Reviews For The Truth of War
Name: Randomguy (Signed) · Date: 28/03/11 - 04:42 pm · For: Red Death
Wow, his is a unique Idea that I've never encountered before! This is an interesting first chapter, and I like it, Especially the WWII theme. It somehow.... makes sense to have Naruto in this setting.
Author's Response: Well thank you, and well i do love a good WWII story and i thought, "What would it be like if the characters of Naruto were in this setting?" I got a pretty good picture in my head and thought some other people would like this story as well. Thanks for the Review.
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 28/03/11 - 01:51 pm · For: Planning and Contreversies
Yay! Inuzuka introduction! This was an interesting chapter. Seeing a side of Hiruzen that is not shown in the anime/manga, yet, it still makes sense. Showing the stress amongst the soldiers is a nice turn compared to the previous chapters, where there was a lot of angst and action. Showing these meetings are important too, so I'm glad you put in a little conference meeting in there. This was a good chapter, and I cannot wait to see what you have planned next!
Author's Response: Thanks on the review. Yeah i was thinking of putting up a chapter like this because i thought that a dilemma such as this should be brought up at some point in time. I was also thinking about some of the problems that could have happened and decided on the best way to depict the argument
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 22/03/11 - 03:41 am · For: Keeps the Doctor Away
Oh my gosh, that was so scary! I was shivering in fear that entire time! Shino was so frightening in this, and then he killed the guy! (Um, who was the guy? Sorry, I just thought that description of him was a little vague) But the suspense in this chapter was very good, and your writing portrays that very well. I'm becoming very interested in this story. And by the way, if you still need help on deciding some characters, you can contact me if you wish. I am beginning to really enjoy this story, and if I could help in any way, that would be awesome. Please keep up the good, and thanks for updating! I really like this story, it's getting even better as it continues!
Author's Response: That's what i had planned on going for. The reason i wanted to make Shino this way is because i always pictured him not only as a scientist but as a psychotic one. The man is of really no relevance but i"ll be honest in saying that i had planned on him being a deathrow inmate so no one would really care if he was gone. Um, yes i might contact you soon regarding characters, mainly because i have some ideas, but would like to have another person's opinion and input. I'll try and update maybe every week or every other week, i just have to find the time to do so but if you can help me with the characters i may be able to get ahead faster. Thanks for the Review ^_^
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 08/03/11 - 03:44 am · For: Red Death
Wow! This is so original, it's mindblowing! I'm really interested in this now! I can't wait to see how this turns out. This has really caught my attention, and I look forward to reading more.
As for characters.... I think Neji would make a good German general. I also think it would be interesting to see Kiba as an animal trainer, meaning that he trains the hounds to kill and such.
Girls, most likely, should be nurses, since women weren't allowed in the army during that time period. However, you could slip in some scenes where the girls show their crazy feminine power and fight anyway.
Those are my opinions though. I really like this story, and I hope to see more soon. Keep up the tremendous work!
Author's Response: Wow, thanks for the review means alot. Hmm, the suggestions you have put up are interesting and sorta what i was thinking for the characters along the line. I do definetly plan on showing some feminine power, both in combat such as maybe spies or other things like that. I appreciate your insight and will continue working on it. Thank you.