunted
Very Nice I like Adrianna and reaction to Kiba is very realistic I mean who wouldn’t freak out if they saw Kiba or a guy dressed like Kiba. Very realistic, I would also like to know more about her because I have feeling that stuff from her past will sort of mess with her in future chapters I like that…very nice…Poor Kiba getting kicked where the sun doesn’t shine –ow- ,very nice. Kiba’s reaction to Adrianna seems to have kept him in character (oh I really wish I knew Kiba’s character a little bit better, I’m studying his personality right now but he seems in character for me)…I can’ wait to see Kiba’s reaction in the real world that ought to be fun.
Author's Response: Hooray! I'm glad you liked this chapter. Since this story takes place in the modern world, I am trying to keep it as close to reality as possible (except for ninjaness, of course). I am so happy to hear that it is actually working. And gosh, am I glad to hear you comment on Adrianna's past. Some of the other reviewers didn't say anything about that, so I am happy to hear that you noticed it. And yes... that dreaded place for any male... It was really the only weakness for Kiba I could think of for that type of situation. I'm really glad to hear that you like this story. Thank you again for reading this fanfic, I really appreciate it. You're a very insightful reader and awesome reviewer! Thank you so much for your reviews!
Name: Miko_Yami (Signed) · Date: 30/04/11 - 10:12 pm · For: Supermassive Black Hole
Wow about time something different, I was getting tired of the normal cliché of girls somehow ending in the Naruto world. I think you got the characters in character but then again I don’t know much about this group but from what I watched on Naruto I think you got them in character.
But who I really like is the “Bad guy”. I like how you actually developed him. =) Good story.
Author's Response: Yeah, I wanted to make a story that was kinda opposite of what we all are used to. A Naruto character ending up in the real world seemed like an interesting topic, and I couldn't help the ideas flowing through my brain. And I'm so glad to hear that the characters seem close to their personalities. That's a huge relief. I'm happy to hear you liked the villain. Character development was very important for him, so I was hoping I got it right. Glad I did in the end :D Thank yo so much for reading this story and taking the time to review it. It really means I lot to me.
Name: Rowanrose (Signed) · Date: 19/04/11 - 01:00 pm · For: Supermassive Black Hole
Haha, I read the whole story before coming back to review, I couldn't help it. LOL.
Very original. Kontorouru's smugness is artfully portrayed and all three naruto characters never go OOC.
The word boulder brings to mind an enormous rock and makes one wince-- I'm not exactly certain that's the right word because wouldn't Kiba be dead from a concussion is he was hit on the head by a boulder?
Loved it. Very nicely made and tied in; not too much narration not too less.
Author's Response: Yay! I'm so happy to hear that you read my whole story! And I'm glad to hear that you think this is original. That's what I was going for ;D Kontorouru is a very cocky character (or at least in my mind), so I'm happy to hear I described him well. And thank goodness the characters didn't go OOC. I try really hard to keep the characters close to their personalities. And yeah, I see what you mean with the boulder thing. But I tried using different words; I felt it would be too repetitive to say 'rock... rock... rock...' It wasn't meant to be an enormous rock, just a well-sized one. Besides, I was thinking that he was a ninja, so he would be able to pull through the pain. Well, in my head it makes sense. But anyways, I'm really glad to hear that you liked this story. I'm so flattered! I'm really happy that you found interest in this story. Thank you so much for deciding to read my story, and thanks even more for reviewing and sharing your thoughts! You're an awesome and insightful reader!
Name: Zack (Anonymous) · Date: 18/04/11 - 11:31 pm · For: Sweet Dreams
I really liked it, although some words were repeated a lot, just saying. :)
Author's Response: Yay! I'm glad you liked this. And it is true... I really need to extend my vocabulary. But thanks for deciding to read this! And thanks for reviewing! I really appreciate the fact that you shared your feedback!
Name: Fantasy Madeline (Signed) · Date: 18/04/11 - 02:42 pm · For: Supermassive Black Hole
This was a great chapter. You played it out realistically, and very well. No person would not freak when they saw a cute dude turn into beast. I am looking forward to Kiba fitting in, I think you can add a lot of humor to that, and make it a great couple of chapters. I love the scene where Kiba pins Adrianna to a tree. Go ninja. I can not wait for your next chapter. Thanks for updating!
Author's Response: Yay! I'm super excited that you liked this chapter! Considering this story takes place in the real world, I figured things that Kiba does would freak any normal person out. I was worried people would think Adrianna was weird or something for being scared at seeing Kiba. I am also looking forward to Kiba fitting in. Don't worry, there will be loads of humor =D And of course, I just had to throw in a little bit of action for Kiba to show his ferocity. His fierce attitude is what makes him hot XD Thank you for reading this chapter! And thank you even more for reviewing, my ever so faithful fan! You rock!
Name: Swrestler12 (Signed) · Date: 17/04/11 - 10:58 pm · For: Sweet Dreams
HA........ man business
Well then, nice work on this chapter. it was really well written and the whole family thing was good. Home is where the heart is i guess. and yep, its always the small yappy dogs that are the quickly submissive ones..... cept for the chihuahuas and Miniature Pinscher.
Well done
Author's Response: Haha, I'm glad that part amused you. I'm excited to hear this chapter was well-written. It gave a look into Adrianna's life while also bringing in the main plot with Kiba. The small yappy dogs are definitely the 'all bark and no bite' kind. But they're adorable nonetheless XD Thank you for reading this story and thank you even more for sharing your feedback. I'm very happy to see that readers enjoy my fanfic. Thanks again for the kind reviews!
Name: Swrestler12 (Signed) · Date: 17/04/11 - 10:29 pm · For: Haunted
XD that is exactly how imagined this would turn out. this chapter sure was interesting, not only revealing the type of person Adrianna is but also introducing kiba to this strange place. ^_^ well done
Author's Response: Hmm, I'm glad this chapter matched what you imagined. I'd hate to hear it didn't meet your expectations. I'm happy to hear it was interesting for you. Describing Adrianna and introducing Kiba into this new world seemed to mesh in my mind as a decent chapter, so I'm glad it actually did turn out well. Thanks for reading this, and thanks even more reviewing! You rock!
Name: Swrestler12 (Signed) · Date: 17/04/11 - 10:04 pm · For: Supermassive Black Hole
O o O
WOW that was really good. I did not expect that too happen in the fight. I wonder where Kiba went. ^_^ Good job
Author's Response: =D Yay! I'm glad you liked it. I'm so unpredictable, I'm glad I surprised you. We'll just have to see where Kiba is now. Thank you so much for deciding to read this story. I'm flattered. And thank you even more for taking the time to review it. You're awesome!
Name: SincereGlomp (Signed) · Date: 10/04/11 - 07:28 pm · For: Haunted
Will there be a third chapter in the near future though?
Author's Response: I'm working on it. I have a lot of stuff going on at the moment, so updates for any of my stories are going to be very sluggish. But I'm so happy that you care! Thanks for taking interest in my story!
Name: SincereGlomp (Signed) · Date: 27/03/11 - 05:42 am · For: Supermassive Black Hole
OHMYGOSHTHATWAS EEEEEPPPPPIIIIICCCCC!!!!
Sorry. *cough* I just about yelled that and now people in the library are staring at me weird. -_-'''
What! It WAS!!
^-^ Really good story!
Author's Response: OHMYGOSH I'M SO GLAD THAT YOU ENJOYED IT!!!! Haha, now my family is looking at me like I'm crazy :D But yeah, I'm really happy you liked this story. Thank you so much for enjoying it THAT much. Positive encouragement really gives me motivation to keep writing. So thank you a lot for reading. And thanks a bunch for reviewing! It really means a lot to me!
Name: MIngWei (Signed) · Date: 14/03/11 - 04:47 pm · For: Haunted
This was awesome! Keep it up cuz I want to know what happens! I love Kiba :D And your description of your addiction sounds an awful lot like mine :)
Author's Response: Yay! Thank you so much! And who doesn't love Kiba? He's just so... loveable! =D And as for Naruto addictions, well, that's just something else to add to our list of similarities. :) Thanks for reading! And thanks even more for reviewing! You have no idea how happy your support makes me!
Name: MIngWei (Signed) · Date: 14/03/11 - 04:29 pm · For: Supermassive Black Hole
Dude. This.is.awesome. Do you watch Teen Titans? There's an episode kinda like this where Starfire gets sent into the future. I know this probably won't be the same thing, but that's what it reminded me of. I can't wait to read on!
Author's Response: Aww, I'm so glad you decided to read this story too! And that is so sweet of you to say! Now, you and me must be on the same wavelength when it comes to television. I swear, we must watch the same movies and tv shows, because I know exactly what episode you're referring to. Sidenote, Teen Titans is one of the best shows in the entire universe! Anyways, I hope you continue to enjoy this story. Thanks a bunch for reading, it really makes me smile :) And thanks a ton for reviewing, it really makes my day :D
Name: Fantasy Madeline (Signed) · Date: 13/03/11 - 09:14 am · For: Haunted
*squeels like a fangirl* this is so amazingly awesome!!! Yay update! Best chapter ever. 'She could dream about marrying edward cullen when she's older' I love that quote so much! That was so cute. And thanks for having Adrianna sorta freak when she saw Kiba. Usually in these the main imediatly is fine with it and no person in real li9fe would ever be. This was so amazing, so please update like REALLY soon. Please? *holds up knife to doll* If you don't...this kiba plushie gets it.* =)
Author's Response: Oh... my... gosh. I got Fantasy Madeline to squeal like a fangirl. What an accomplishment! I'm sick at home in bed as I'm writing this response, so let me just say that your amazingly positive review has really brightened up my day. Edward Cullen... pfft! Kiba is way better, I wonder why my friend doesn't see that! Adrianna (the fanfic version of me) would never be okay with sudden change such as this. She's just in denial. And I thought a slow adjustment to seeing the real Kiba Inuzuka would be best for Adrianna (me). Darn... I really wish I could meet him for real! Now, twelve-year-old fangirl, put down the knife before you regret something... Leave the knife-playing to the Naruto gang. *quickly snatches plushie away and cuddles with the best anime dude ever* Don't judge me. Thanks so much for reading, it means the world to me! And thanks for giving such a positive review! You really know how to make a sick girl feel like dancing in the street (as long as there are no cars coming by).
Name: Fantasy Madeline (Signed) · Date: 12/03/11 - 07:30 am · For: Supermassive Black Hole
Yay that was so well written! Thanks so much for explaining it. Normally people just fall asleep and end up in another universe, or fall through a random portal which never makes any sense what so ever. Thank you so much for posting and can you pretty please update? For me? For Kiba?
Author's Response: Yeah, it kind of annoys me when people suddenly end up in some random place. I figured a battle scene would be more explanatory. I'm glad you thought I wrote it well, because it was really hard for me to put all of my thoughts into writing. Yeesh, I'm rusty after a month already? Not good at all... For you, Fantasy Madeline, I will update as soon as I can. For Kiba, I will go to the ends of the earth ;D Thanks so much for reading this! It really means a lot to me! And thanks even more for reviewing this story! It really makes my day!