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Hajimemashite! I'm completely new to the world of fanfic, so I'd apprecite it if everyone would read and enjoy my stories and offer lots of feedback! Doozo yoroshiku onegaishimasu!
Rated: 15
[Reviews - 72]This version will no longer be worked on for I have rewritten it due to some writing difficulties that were too great in this version. The new version will be named A Seeing Beauty (2.0). Hope you enjoy.
CKL
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Category: Alternate Universe & Crossovers > Crossovers, General Fiction > Naruto, Het Romance > Fluff, Het Romance > Angst, Alternate Universe & Crossovers > Real World
Characters: All, Pair OCSasu
Genres: Action/Adventure, Angst, Dark, Drama, Graphic lemon, Humor, Tragedy
Warnings: Dark, Death, OOC, Rape, Sexual Themes
Challenge: None
Series: The Beauty
Chapters: 20 | Completed: Yes | Word count: 51384 | Read count: 31223 [Report This]
Published: 19/04/09 | Updated: 07/05/10
Date: 20/07/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: The Beginning of Anew
I really like the story, especially the unique character names. I can tell it's gonna get interesting!
Author's Response: hmm...i never thought their names were unique in the general word....ty
Date: 20/07/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: The Beginning of Anew
Well, Gevdyn I've never heard before, and I've never actually met a Shiela or a Jasmine, so they're unique to me lol.
Author's Response: well...my grams name is Shelia, I met a few girls named Jasmine...and Gevdwyn...he\'s a friend of mine..its not his real name though, just a pen.
Date: 21/07/09 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 Confrontation
Somehow, despite being about a rather serious situation, you manage to make this kind of funny. I like it!
~kiku~
Author's Response: yaee!wait it was a serious situation....man i need to thik alil mor if i didnt realize this sooner.....
Date: 21/07/09 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 Interrogation
Umm... don't tell anyone, but I'm actually pretty klutzy too lol. I wonder how the ninja are going to start reacting when she accurately predicts their futures...
Author's Response: *evil grin**** well,... her past knowledge on the charas is good but...she really wont need it..u\'ll see
Date: 21/07/09 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 New Ninja Aboard
Mmm... I wonder if she's getting all this a little too easily? seems like all she has to do is think about techniques and she can do them... I think she's funny though.
Author's Response: hm.......im going to over this chapter to were u are coming from, ty for the tip...*goes off to investate
Date: 21/07/09 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 The Secret Revealed With Ramen
Lol. I'm waiting for her crusade for vegan ramen recipies!
Author's Response: ....i nvr thought thoses....i was just going to hav her grim up and try to get use to at least the smells so she can hang out with Naruto mor..ty for the idea!\r\n
Date: 21/07/09 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 Horrific Memories and A Chance
Wow...that was quite... unfortunate. I really see your writing style coming through here though.
Author's Response: yaee!!! wait...i hav a writing style oooooooooo....sry im lil on the hyper side w/ sugar crap and too much laughing or running i thik im lil crueler to my charas than needed be but thts a lil me in me sayin tht
Rated: PG
[Reviews - 125]
Any of you have not read Kokoro Uchiha before, a new version called Cygnus Olor is up, so don't spoiler yourselves. =_=. For those of you who have and have been waiting for an update, please go ahead and read the latest chapter; it's an announcement. (no i'm not dropping Kokoro Uchiha) Thank you~
Category: OC-centric, General Fiction > Naruto, General Fiction > Timeless
Characters: All
Genres: Action/Adventure
Warnings: Death
Challenge: None
Series: Kokoro Uchiha
Chapters: 43 | Completed: No | Word count: 86283 | Read count: 63866 [Report This]
Published: 21/07/09 | Updated: 23/06/12
Date: 22/07/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: The Calm before the Storm
Aww, Kokoro is so cute! Lol. It seems like this will be a good story, even if the chapter is a bit short.
Author's Response: Thanks! Sorry for making the chapter short. I\'ll try to make the next one longer. =) :)
Date: 22/07/09 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Sasuke's Worry
It's really strange. Is it possible to have sad warm-and-fuzzies? Because I think that's what this story gives me lol. I like it though. I hope Kokoro doesn't grow up as sad as Sasuke does, though. I'd like it if her personality were more optimistic even despite what happened, you know? It would make for a nice contrast. Keep up the good work! My only criticism is that your chapters are too short. I always want a bit more!
~Kiku~
Author's Response: Yeah, I guess it has sad warm-and fuzzies. I\'m sort of trying to build up a sort of pity Kokoro and Sasuke, I guess I\'m trying to make the reader understand what they\'re going through. Kokoro is going to be exactly that, optimistic! :) She\'ll be happy, and sort of hold Sasuke up, you know? Thanks for reviewing. It really helps! I\'ll try and make the next chapter longer. I\'m glad you like the story so far! =)
Rated: 15 [Reviews - 1]
Category: OC-centric, General Fiction > Character-Centric, General Fiction > Naruto Shippuuden
Characters: All
Genres: Action/Adventure, Fantasy, Mystery
Warnings: Death
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 6 | Completed: No | Word count: 20618 | Read count: 7116 [Report This]
Published: 21/07/09 | Updated: 14/09/09
Date: 21/07/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Is Shikamaru the main character of this? I think it'd be pretty awesome if he were. A different perspective for sure. Just one thing: could you differentiate between POV switches? Even an * on a line by itself would do the trick. I was really confused the first time.
Good story though.
~kiku~
Author's Response: I\'m a fan of Shikamaru so I tried to put him in it alittle more with Naruto sense he has higher responsiblities. As for the POV do you mean whenever I change areas in the story? If so then will do.