Reviews For Sense of Love
Name: lemonlover (Signed) · Date: 24/06/08 - 07:55 am · For: Chapter 1
...I loved it...It was so simple. But it's the most beautifully written simpleness I've ever read. T.T I loved reading about a sleepy Naruto, because its just so darn captivating in a completely stupid way! You can't help but love it! Especially when you put an annoyed and yet caring Sasuke into the mix. It just makes the simplest moments turn into unbearable fluffiness! *dies* But I love it. ^^
And it's like I could FEEL how Naruto felt the whole time. Mostly because the way you described things was how it does feel to me. 'Prickling cold pinched and stung at his skin.' So, so cruelly true. And then... 'Lingering warmth seeped into his own clothing.' I felt so fuzzy reading this...I got really tired too. You do your job so well!
I'm so happy that I got to read these...They were so pointless but had so much meaning. Thank you for sharing! *hugs* I love all the little details and how ridiculously sweet it was! ^~^ I look forward to reading all the other ideas you have! *love*
~lemon
Author's Response: Yay, I'm glad that you were able to feel the stories, since I deprived all three of these from simple feelings. It's a good thing to hear since that's what I was trying to do. ^__^rnrnI'll be looking forward to your reviews! =D