“Bridge builder...Your life is up! I, the Demon of the Mist, Zabuza Momchi, will kill you today.”
*Momochi
(If I annoy you with my corrections, please tell me and I'll stop doing it :) )

But seriously, omg! I envy you! You write very well and you handle the action scenes with perfection! I don't know many writers who can do that (most people either make them too messy and I can't figure out what's going on or too bland and it seems like nothing's going on). You describe them very well. *thumbs up*

Zabuza is going to have a hard time fighting a guardian angel version of Kakashi. :DD Can't wait to read more!