Aw, that is so sad! Gosh, I really hope Kakashi gets out of there soon. You wrote the cage scene really well, really describing screams and horrors there very well. It sent chills. I loved the description, it was so elaborate and spooky, and it worked so well. Same thing with the Kabuto scene. He is so cruel and evil, but the scene was so well-written.

Nice intro to Team 10. It was very typical of them to be hiding. I can't help feeling that their appearance is a bit of foreshadowing? Or maybe I am just overthinking things.

Anyways, nice job with this. Can't wait for the next one. Keep up the great work!