Haha, Sasuke and Jiraiya, they're so hilarious. I'm surprised Sasuke hasn't blown his top yet.

As for Sakura, well, I'm still astounded with her having the curse mark in the first place. Her insecure feelings were written really well, and I'm happy that you were able to tie it in so well.

Kakashi... oh jeez, he's been through so much already! I can't believe Orochimaru is controlling him! This is horrible, I can't stand it! I really just want him to bust out and come home...

But great job on this chapter! You did an excellent job with it. Keep up the awesome work!