I was already in love with this chapter when I noticed all of Sasuke's character development. But then that twist in the end... wow, I just shrieked in awe at how easily you're turning the Naruto plot into your own.

Sasuke is finally starting to care about his friends, even if he doesn't realize it. And considering everything you've put the characters through, it really makes sense. And he has finally met Danzou... I wonder what Jiraiya's plan of action is... And wow, Jiraiya is training Sasuke instead of Naruto now.

You've changed the plot so much, and I really enjoy the fact that you did. Your twists make this story so much more interesting. I look forward to more, but I know that you've got the stress of school and everything. So, keep up the great work!

Author's Response: Trust me, I'll try as much as I can to get this finished. Believe it!