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Title: Sweet Sasuke by TheSharpieBitch
Rated: 15 Liked [Reviews - 5]
Summary: Like a good little boy, Sasuke does what his aniki asks him to do. Character Death. Oneshot. ItachiSasuke.
Category: Shonen-ai/Yaoi Romance > Top Pairings > Itachi and Sasuke
Characters: Itachi Uchiha, Pair ItaSasu, Sasuke Uchiha
Genres: Angst
Warnings: Death
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 | Completed: Yes | Word count: 1207 | Read count: 2241 [Report This]
Published: 13/04/06 | Updated: 13/04/06


Reviewer: Dag Signed Liked
Date: 09/05/08 Title: Chapter 1: Sweet Sasuke.

This is really good, the descriptions are just gorgeous. It's an original idea and its beautifully written. One problem though: its 'dying' not 'dieing'... *Spelling Nazi*... apart from that, I love it. 10/10.



Title: X-mas Songs, Naruto-style! by ladygizarme
Rated: 15 Liked [Reviews - 18]
Summary: A series of X-mas song parodies featuring the Naruto boys. Some songs may involve shounen-ai/yaoi and/or violence. #6-11: new for X-mas 2007
Category: General Fiction, Shonen-ai/Yaoi Romance
Characters: None
Genres: Parody
Warnings: None
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 14 | Completed: No | Word count: 3961 | Read count: 25940 [Report This]
Published: 14/07/06 | Updated: 18/07/09


Reviewer: Dag Signed Liked
Date: 13/05/08 Title: Chapter 11: Have Yourself a SasuNaru Christmas

HAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!! This is great!!! Five cock rings! Hahaha I nearly wet myself laughing at that! And verse 5 of 'Bed the Boys' hehehehe. You have to write more for this Christmas... Damn its only May! I really wish you'd write some more Naruto song parodies, they're so ace! You could do other songs (non christmas, maybe popular chart songs that everyone knows) hmm?

Author's Response: XD Glad you got such a kick out of these. I tend to add more to this every July and Christmas. I do have another set of non-Christmas songs, but not very many. They\'re just something I write when I get the inspiration to parody.



Title: Youthful Love by kurisuchin45556
Rated: R18 Liked [Reviews - 25]
Summary: Lee hasn't been able to find a girl that was something truely special to him. While on a routine patrol that changes. Her name is Kuri and she's about to change his life forever
Category: OC-centric
Characters: All
Genres: Action/Adventure, Drama, General, Humor, Romance
Warnings: Death
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 11 | Completed: No | Word count: 14524 | Read count: 4716 [Report This]
Published: 23/11/07 | Updated: 21/07/08


Reviewer: Dag Signed Liked
Date: 23/07/08 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Well, I've finally got round to reading this story, and its great! You stay very true to Lee's character. The things he says in this story I can imagine him saying in the manga/anime, so great job! Lol he's such a gentleman. I feel sorry for Kuri though, she has a sad past. Sweet story, keep it up :D

Author's Response: thank you very much! I really have to try when it comes to Lee, he\'s a very hard character to replicate. And yea, he is a gentleman, but i figured that would just be his style. As far as Kuri goes, well, that past sorta popped up in my mind cuz my dad\'s a cop.



Title: People Who Are Important: Book Two by XoxgaaraxoX
Rated: 18 Liked [Reviews - 66]
Summary: {2 New Chapters March 5, 2009} Sasuke's back and Sakura doesn't know how to react to him. Can the emotionally stunted Uchiha fix his mess? Naruto finally starts to see Hinata, Gaara's son turns one, and Shikamaru pops the question! Sasu/Saku, Naru/Hina, Shika/Tema..REVIEW!!!!
Category: Het Romance > Top Six Pairs > Naruto and Hinata, Het Romance > Top Six Pairs > Neji and Tenten, Het Romance > Top Six Pairs > Sasuke and Sakura, Het Romance > Top Six Pairs > Shikamaru and Temari
Characters: Gaara, Hinata Hyuuga, Pair SasuSaku, Pair ShikaTema
Genres: Angst, Drama, Romance
Warnings: Death
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 25 | Completed: No | Word count: 147431 | Read count: 21151 [Report This]
Published: 03/03/08 | Updated: 19/06/09


Reviewer: Dag Signed Liked
Date: 17/05/08 Title: Chapter 12: Turbulence: Part One

A twist! *falls on floor in a fit of spasms* Oh NOOOO!!!!! Poor Gaara, he doesn't have much luck does he? I hope Shia's baby is going to be ok. I love it, I'm all excited for the next chapter. This and book one are probably the best fanfics I've ever read.



Reviewer: Dag Signed Liked
Date: 30/04/08 Title: Chapter 10: We Need to Talk

Wow! C'est fantastique! *excited squealy* Good stuff!!! I agree about your review predicament though, your stories definitely warrent many more reviews. It can be really frustrating, especially when your read count shoots up and people aren't bothering to leave a little feedback. But you should know that your stories are consistantly fantastic and you can't stop writing because the art will chase you dammit!!!! And if the art doesn't hunt you down, I will!!!! Keep it up, much love, Dag x



Reviewer: Dag Signed Liked
Date: 13/04/08 Title: Chapter 1: Author's Note

Great chapter, as always. It's interesting to see how the characters' emotions develop over time. Two weeks until the next update?! Are you kidding me?!

Author's Response: Sry, I\'m not kidding. I\'m kind of swamped right now, so I\'m trying to put myself on a schedule. But...If i do get the next chapter of Kazekage of Love finished in enough time to finish the next chapter of this...I\'ll post next week.



Reviewer: Dag Signed Liked
Date: 04/05/08 Title: Chapter 11: The Elemental Ninja

La di da di da. Time for my weekly 'people who are important' review again. A glitteringly brilliant chapter as always. I like the way you add cultural and social information in there...Like how the seal comes from a time in history where the jutsu was ritualesque. Its really impressive because it adds depth to the story and makes it a lot more plausible. It gives the reader a credible insight into the world they are reading about. 'Shower-time with Gaara'... Waahh that's one you definitely need to write :D mwahahaha. Lv Dag. Over and out.



Reviewer: Dag Signed Liked
Date: 22/05/08 Title: Chapter 13: Turbulence: Part Two

Awww twins!!! eeeeee!!! Amazing chapter (as always). The "Japanese Sprinkles" are ace. To the person who didn't like the inclusion of Japanese language in your story...I say sod off...If anything it increases the authenticity and is certainly not 'amaturish and misplaced'... in fact, its quite the opposite. Sasuke's development is really intriguing and you always pace these kinds of things so well, I'm in awe. Your imagination and attention to detail add so much spirit to your writing, and there's always some humour in there somewhere so that no matter how serious and dramatic the storyline gets, there's always something to make me chuckle. I literally can not wait for the next chapter!!!! :D :D :D



Reviewer: Dag Signed Liked
Date: 16/06/08 Title: Chapter 16: Say What?

Great chapter, this story gets more and more intriguing with every update. But gaahhh I thought the traitor would be Tadashi himself... hehe that would have been a really cruel twist. "That baby was me Hina-chan..." that line was so great, I squealed with suspense for Hinata's reaction. And what the hell is going on with Sasuke??? This is ominous... Bring on the next chapter!!!



Title: The Kazekage of Love(Update 04/03/09) by XoxgaaraxoX
Rated: 18 Liked [Reviews - 31]
Summary: “What exactly attracted you to Gaara?".Sai smiled.....“His penis of course, ”.. a fun story about Gaara searching for love...Gaa/lots of ppl, Naru/Sasu, Shika/Tema, Anal, Lemon, possible Threesome
Category: General Fiction > Character-Centric, General Fiction > Naruto
Characters: Gaara
Genres: Graphic lemon, Humor, Romance
Warnings: Yaoi
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 12 | Completed: No | Word count: 72180 | Read count: 6231 [Report This]
Published: 25/03/08 | Updated: 03/04/09


Reviewer: Dag Signed Liked
Date: 14/05/08 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

I agree with mikicandy- threesome!



Reviewer: Dag Signed Liked
Date: 27/03/08 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Hahaha I loved this! It made me laugh so much. You should definitely continue with this.



Reviewer: Dag Signed Liked
Date: 07/04/08 Title: Chapter 3: Eliminatio # 1

I'm really enjoying this. More, more!!! Your way with words leaves me speechless. Have you ever thought about writing professionally?

Author's Response: I have, but idk if I could deal with all the deadlines and such! I actually am planning an original story, when I have it up I\'ll let everyone know to check it out on Fictionpress.com



Reviewer: Dag Signed Liked
Date: 09/04/08 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Yeah that sounds great, let me know when you put it online. I've also started writing an original story, I'll give you a heads up when it's sorted if you want to check it out. Thanks and keep writing! x



Reviewer: Dag Signed Liked
Date: 30/04/08 Title: Chapter 4: First Day at Gaara's

Ace chapter! Immensely entertaining. Funny, original and damn kinky ;-) lol. Naruto and Sasuke are so sweet together and I loved the bit on Chouji too- it was cute and interesting because Chouji isn't featured in fanfics very often. I think GaaraxChouji is a very unusual pairing but you pulled the scene off great. The focus on the conflict between Sasuke and Itachi was impressive too, and very well written. All in all, a very imaginative story. Can't wait to see how it all works out. Keep it up, your updates are one of the highlights of my miserable little life hehehe. Ok, hope that was a decent review, and I hope I didn't ramble on too much...



Reviewer: Dag Signed Liked
Date: 30/04/08 Title: Chapter 4: First Day at Gaara's

Oh, and, Naruto in a french maid dress?.....Priceless!



Reviewer: Dag Signed Liked
Date: 13/05/08 Title: Chapter 5: First Challenge and Second Elimination Part One

Gaahhhh where's the next chapter?!! Come on already, I'm dying here!!!



Title: Open Gates, Frozen Hearts by killer_carebear
Rated: PG Liked [Reviews - 2]
Summary: An Alternate Universe based on the Victorian England era. The Villages are Nations of their own who are in a time of peace, and due to this peace, the Nation of Sand has finally opened its gates to the world. It has been almost 500 years since one has stepped inside the gates of Sand. They're young Sultan is interested in the cultures of the outside world and is willing to take any who would come to its doors.

Queen Tsunade of the Nation of Leaves has sent Colonel Rock Lee on a mission to the Nation of Sand. Along with his partner, Private Naruto Uzumaki, he will learn of the mysterious Sultan and perhaps learn to thaw his frozen heart.


(I can't seem to figure out the character's part...so Gaara isn't the only character. I'll change that once I figure it out) Characters: Rock Lee, Gaara, Naruto, Deidara Warning: Will contain Yaoi in later chapters. GaaLee
Category: Shonen-ai/Yaoi Romance > Warned (Shonen-ai/Yaoi), Shonen-ai/Yaoi Romance > Fluff (Shonen-ai/Yaoi)
Characters: Gaara
Genres: Fantasy
Warnings: AU
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 4 | Completed: No | Word count: 4402 | Read count: 5314 [Report This]
Published: 27/03/08 | Updated: 17/06/08


Reviewer: Dag Signed Liked
Date: 15/04/08 Title: Chapter 1: Beginnings

Wow! This is a really great idea for a story and it's very well written too. I'm really enjoying it so far, update soon!

Author's Response: Thank you very much. Of what I read of your story, it is very good as well. ^^ Thank you for the comment and please keep reading!



Title: Reflections of the Past, Illusions of the Future by SpeakerofNaught
Rated: R18 Liked [Reviews - 7]
Summary: Two shinobi are trapped in a timeless state for five hundred years. Konoha's gone, shinobi are nothing but mere legends, etc. NaruHina fluff, several Oc's, Rated M for now, maybe M later. Not 'our' present world, but a modern one.
Category: Het Romance > Top Six Pairs > Naruto and Hinata
Characters: Hinata Hyuuga, Naruto Uzumaki, Tsunade
Genres: Action/Adventure
Warnings: None
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 9 | Completed: No | Word count: 26777 | Read count: 3742 [Report This]
Published: 07/04/08 | Updated: 26/07/08


Reviewer: Dag Signed Liked
Date: 08/04/08 Title: Chapter 1: Prolouge Part 1

I've just read the first chapter and so far this story is really really good!

Author's Response: HAZZUH!!! I\'ve got my first review from TONFA! If your still interested after the next few chapters, then I guess I\'ll keep posting here. Like I said, my main site is FF.net. Check out the story Herin that I\'m writing as a kind of secondary fic. If you can\'t find it here, then check FF.net under the same user name as here.



Title: Days of Payback by CrimsonClover
Rated: PG Liked [Reviews - 7]
Summary: It was supposed to be a simple school trip. But when you mix an all boys school with an all girls school at the zoo, throw in a few idiots and bad ideas you get complete chaos.

Co-Author: ForyourLove
Category: TONFA Award Category, Alternate Universe & Crossovers > High School Fics
Characters: All
Genres: Action/Adventure, Drama, General, Humor, Parody
Warnings: AU, OOC, Yaoi
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 | Completed: No | Word count: 3944 | Read count: 5999 [Report This]
Published: 30/04/08 | Updated: 01/05/08


Reviewer: Dag Signed Liked
Date: 03/05/08 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

This story is ace, hehehe, it made me giggle. Poor Gaara, bless him, he's so cute. He wants to see the pandas dammit!!! Keep it up, its great. Don't delay the next chapter!

Author's Response: Thanks so much. Sara and I will try to bang out a new chapter soon, but might be hard cause I just moved and she\'s... Not really online that much lately. But we\'ll try!



Title: A Gentle Flower by Aerthran Daerth
Rated: 18 Liked [Reviews - 3]
Summary: The compilations of the genin of the Hidden Leaf Village losing their virginities.
Category:
Characters: Haku, Naruto Uzumaki
Genres: Romance
Warnings: Yaoi
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 | Completed: No | Word count: 4498 | Read count: 13615 [Report This]
Published: 07/05/08 | Updated: 13/05/08


Reviewer: Dag Signed Liked
Date: 13/05/08 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2-defrosting heart

Cute! Can't wait to see which character will be next lol.

Author's Response: I can honeslty say th next chapter sucks!!! The foruth will be good ((Inoxchouji or SakuraxLee)) this chapter is NejixTen-ten, an dbecause ten-ten has like no lines i made her a slut who basically rapes the young hyuga. I hate it soooooooo much >.<

Author's Response: I can honeslty say th next chapter sucks!!! The foruth will be good ((Inoxchouji or SakuraxLee)) this chapter is NejixTen-ten, an dbecause ten-ten has like no lines i made her a slut who basically rapes the young hyuga. I hate it soooooooo much >.<



Title: The Russian Roulette Kids by mariquix89
Rated: 15 Liked [Reviews - 11]
Summary: –So tell me, who’s ready to die tonight?- he asked, with a slight something in his voice that sounded too close to amusement or was it sadistic enjoyment?
Category: Alternate Universe & Crossovers > High School Fics
Characters: Chouji Akimichi, Gaara, Kiba Inuzuka, Rock Lee, Naruto Uzumaki, Neji Hyuuga, Sakura Haruno, Sasuke Uchiha
Genres: Dark
Warnings: AU, Death
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 4 | Completed: No | Word count: 3814 | Read count: 6274 [Report This]
Published: 12/05/08 | Updated: 27/06/08


Reviewer: Dag Signed Liked
Date: 13/05/08 Title: Chapter 1: Why?

This story is really really good. The suspense was unreal, it's not often that the first chapter of a story draws me in and intrigues me as much as this did. Just one problem that I spotted- its 'roulette' not 'rullet' ... *spelling Nazi (lol)* By the way, I read your response to the review below and I'm so sorry to hear about your friend. Anyway, update soon, I'm eager to read the next chapter!

Author's Response: Hey thank you! i knew something was wrong with the spelling, and usually I don\'t like what I write but I guess this is coming out good, and yes I will try to update soon. And about my friend it was a while ago, but thanks!



Reviewer: Dag Signed Liked
Date: 27/05/08 Title: Chapter 2: Hinata

Great chapter! It's a really interesting idea for a story and your style of writing is ace. Keep it up!



Reviewer: Dag Signed Liked
Date: 20/06/08 Title: Chapter 3: First death

Awww that's so sad :( poor Hinata. Great chapter, as always. I just wish the chapters were longer, I think it would give you more of a chance to elaborate and add detail and build up/deepen the storyline. At the minute its a bit choppy cuz the chapters are quite short. But its a great story so far, your descriptions are beautiful. Update soon :D



Title: Okashii by fuyuko
Rated: 15 Liked [Reviews - 2]
Summary: Flashbacks haunt her eternally as she frantically seeks much needed sleep during the wintry, astringent nights. Excruciating visions of her intoxicated father hazardously gripping the emaciated, glass neck of a smattered, risky wine bottle in his ghost white hand.
“Give me back my Utako!!” stipulated the distraught man riotously, his feral eyes shifting madly, “You’re not my daughter!!”

Blood.
It evenly coated the surface of every once gleaming exterior, dripping crimson substance seeping leisurely onto the polished wooden floor sketchily.
Memoirs of brokenhearted scenes were burned heedlessly into a blameless child’s chaste mind. Will he be able to help her create unsullied, blissful recollections?
Category: Het Romance > Angst, General Fiction > Naruto, OC-centric
Characters: Naruto Uzumaki, OC, Pair OCSasu, Sakura Haruno, Sasuke Uchiha
Genres: Action/Adventure, Angst, Romance, Tragedy
Warnings: Death
Challenges: SASUKExOC,
Challenge: SASUKExOC,
Series: None
Chapters: 5 | Completed: No | Word count: 7738 | Read count: 6676 [Report This]
Published: 08/08/08 | Updated: 29/08/08


Reviewer: Dag Signed Liked
Date: 29/08/08 Title: Chapter 1: Saisho

Hi, I just had a look at the first chapter, and although I appreciate what you are trying to do (and you're obviously skilled with language), I feel that this story is too... wordy. I know that descriptions are an integral part of writing, but it is possible to OVER describe, which is what I think you've done here. I find myself having to read a sentence over again because there was too much detail to take in the first time around. Words should add meaning, not obscure it. Still, your writing is beautiful and you should definitely continue. I hope I don't sound like I'm being mean or over-critical. Afterall, I wouldn't bother reviewing if your story was pants :p lol. Tis just my opinion. But you have my utmost respect. We need more writers like you who really make the effort.

Author's Response: XD Yes, people have told me that my stories are too \"wordy\" and I\'m trying to tone it down a bit. I hope it\'s getting better. =.= \r\nI understand what you mean, I\'ll try my best!! :] I accept your comment for what you\'re trying to say, because as a reviewer and reader, I can understand better as to what the community wants. X) Thank you for taking the time to review!!



Title: Aishiteru, baka. by Miki Everless
Rated: 15 Liked [Reviews - 8]
Summary: EDITED/REWRITTEN!

I see the world through Engel Sciria's eyes and body as she suffers through heartbreak and loss of memory.

What the interesting thing was that when she woke up the next morning.... She was in the Land of Rain.

MAIN PAIRING: Naru/OC
Category: OC-centric, Het Romance > Fluff, Het Romance > Warned, Alternate Universe & Crossovers > Other
Characters: All
Genres: Action/Adventure, Drama, Fantasy, Romance
Warnings: None
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 5 | Completed: No | Word count: 5215 | Read count: 8576 [Report This]
Published: 16/08/08 | Updated: 30/10/08


Reviewer: Dag Signed Liked
Date: 18/08/08 Title: Chapter 2: Acting on Shock

Hehehe, well I was intrigued to read this story. The first chapter broke my heart :( she was so excited and then he did THAT! Hopefully she'll find someone in the Narutoverse to mend her heart again :) I'm liking this so far, but I'm wondering what Hatoru/Hotaru looks like. Update soon!

Author's Response: Really? *puppy eyes* Yeah! thanks for the review, Dag.
\r\nshe mispronounced her name, so she\'s gonna have to live with \'Hatoru\'. =D
\r\nthere\'ll be a description in the next chapter. cha!