Cool, did you make this up yourself? There's a lot of stuff I skipped in the manga, so I have no idea XD Anyhow, nicely written, I'll read more when ever I'v the time. I hope you don't mind my reviewing an old chapter, if so, please ask me to stop.

Author's Response: Actually, I did make this up myself. Well, the Sage of the Six Paths part is true in the Naruto series, but the stuff about the Guardian is my imagination :) I'm glad you liked this prologue, oh my gosh, it was written EXACTLY a year ago XD Anyway, I'm happy you took the time to read and review! Hehe, I'm honored you decided to read my story at all, so please take your time, I'm not rushing. And of course I don't mind you reviewing an old chapter; the more feedback I get, the better I'll get in my writing. Thank you very much for reading and reviewing, I hope you continue to enjoy this!

YES! My all time fave fic is updated! And with an awesome chapter at that!

I absolutely love the OCs, even if a couple of them aren't yours. That just means the people who created them are awesome as well, and you wrote them with equal awesomeness ;D

There was some real sadness in this with Suki, I felt really bad for her. I sure hope she can make friends with her new teammates. Though that Haruki fellow seems kinda mean :P

Deno and Kakashi as friends is really cool. It would be quite awkward if he failed Hatake-san's daughter though XP

Great chapter, SilverWolf-san! I loved this, and I'm so excited to hear that there will be another update! Yayz! Keep up the awesome work!

Author's Response: :D This is your favorite fic?! That makes me feel so good right now! I'm glad you like the OCs because... well, you're kind of stuck with reading them now ;) Yes, the people who made the OCs are very awesome, especially their writing. I suggest you go read their stories to go get a feel of what their amazing abilities really are. Haha, yeah, Haruki is kind of mean, which might hinder Suki's attempt at making friends, but Michiko is nicer :) Hehe, one can only imagine how awkward Deno and Kakashi's friendship would be if Suki fails. But we'll get to that in the next chapter ;D Thank you so much for the awesome review, I'm really happy that you like this story so much! There will be an update soonish, stay tuned! Thank you so much for reading and thanks even more for reviewing! You're incredible!

Wow. This was a great leadup to the survival training. I really liked it.

The beginning scene was really sad, with Suki having her breakdowns and all. But Kakashi's words were really encouraging, which made for a really cute father-daughter moment.

Oh wow, an OC team. Well alright then, I can't wait to see which path this different plot twist will lead you down. I already really like the three new OCs, I think they all mesh to make a great group.

The scene with Kakashi talking to Obito almost had me choking up a bit. With the wind representing Obito's voice, I don't know, I almost cried there.

The part with Kakashi and Deno together was really well-written. I really liked how you portrayed the two friends together.

The only thing I want to say is that I think the beginning scene and the scene with Kakashi talking to Obito went by a little fast. They were both good, don't get me wrong, but I think more could have been added. It ended too suddenly for me, but that could just be my fault. I just think it could have been extended.

But great job on this, Wolf-chan! I really liked the way this chapter went. Everything seemed to flow pretty well. Keep up the good work!

Author's Response: Yay! I'm glad you liked it! I hadn't really meant to have Suki have such a dramatic breakdown, that was completely on a whim when I started the chapter. But I'm glad it came out cute in the end. Haha, I see the OC team threw you off a bit :P It was kinda meant to do that, so yay! It worked! Hehe, I think you might enjoy how I twist the plot. Or at least I hope you do. Aww, I'm sorry I made you cry. I didn't mean to... Or maybe I did, I don't personally know what I had meant to accomplish with that scene... Hmm... Yeah, I like Kakashi and Deno as friends. I think they make a decent pair of comrades. Oh, really? They went by fast? Huh, I'll have to reread those scenes and see how I can work on making them longer. Thanks for pointing that out. But anyway, thank you so much for reading and reviewing! You're awesome, Rainbow-chan! I appreciate your feedback, thanks again!

First thing I notice at the start of this chapter is that 7-8 year olds should talk like 7-8 year olds. Naruto wouldn't know what flirting is or "vandalize" something, he'd tear it up or mess it up.

The questionnaire bit at the start didn't hold much significance, just mostly talk about colors and hair.

My fluff and cute limits were hitting a max, but the bad guys came in time. I was waiting for Suki to become a Gaara, and just fucking destroy those people and wring out their guts(LOL). Kakashi would show up on the scene, shocked and serious mode, realizing things would be a lot more complicated than he had anticipated. She would discover Naruto had seen it as he was preparing to save her, causing loads of drama and interesting situations in the future. haha

but it was a stepping stone for more fluff, and I was left with another daddy Kakashi x Suki moment. sighhhhhhhh~

Author's Response: Yeah... I've been told that my child characters are too mature... I'll agree about the 'vandalize' thing, but the flirting thing is definitely debateable. I know plenty of little kids (I work with children) who know about that kind of stuff, so that is highly a matter of opinion. Hahahahahaha, I'm sorry, it's just that you don't think the questionaire holds much significance... it really does. Hmm, in the previous review, you said my story was predictable; how predictable would it have been for Suki to become a Gaara? ;) Nah, I'm joking; there's actually a reason for Suki not going Guardian mode on the guys; it leads to something else. I think I mentioned in the end notes (I can't remember, this was written in January...) that this was mainly about the gold bird *hint hint* You're not thinking of the big picture of my foreshadowing methods ;D Read on and you'll see what I mean. But anyways, thank you for taking the time to read and review, I am grateful for all of your feedback!

DAMMIT TETSU STOP ASKIN QUESTIONS JUST REALIZE SHE IS GOING TO BE ADOPTED AND GET RID OF THAT MONSTER ALREADY!

...there we go. kakashi keepin chill as always.

jeez author be careful, don't set in stone with your god powers that ANBU are all emotional zombies :< you're power-tripping like Gekido if you are going that far.

the cuteness level is off the charts.

Author's Response: Haha, part of the point though is that he wants a weapon to protect Kagayaku. Ah, at least Kakashi wasn't too OOC in this chapter. He's always sporting his chill attitude, so I tried to keep that. Hmm, I didn't meant to set the ANBU thing in stone, but it's a fact that ANBU can't exactly be too happy or anything. I'm simply saying that Kakashi tried to get rid of his emotions because of all the bad stuff that happened; I don't mean that ALL of the ANBU are like that. As for the cuteness level... is that a good thing or a bad thing? Anyways, thanks for actually bothering to read and review. I really do appreciate your thoughts. Thanks a bunch!

I had no idea this was a third person omniscient. Because it is omniscient doesn't have to mean you should delve into the thoughts of "random" characters. Most stories in the narrative tend to switch perspective between a small handful of important characters. Like game of thrones, eragon's later books, lotr. I'm not trying to compare it, but it's just what I've experienced with the narrative, so I personally think it is odd to see Hokage's thoughts mixed in during a "Suki chapter". If you keep switching it mid chapter may as well be one of those people who have == POV == every other line.

This chapter was written well, but nothing original. Narutoverse people are quick to label children monsters arent they? poor gaara, naruto, and suki.

Every time I read Suki I think of the russian version of suki, which means bitch. lmao

will continue reading.

Author's Response: When you say random characters, I think of the person walking down the street who walks passed Suki. The Hokage is involved in the scene, and I think it would be rather redundant to just leave it on the OC and only the OC. In a scene with a conference such as this, I can't really focus on one character and not another; I might as well just end up completely cutting the person out entirely. I personally don't see how sharing each characters' thoughts in a third person narrative is like a POV switch every few lines, but that's just what I think....

Okay, okay, I'll admit that the 'monster' thing isn't exactly original, but I never claimed that it would be ;) But honestly, with the bad reputation that now is associated with the Guardian, would you expect everyone to love her? How realistic is that? Suki means b**** in Russian? Uh... that's awkward... I'd much rather you go with the Japanese version of love and fondness :P Anyway, thanks for your perspective. I'll take the POV thing into consideration. Thanks for the feedback!

I see we chose the Kakashi method.

The first 2k words didn't progress the story much, and mostly beated into my head that she is hated, it was rainy and grimy, and she was scared as bad people were chasing her.

Kakashi did the nice guy routine, reasonably in character. Him being out in a tent by himself didn't really make sense to me.

You were very descriptive as usual, (redirecting herself, tears in mud, mud on pants, sitting on butt) but still need to work on your flow to portray this without having to fall back on listing it out.

I think doing something similar to this would wrap up a chunk of what you were portraying:

"The little girl ran into a puddle so deep it soaked an entire leg -- but she couldn't stop now -- not while she was still being chased. She picked herself up in panic and continued her flight from her pursuers, still unable to understand why they hated her, chased her, despised and tormented her."

Kakashi + the girl was cute. But I'm getting suspicious of him always camping out snatching up little OC girls all the time.

6/10

Author's Response: >_< The rating went down... Eh, in my defense, this was written about a year ago, so I think (or I hope) the writing gets better as it progresses. But yeah, I see what you mean. The whole description/listing thing.... it's something that needs to be fixed.... Uh, sorry about the Kakashi thing, I know that's not something you favor, but it was something that was planned from the beginning when this story was created. Hmm, sorry if this didn't meet any expectations. Thanks for the honesty though, I appreciate it. I hope you enjoy the later chapters. Thanks for reading and taking the time to review!

So that's the real story behind the ninja... LOL. I the really like the creativity and how you presented the backstory, I think it works well. I don't really care to know why Gekido power tripped, and it's not really important unless Suki starts becoming influenced by possible power

I'm hoping these spiritual powers play into the rest of the story well.

7/10 chapter

Author's Response: Yes, that's what really happened ;) I'm glad you liked the creativity though; I figured I would make it interesting in that respect, instead of just throwing Suki in there randomly. The reason behind Gekido's power hunger isn't too important, so don't worry. As for the powers, well, I wouldn't have listed them if they didn't tie in somewhere ;D Hmm, 7/10, I'll take that. It's a C grade-wise, but it's better than 50% or so, so it's all good for me. Thanks for deciding to read this! I hope this story somewhat keeps your interest as you continue!

Wow, the ending was really sad for Suki :( I felt so bad for her... But at least she wants to protect her friends and family :D Aw, Sasuke's so mean to her, she only wanted to help! Ugh, meanie pants... But this chapter was really good! It was sad, but it was still awesome! Excellent job with this chapter!

Author's Response: I know, poor Suki... I felt terrible putting her through so much pain, but it had to be done... Yeah, it was nice that she decided to be the Guardian to protect her loved ones. I know, Sasuke is a meanie pants, though it is understandable considering what happened to his family... I'm happy you liked this chapter, despite it being sad. Thanks for reading and leaving a review! It makes me very happy!

Gosh, this got scarier with each sentence! It was really good, but it was still really scary! Good job though, it was very well-written. Wow, now that others know about Suki, things will only get more intense. Good work on this! It was scary, but it was the good kind of intense! Nice job!

Author's Response: I know, it was definitely very scary. I'm glad it was well-written though :) Oh, things will definitely be getting more intense, don't worry ;) I'm glad you still enjoyed this, despite the murder attempt I put on Suki... *nervous laugh* Hehe, thanks for reading and reviewing! I'm happy you were still able to somehow like this!

AWWWW! That's so sweet! I'm so happy for Suki, this was really cute! :D

Author's Response: I know, it is very sweet :D I'm also really happy for Suki. I'm glad you liked this, I hope it made up for the last chapter :D Thanks for reading and reviewing, it means a lot to me!

Aww! Kakashi's so awesomely nice! XD Haha, yay! The nurse was so nosy, I don't like her... But now that Kakashi wants to adopt Suki, it totally makes up for my dislike of the nurse! Fantastic work with this!

Author's Response: Kakashi's just awesome in general ;) The nurse was extremely nosy, but yeah, I guess you're right in saying that Kakashi's coolness makes up for it. I'm so happy you liked this! Thanks a bunch for reading and reviewing!