The summary caught my eye immediately, and I was not disappointed. There are a few errors here and there (the beginning, the format's gone mental - and do candle "bras" exist?), but I'm enyoing the story so far.

Laughed a lot at the mental image of a floating baby.

Keep up the good work!

I really much like your idea for this story, it's definitely different than all the other Naruto-based stories I've read!
Your writing is fluent and I didn't notice any mistakes (then again I'm actually quite bad at noticing them ^^").
It might take me some time to read the rest of the chapters (I'm glad there are so many of them, I can't wait to read them!), but I'll be sure to post a review to tell you what I thought. Right now, it looks pretty promising story!