Woah. Well that was interesting. I kind of wish some of the things she does, like meeting with Hinata and Kiba, would have a bit more detail. They just seem a little rushed. But other than that, good plot and character progression :) I'll be looking out for another update!

Author's Response: Thanks. While I was writing it, it seemed fine, but once I published it and read it, it did feel rushed, I'll try to put more thought into it. Thanks for the feedback