Real name: ? Then what's the point of pennames?
Membership status: Member
Member since: 01/11/10
Website: http://themoonspack.webs.com/
Beta-reader: Yes
A lovely banner by my sister!
Hey, guys! What’s up? Somehow, you have managed to stumble upon my profile. I don’t know how you got here, but take a look around if you like!
Hmm, I guess this is the part where I start saying some stuff about myself, huh? Well, alright then, let’s get to it!
Penname: My official penname is silverwolf1213. However, I have acquired a plethora of names while on this fabulous site: SW1213, SilverWolf, Wolf-chan, Urufu-chan, Gin-cha, Silver, Silvy, Wolfy… There are probably some others, but you get the idea. You could honestly probably create any nickname for me and I would reply, so long as it is appropriate.
Birthday: December 13, haha, get it? The 1213 from my penname? Haha.
Age: 18, yikes…
Height: Exactly 5 ft, though 5 ft. 1 in. on a good day :)
Weight: Why did I even add this part?
Appearance: Eh... no, I don't want any stalkers, thank you very much.
Likes:
Swimming, in both a competitively and a leisurely sense. Running, since it’s a good way to think and relieve stress. Talking to friends, Sasaui Uchiha, DestinyGirl, and BattyBigSister being the main people from this site that I talk to. Reading novels, though I’m not exactly picky about what I’ll read, but that doesn’t mean I’ll like everything either. Writing, and I mean just in general because it helps me to release my emotions.
Dislikes:
People who are annoying / selfish / mean.
Personality:
I’m actually a pretty nice person. I’m always willing to make friends, so please don’t be afraid to talk to me. In real life, I’m relatively shy and quiet on the outside. On the inside, I’m one of the strangest people ever, and I’m not joking. I can be pretty defensive on some things; if you want to bash my work, my personality, my friends or family, or my way of life, then be prepared for some intense lashing from me. You’ve been warned.
Favorite Things:
Color: Red
Animal: Wolf
Food: Chinese
Sport: Swimming
Movies:
Pirates of the Caribbean
Avatar
And basically, anything Disney or anything sappy-romantic
Books:
The Hunger Games (series) by Suzanne Collins
The Mortal Instruments (series) by Cassandra Clare
The Infernal Devices (series) by Cassandra Clare
Twilight (series) by Stephenie Meyer
Harry Potter (series) by J.K. Rowling
Bands/Artists:
Lady GaGa
P!nk
Selena Gomez
The Script
The Fray
Bruno Mars
Beyoncé
Katy Perry
One Direction
Manga:
Naruto
One Piece
InuYasha
Yu-Gi-Oh!
Things about Naruto:
I'm a sucker for romance. My favorite Naruto couples are: NaruHina, ShikaTema, NejiTen, and SasuSaku.
I dislike Sasuke in Shippuden because he's just a jerk. Seriously, he needs to realize that Itachi wouldn't be dead if he didn't kill him (sorry if I spoiled the manga/anime for anyone). Stop being emo, do not kill Naruto, fall in love with Sakura already, and realize you have issues, man!
Kiba is my husband. Anyone who tries to steal him will feel the wrath of my fangs and claws! However, if you can write a good romance story, then all is forgiven… Not really. Kiba will still be mine, I just won't inflict physical damage.
As I'm sure many people do, I have my own theory on the ending of the Naruto series. I think the ending of the series will be how Naruto, still wanting peace and to save his friend, goes up against Sasuke, who refuses to accept such a happy world after what his brother went through. They will fight, and after a long battle (probably about ten chapters, I wouldn't be surprised), Naruto and Sasuke will summon the last of their chakra to use their signature moves, Rasengan and Chidori, and the last page of the last chapter of the series will be a clash and a bright light, so we will never know what happened....
Fanfiction:
I’ll read just about anything, though if the story doesn’t initially catch my eye, I’m sorry to say that I may just pass over it. However, if you ask me to read your story, I am always willing to give it a shot.
If you didn’t know, I am a fanfic writer. Look below to see my stories ;) I really appreciate it when people read my works, and I appreciate it even more so when people leave comments. Not because it boosts the read or review counts but because it lets me know whether people find my stories compelling to read. Feedback also lets me know what I’m doing right or wrong. I always accept constructive criticism. But I don’t like bashing or flaming because those methods of reviewing are not helpful whatsoever.
I will review anything I read, and I usually review each individual chapter, though that’s not always a promise. I review the stories I read because, as a writer, I know what it feels like to appreciate feedback from readers. When I leave comments, I always try to be considerate of the person writing the stories, which means that I try not to bash anyone. If a review I give comes out sounding nasty, please forgive me. I just try to review honestly so that I can help the writer.
I am a beta-reader, meaning that if you ever need an editor or someone to help with your story, I am willing to help. I have experience with editing people's works and sharing ideas to help progress the story. So if you ever need help, please feel free to ask!
My TONFA Story
Well, I honestly didn't know what fanfiction was until 2009. My friend had introduced me to Harry Potter fanfiction on harrpotterfanfiction.com, and I fell in love with the entire concept of original ideas incorporated into the normal plotline of an already-existing universe. I was hooked on Harry Potter fanfics for nearly a year. During this time, I began writing alternate universes of my own that followed the Naruto plotline. Only when I look back on it now do I realize how unoriginal and immature my ideas actually were back then, but that's a story for another day. Anyway, one fine summer's day in 2010, I realized that if there were sites for Harry Potter fanfics, then there had to be something for Naruto.
Lo and behold, I was correct. After using the wonderful Google, I found a website of Naruto fanfics that I liked: TONFA The Original Naruto Fanfic Archive.
I remember reading several stories from the Top Tens, and since this was before the Anonymous reviews were brought back, I never left any comments. I only joined in November 2010 after my mom and sister encouraged me to publish my ideas here to see if anyone liked them or could give me advice on how to improve in my writing.
My first publication on the Internet ever was Their Stories, a series of background stories for original characters that I had planned to center my entire fanfic writing career on. Only after reading other stories by other people and new ideas blossoming in my head did I realize how bad my original universe actually was. I always think about taking Their Stories down, but then I always decide to leave it up as a comparison between how I once used to write and how I write now. It's such an improvement, and I really hope I continue to get better.
Since then, I have made several friends on this site, and there are even some people from here who I talk to on other sites as well. Overall, I'm really glad I joined this site.
Links:
FanFiction.Net: http://www.fanfiction.net/~silverwolf1213
Blogger: http://silverwolf1213.blogspot.com
DeviantArt: http://silverwolf1213.deviantart.com
Website: http://themoonspack.webs.com/
COMPLETED STORIES:
Three Days
He spent three days in the hospital, dying a slow and painful death. It wasn't merciful, and it wasn't kind. All anyone could do was watch him wither away until someone pulled the plug.
*Based on true events, a tribute to my deceased grandfather*
CURRENTLY WORKING ON:
A Tale Best Told Dead
The Suiheisen are a crew of rogues who plunder the land and seas. The Blue Tiger of the Mist, the captain of these bandits, is about to show the unsuspecting Leaf ninja that no one should ever underestimate a deadly pirate with a deep vendetta and a dark past.
*Hoist the Colors series*
The Reincarnation of a Legend
Suki Kurohoshi is the next Guardian, the legendary sacred protector. Her duty is to keep the world at peace. But how is she supposed to do that when people are constantly revealing their hatred towards her for something that she did not do?
*Destiny is Calling series, NaruOC*
The White Rose
Kiba Inuzuka has just been sent to the real world, where the world of Naruto is only a manga. Adrianna Sun has just stumbled upon the fictional character, and now she must find a way to keep her life in order while also trying to get Kiba back home.
*Response to challenge, 'Let's Be Original', KibaOC*
Rekindle the Lost Flame
Madara Uchiha has ruled the world for 100 years after he defeated the Five Great Shinobi Nations in the Fourth Great Ninja War. Now a new band of heroes must somehow defeat the last remaining ninja and break the tsukuyomi that has brainwashed the world for a century.
*Response to challenge, 'Joint Stories!'*
Mission of Matrimony
Shikamaru and Temari, who have been friends for eleven years now, are ordered by Tsunade and Gaara to be married to keep the Leaf-Sand treaty alive. How will the two be able to stand being married to one another?
*ShikaTema*
CURRENTLY REVISING:
Freshman Year
The Naruto gang and an original character of mine head to Konoha High for their first year of high school. And they realize that high school is not all that it is cracked up to be. Sirius of Harry Potter and Zuko of Avatar are included in this because I like them :D
*Due to lack of inspiration and possible dysfunctional ideas, I need to revise this*
Their Stories
In a dangerous world filled with shinobi, everyone has a story, and all of them are connected in some way, whether they realize it or not.
*I am hoping to make a series out of this*
ABANDONED:
Pirates of the Mist
*Due to lack of motivation, this will no longer be updated - check out the rewrite A Tale Best Told Dead*
Rated: U
[Reviews - 57]Category: MadFic > Parody
Characters: None
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 11 | Completed: No | Word count: 4469 | Read count: 13889 [Report This]
Published: 02/08/06 | Updated: 16/02/07
Date: 23/06/11 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11
Haha, this is hilarious! I loved it! Nice job!
Rated: U
[Reviews - 24]
They started when he was fifteen. Phone calls from nobody. He just wanted to hear the voice of this nobody and to know who it is. But what is the price to this simple want? [NaruSaku, Hinted SasuNaru, Oneshot]Category: Het Romance > Top Six Pairs > Naruto and Sakura, Shonen-ai/Yaoi Romance > Top Pairings > Sasuke and Naruto
Characters: Sakura Haruno, Sasuke Uchiha, Naruto Uzumaki
Genres: Drama, Romance
Warnings: None
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 | Completed: Yes | Word count: 4538 | Read count: 9721 [Report This]
Published: 21/11/07 | Updated: 21/11/07
Date: 14/03/11 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Oh my goodness! This was just an amazing story! I'm so sad that it's over! There were so many emotions evoked in this! Your entire story was just phenomenal, and I really wish there was more to read! I'm so upset that there is no more! This was great, you're a really amazing author. Just fantastic!
Author's Response: Hi, sorry! I took so long to get back to you on this! (An entire year, wow!) I left this site for so long already.... But despite that, even if you don't remember how you felt when you first left this review, I'd still like to thank you for your kindness! I'm very happy that you had spent the time reading my story and leaving me a review! I truly appreciate your support. C=
Rated: 15
[Reviews - 235]
Hello my name is Kaminari Hiyori, but my friends call me Nari. I am from the Hiyori clan, whose members specialize in elemental control and jutsu. My clan believes that depending on the weather conditions on the day that a baby is born, is how we are destined to our element. We are also named to match our element. My name means thunder and I control and use electric based jutsu. I was born during an electrical storm. My Aunt, Kasumi, was born when a heavy mist covered the land. Thus her name means mist, and her element is liquid and poison based. Aunt Kasumi had taken care of me ever since my parents died. I’m graduating from the Ninja Academy soon. Hopefully, I’ll be put with my best friend, Naruto Uzamaki.
Category: OC-centric
Characters: All
Genres: Action/Adventure, Drama, Humor, Mystery, Romance
Warnings: Death
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 47 | Completed: Yes | Word count: 65745 | Read count: 81493 [Report This]
Published: 01/06/08 | Updated: 03/05/09
Date: 21/05/11 Title: Chapter 47: Gathered Here Today
Wow. Just... wow.
This was a great story. This is by far, one of the greatest stories I've ever read. It had everything. Humor, drama, love, and so many great twists. I'm not even sure if all the positive things I could say would do this story justice. This was just great, and you're an amazing author. I hope you write more, you're a very talented writer. Now I'll have to go check out this sequel :D Again, this was just utterly phenomenal and amazingly well-written. Good job.
Rated: 12/12A
[Reviews - 73]
Category: OC-centric
Characters: Akatsuki, OC, Tsunade
Genres: Action/Adventure, Angst
Warnings: None
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 15 | Completed: Yes | Word count: 40094 | Read count: 35624 [Report This]
Published: 27/08/08 | Updated: 14/02/10
Date: 11/02/11 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14 - Down the Sodden Hill
Just finished reading the whole thing. I have to say, that this was amazing! You wrote this so well, and you brought about feelings that really caught the readers. Your writing is incredible, and it almost felt like this was really happening in real life. And that was just an amazing way to end this story. So mysterious and cryptic. I loved the entire thing! I'm so glad I decided to read this, and I commend you as a writer. An excellent job well done!
Author's Response: Thank you very much. I tried to make this one as realistic as possible, considering the theme, and I\'m flattered that you regard it in such a way. Thanks for reviewing!
Rated: 15
[Reviews - 60]Category: General Fiction > Character-Centric, Alternate Universe & Crossovers > High School Fics, Het Romance > Top Six Pairs > Sasuke and Sakura
Characters: Itachi Uchiha, Kiba Inuzuka, Naruto Uzumaki, Neji Hyuuga, Pair SasuSaku, Sakura Haruno, Sasuke Uchiha, Shikamaru Nara
Genres: Action/Adventure, Angst, Romance
Warnings: AU, Death
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 24 | Completed: Yes | Word count: 30862 | Read count: 35162 [Report This]
Published: 04/10/08 | Updated: 14/08/09
Date: 14/02/11 Title: Chapter 24: Epilogue
Such a good story! In the second half, you added more description and elaborated more, which I was thankful for. There were so many twists, it was fantastic! You made the story just like the actual manga, and yet, it was so unique because of your original twists! Amazing job, I'm very impressed! I just wish Sasuke didn't die! That was sad! I was hoping for a better ending. But again, this story was great, and I'm glad I decided to read this. Great job!
Rated: 15
[Reviews - 10]Tween Kakashi is forced to accept the fact that his older sister has fallen in love with the foolish and handsome Lord of the Inuzuka Clan. Things become complicated when their daughter, Kaliana, finds herself orphaned and alone with only her uncle to turn to. How will Kakashi manage raising a child AND his deadly ninja career? Solution: The child must learn to be a warrior! But what happens when she turns out to be too talented? A Little Spark can go a long way...
Category: OC-centric, General Fiction > Pre-Series
Characters: Clan Inuzuka, Maito Gai, Kakashi Hatake, Obito Uchiha, OC, Rin, Sarutobi Hiruzen (Sandaime Hokage), Team Yondaime, Minato Namikaze (Yondaime Hokage)
Genres: Action/Adventure, Mystery
Warnings: None
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 10 | Completed: Yes | Word count: 32743 | Read count: 16187 [Report This]
Published: 01/03/09 | Updated: 15/03/09
Date: 27/08/11 Title: Chapter 10: ACT III: CH.2 "What's Best for You"
Oh... my... gosh...
This... was genius...
Every moment of this was wonderfully addicting, I couldn't tear my eyes away from the screen!
I love your sense of humor; nearly everything in this was filled with so much amusement. And then the drama, of course, was beautifully written when needed. The sorrow was astounding, as I burst into tears when Kamichi and Akita died. And this final chapter, was so amazingly written. It really sets everything up for the next story.
You are a great author. This was spectacular. I can only imagine what the next story is like. Excellent job with this!
Rated: 15
[Reviews - 69]
Category: General Fiction > Character-Centric, Het Romance > Fluff, Alternate Universe & Crossovers > Real World
Characters: Kiba Inuzuka, Neji Hyuuga, OC, Pair OCNaru, Pair SasuHina, Sakura Haruno, Sasuke Uchiha, Shikamaru Nara, Tenten
Genres: Action/Adventure, Angst, Dark, Humor, Supernatural
Warnings: Dark, OOC, Sexual Themes
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 14 | Completed: No | Word count: 51051 | Read count: 18552 [Report This]
Published: 23/06/09 | Updated: 23/12/09
Date: 14/03/11 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14: Council of Nerezza Pura
Wow. This was a really good story, just like all your other amazingly original stories! This blended vampires and werewolves incredibly well, and the plot was just fantastic. I am just so impressed with this story, and I hope you continue with it. It's an amazing fic, and it would be a shame to not continue with it to the end.
Rated: 15
[Reviews - 39]Of course it will have lemons(Ok I lied)! Some distasteful language and situations await. And everything else that will get you to view it
Category: OC-centric, MadFic > Parody
Characters: All
Genres: Action/Adventure, Angst, Drama, Humor, Parody, Romance
Warnings: AU, Death, Drabble, OOC, Sexual Themes
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 6 | Completed: No | Word count: 4634 | Read count: 11677 [Report This]
Published: 26/06/09 | Updated: 25/04/12
Date: 08/09/11 Title: Chapter 5: Purpose?
Whoa.... Orochimaru's manipulative attitude was perfect.... which just made this a whole lot creepier....
Sasaui Uchiha? As in the writer? Hmm.... I think it's kind of funny that Taku would rather go with another writer; I find it funny you chose a friend of mine XD
Well, now I gotta know what Taku is going to do after his encounter with Orochimaru. So keep up the good work!
Author's Response: I love an in character Oro, he\'s fun :3\r\n\r\nNow I gotta find out what Taku is going to do :x\r\n
Date: 26/08/11 Title: Chapter 4: Mary-sue make Taku red
*laughs hysterically* Okay give me a minute...
*laughs for ten more minutes*
I actually found this really funny. I couldn't tear my eyes away from the screen. I don't know what I find the funniest, but I do love paradoies XD This was really interesting, nice job.
Date: 25/04/12 Title: Chapter 6: Mr. Snake
I like Mr. Snake :D I think it was the flashback that did it for me, I gotta say. It just completes it for me ;) And I want that picture of Kabuto! You better have one up next chapter!
Author's Response: I'll break out the crayons and mspaint!
Rated: 15
[Reviews - 52]Kamichi tells me that ghosts have no reason to keep track of time, but I do anyways. It’s been four years. Four years since I was killed and so much has changed. Most of my friends have moved on without me, but there are three that keep my, “spirit” alive. Two visit my grave regularly, and one has made it her life’s mission to bring me back.
And she thinks she has finally found a way.
[Shino/OC] [Lee/OC] [Kakashi/OC]
Category: OC-centric, Het Romance > Fluff, General Fiction > Post-Naruto, Het Romance > Top Six Pairs > Naruto and Hinata, Het Romance > Top Six Pairs > Sasuke and Sakura
Characters: All
Genres: Drama, General, Humor, Romance, Tragedy
Warnings: Death, OOC
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 11 | Completed: Yes | Word count: 13966 | Read count: 18265 [Report This]
Published: 28/06/09 | Updated: 21/07/10
Date: 21/05/11 Title: Chapter 11: Lucky Eleven: Life Goes on Once More
Aw, it's already over! So upsetting, I really enjoyed reading your stories. This story and the original were very entertaining. Very nice job, this was a great way to conclude Thunder and Swirls. I'm really impressed with your style of writing, I really really enjoy it. Great work!
Rated: 15
[Reviews - 206]In the 19th Edo Infantry, everyone has a story.
There's Naruto Uzumaki, a young man with a big heart and courage like a lion. He'd throw himself into danger to save any of his comrades in arms, especially his tentmate, Sasuke Uchiha. But his bravery-- or is is lack of caring for his own life?-- is his way of atonement. Because there was one person that he just couldn't save...
There's Sasuke Uchiha, a raven-haired, strong young man who refuses to talk about his family or past. He has a secret. Someone's out to get him and finish a job they couldn't complete. Sasuke would do anything to escape his fate, even if it meant joining the army. Unfortunately, now has a tentmate that he's desperate to protect form his past...
There's Sakura Haruno, who is disguised as her brother, Kei, in order to help him escape from the fate of joining the army in the draft that came to her village. She's in s very sticky situation: she's a girl, so there's the job of keeping her identity a secret, especially from her tentmate, Izumi...
And there's Izumi Togu, a sensible young man who's caught up in the fact that his tentmate is a girl. Intrigued by this, he struggles between protecting her-- finding a way to send her home without having her killed because she's female-- or protecting her wishes of preventing her brother from ending up where she is...
In the end, they're all united by one thing: a common enemy that they'll have to defeat to save everything that's precious to them, especially each other.
Category: Alternate Universe & Crossovers > Other, Het Romance > Fluff, Shonen-ai/Yaoi Romance > Top Pairings > Sasuke and Naruto
Characters: All
Genres: Action/Adventure, Drama, Romance
Warnings: Death, OOC, Yaoi
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 51 | Completed: Yes | Word count: 73284 | Read count: 67085 [Report This]
Published: 19/07/09 | Updated: 01/11/09
Date: 14/03/11 Title: Chapter 51: Star Shower
I finally got around to finishing this story. And I absolutely loved it! This was so original, and it was so well-written. This was just an amazing story overall, and I'm so impressed with everything that happened. Great job on this, you're a really incredible author.
Rated: PG
[Reviews - 125]
Any of you have not read Kokoro Uchiha before, a new version called Cygnus Olor is up, so don't spoiler yourselves. =_=. For those of you who have and have been waiting for an update, please go ahead and read the latest chapter; it's an announcement. (no i'm not dropping Kokoro Uchiha) Thank you~
Category: OC-centric, General Fiction > Naruto, General Fiction > Timeless
Characters: All
Genres: Action/Adventure
Warnings: Death
Challenge: None
Series: Kokoro Uchiha
Chapters: 43 | Completed: No | Word count: 86283 | Read count: 63573 [Report This]
Published: 21/07/09 | Updated: 23/06/12
Date: 17/07/11 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41: Return and Reunion
Aw, well I'm glad your computer is alive and well, and that goes for your writing too. It's great to see an update. And with such a goo one too!
We once again see how Kokoro is still unable to ccontrol her emotions and her power. It's both frightening to see her so unlike herself and heartbreaking to see how lonely she feels during these moments of no control.
And the family scenes, all of them, were brilliant. We go from the arguing between Shura and his father to the heartfelt reunion between mother and children. All were amazingly illustrated, great work.
It was another wonderful chapter. Great work! I love this story and the way you write it, so I hope you are able to update soon. But whatever and whenever is perfectly fine, as I know it will be great ;)
Author's Response: Haha, alive and well, I like that! ~ As always, all I can say is... thanks for the heartfelt review. After reading it I went to work with renewed vigor on the next chapter! It\'s really nice to know what others think of my work. ~ Man, really? Seriously, that last sentence is really made me really happy! In response, I will rush to finish my next chapter and post it up. Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 01/08/11 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42: Bonus chapter: The Sibling Debate
Inconvenience? Yes, yes there was. Know why?
Because it made me laugh and then left me hanging! I know this was just something to fill in, but I couldn't help but really want more comedy. Loved it :D
Author's Response: All I can do, really, is laugh like an idiot \'cause I really love that you like my story! I\'m working on the next chapter right now and I hop to have it up in a few days!\r\nOh, but.. uhm... it\'s probably gonna be another filler.... With comedy, though!
Date: 26/02/11 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39: "That's right. We'll see them soon."
Ah! I've been wanting to read this story for a long time, but things kept coming up that prevented me from getting into it. I've finally caught up, and may I just say... I am so glad that I decided to read this! I couldn't tear my eyes away from the computer, this story is so good! Everything that has happened so far is completely amazing and fantastic. Everything seems to tie in so well, and the plot is just phenomenal! I love Kokoro and Luna and all of your other OC! This is just a great story overall, and I can't wait for the next update. This story is incredible, I hope you know that. Please post the next chapter whenever you find time, because this fic is just too good. Thanks for posting this!
Author's Response: 100th review! Wow, this is such a nice review; I\'m so glad that after 39 chapters people are still reading my story and a hundred people told me what they thought about it! ^^ Really? That\'s so nice, i\'m really happy! It\'s so cool that you think this story is incredible (incredible!) and I\'m glad you told me.
Date: 16/06/11 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40: The Dandelion Song
As, you're welcome for your 100th review. I'm glad my review was able to make you that happy. And you have no idea how happy I was to see an update. I nearly leaped out of my seat. I'm happy to hear that you received good grades after all your hard work. That makes this chapter even better, honestly. I loved this chapter so much! Your description of Kokoro losing control was genius, it was so realistic for the situation. You did a wonderful fantastic phenomenal job with this chapter. I hope you continue to do extraordinarily well with this story. It really is great. Keep up the great work!
Author's Response: Your reviews are really nice and i feel really appreciated after reading them! I\'m so glad you liked this chapter so much and my story so much; ^^, that\'s like amazing to know, you know? Thanks so much, and thanks for reviewing!
Rated: U
[Reviews - 21]
Category: Alternate Universe & Crossovers > High School Fics, Het Romance > Fluff, Alternate Universe & Crossovers > Real World
Characters: Hinata Hyuuga, Naruto Uzumaki, Sakura Haruno, Sasuke Uchiha
Genres: Action/Adventure, Humor, Romance, Supernatural
Warnings: None
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 6 | Completed: No | Word count: 11329 | Read count: 10942 [Report This]
Published: 22/07/09 | Updated: 29/12/09
Date: 14/03/11 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 4: So Soon?
Aww, this is such a good story! I can't help but wonder if you're going to continue this. I really hope you do. Please? Pretty please? It's too good of a story not to. I hope you do eventually come back to continue this story. I'm really interested in seeing how it ends. Hopefully, you will find time to add more to this story, because it is a really exceptional fanfiction.
Rated: U
[Reviews - 18]Category: Non-Naruto Fiction > Poems
Characters: None
Genres: Poetry
Warnings: AU
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 22 | Completed: Yes | Word count: 7665 | Read count: 30385 [Report This]
Published: 23/08/09 | Updated: 25/01/15
Date: 14/04/12 Title: Chapter 16: Don't Look At Me....
These poems are really good. All of them, including the ones from the previous chapters. Very deep, very well-written, it kind of makes me eager to read your stories. I hadn't read any of it because almost everything said it was being rewritten. So I'm a bit excited to see that there should be new posts soon. Can't wait to see what you have in store ;)
Author's Response: Thank you, you review is very kind and heart warming. I did not expect to get reviews so soon and get three at that in the same day! It makes me very pleased to know my favorite readers are still out there. I'm also very glad you are eager to read my other stories. I have no qualms if you take a gander at Memory Touch or the When Playing Hide and Seek... I don't really see any need to majorly alter them from what they are as of now. The others though, I will be rewritting them extensively, especially Seeing Beauty. If you like to read them to see what my writing was like ...2 years ago then you are welcomed to your fancy. Any way, thank you for your review and till I have written more, have a good day.
CKL
Rated: 15
[Reviews - 6]Category: Het Romance > Fluff, General Fiction > Naruto Shippuuden
Characters: All, Pair OCNaru
Genres: Action/Adventure, Drama, Romance
Warnings: None
Challenges: , Naruto X OC (Preferably taking place in Shippuden)
Challenge: , Naruto X OC (Preferably taking place in Shippuden)
Series: None
Chapters: 30 | Completed: Yes | Word count: 40194 | Read count: 41024 [Report This]
Published: 05/09/09 | Updated: 07/01/11
Date: 21/02/11 Title: Chapter 30: HAPPILY EVER AFTER
Awwwwwwww........
I loved the whole thing! You had such a great plot and a great character and great description and.... just great everything! This was such a good story. Thanks for posting it and finishing it! This was really awesome!
Rated: 15
[Reviews - 37]Reality is such a wonderful wake up call.
The places you never expected to exist. The people you’d only dreamt of meeting. The events of their tomorrow having already passed in your present. Was my reality their illusion? Was their illusion my reality? I haven’t been sure for the past 20 years.
As an outsider, I was hated as a missing nin. As a traitor. As the enemy. Like the one I followed, I was wanted in almost every country. I had no regrets however. Well, no regrets when it came to him. Never when it came to him. He was the one I turned to. My leader. My light. My solace.
We were despised. Looked down upon. Hated for our crimes and I have to admit, everyone had every right to hate us. However, despite all this loathing, I feel the need to write what it felt like to live the life that we did, for not many know what really goes on in the obscure world of a rogue ninja.
I can only hope that by reading this, people can better understand us and the paths we have chosen. And I hope they know that our actions were and are not based on evil or ill-intent, but loneliness, fear and most of all: pain.
Category: General Fiction > Naruto Shippuuden
Characters: All, Pair OCSasu
Genres: Action/Adventure, Dark, Romance
Warnings: Dark, Death
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 19 | Completed: No | Word count: 47369 | Read count: 32099 [Report This]
Published: 09/12/09 | Updated: 27/12/11
Date: 27/12/11 Title: Chapter 19: True North
I almost cried during this chapter... It was so heartbreaking to watch her leave and have Sasuke prepare to kill her but then decide not to. And then she confessed her love to him accidentally... Ah, so sweet...
Great chapter though. There was a lot of emotion and thought in this portrayed from both sides, and it really paid off; the detail was excellent. Keep up the awesome work with this story!
Date: 19/12/11 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18
Yay, update! This was awesome. I loved the fire spirit. Somehow, it seems kind of original yet really interesting. I don't know, I just really love the idea of her being able to talk to fire.
I quite enjoyed this chapter. It brought back a lot of issues that need to be resolved for the plot line. This was definitely a very interesting read. Nice job! Keep up the awesome work!
Author's Response: Thank you! I wanted to add a different...vibe? To the story. I guess you could say, even though it makes no bloody sense. Anyway, thank you for the review! :] and I hope you enjoy the nex chapter.
Date: 26/11/11 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16
Okay, I stayed up until 2:30 in the morning to finish reading this. I passed out after that, so I wasn't able to leave a review until now. I'm running on five hours of sleep, so if my review makes absolutely no sense, please bear with me XP
My freaking gosh, I had seen this story around for a while, and I sadly never got around to reading it before now. I'm so disappointed about that, this fic is really good. Like, REALLY good.
I will say I honestly had my doubts about it when I discovered it was a 'girl falls into Narutoverse and falls in love with Sasuke Uchiha' because I have read so many of those stories by now that I want to choke something.
HOWEVER!
This story was somehow different, and it really kept my interest. There were parts of this that should have made me roll my eyes at the clicheness of it, but the truth is, it wasn't too cliche, and you actually made every bit of this story thus far completely original.
From the moment she landed in the Sound Village in the Shippuden series, I was hooked. When Sasuke was named her sensei, I laughed hysterically. When I learned more about Dante's awful past and how it was, in a way, similar to Sasuke's, I inwardly gasped. When she jumped off that cliff, I had a freaking heart attack. When Sasuke saved her, I was revived and I fell in love. Now with this Organ Traffickers arc, I am completely on the edge of my seat, staring at the Most Recent page, waiting for you to update again.
The only complaint I have is that you tend to forget words a lot when writing. Usually small words (but sometimes others) like: the, a, would, then, not, etc. I'm assuming it was because you wrote really fast and just went to posting. Plus, I know that the first 15 chapters of this were posted a while back, and I noted chapter 16 didn't have as many mistakes, though it did have just one or two or so. That's the only thing that bothered me, but I can get over tiny errors like that :P
This story so frar probably stands out in my mind as one of the best of its kind. I'm sad to see that this fic isn't as reviewed as it should be, and I wish I had been awake enough to leave a review each chapter, so I apologize for that. But this is an excellent story, and I definitely look forward to more. I really hope you continue to write more, this story is too good not to continue. Great job with this fanfic so far, please update soon and keep up the awesome work!
Author's Response: Oh my, I don\'t know quite what to say except thank you! I was aware of just how many stories people write about that particular scenario, but I wanted to do something different, I just wasn\'t sure how, so I just started writing and went from there, it just kind of happened and I mean, the story isn\'t even close to being over yet, there\'s still SO much to do and go through and just. So much. I kind of gave up for a while because I had no idea where I wanted to take the story, and it just kind of died, and I\'m really disappointed I let it sit for so long. \r\n\r\nAs far as my forgetting words goes, I know I do that a lot, but it\'s because I type so fast and my mind moves faster than my fingers and I just don\'t notice I\'ve missed them. But thank you so much for your reviews, they keep me going :]
Author's Response: Oh my, I don\'t know quite what to say except thank you! I was aware of just how many stories people write about that particular scenario, but I wanted to do something different, I just wasn\'t sure how, so I just started writing and went from there, it just kind of happened and I mean, the story isn\'t even close to being over yet, there\'s still SO much to do and go through and just. So much. I kind of gave up for a while because I had no idea where I wanted to take the story, and it just kind of died, and I\'m really disappointed I let it sit for so long. \r\n\r\nAs far as my forgetting words goes, I know I do that a lot, but it\'s because I type so fast and my mind moves faster than my fingers and I just don\'t notice I\'ve missed them. But thank you so much for your reviews, they keep me going :]
Date: 28/11/11 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17
Yay, she remembers who she is! That's so exciting, and now they're going back to the Sound Village! I have been so scared to see what would happen, but I can somewhat relax now. Though I wonder if the Organ Traffickers will be reappearing soon, that'll be interesting.
Great chapter! This was awesome, and I'm really happy that things seem alright again. Awesome job with this installment, keep up the amazing work!
Author's Response: Thanks again! Ha, and as far as the Organ Traffickers, rest assured they\'ll make a reappearance, the plot line involves more than just Loren and this Daimyou, the dark roots run much deeper... :]
Rated: PG
[Reviews - 3]One-shot, not too long. I'm bad at summaries. Sorry. ^-^
Category: General Fiction > Post-Naruto, Het Romance > Top Six Pairs > Naruto and Sakura
Characters: Naruto Uzumaki, Pair NaruSaku, Sakura Haruno
Genres: Angst, Drama, Romance, Tragedy
Warnings: Dark, Death
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 | Completed: Yes | Word count: 2089 | Read count: 2462 [Report This]
Published: 10/12/09 | Updated: 10/12/09
Date: 14/03/11 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Ah?!?! I thought everything was going to be okay in the end! And then you went and made an ending like that! Wah! I'm so upset. I'm hysterical from all the tears. This was just an amazing one-shot. I'm thoroughly impressed. Great work, even though my heart is ripped out now.
Rated: 15
[Reviews - 35]Category: Het Romance > Fluff, Alternate Universe & Crossovers > Minor AU, General Fiction > Timeless
Characters: Naruto Uzumaki, Pair NaruHina, Pair OCSasu, Sasuke Uchiha
Genres: Action/Adventure, Drama, Romance
Warnings: None
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 33 | Completed: No | Word count: 136772 | Read count: 66722 [Report This]
Published: 10/12/09 | Updated: 19/09/10
Date: 30/12/10 Title: Chapter 33: Phase Two (3)
Whoo, I just finished reading this entire story. And may I just say...this story is so freaking amazing! I've never read anything like this. You're incredibly descriptive and this idea is really unique. And now you've left it at a cliffhanger. So now I'm going to beg for an update. Please please pretty please update soon because I need to know what happens next!