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Any fic with no real plot and humor based. Doesn't require correct spelling, paragraphing or punctuation but it's a very good idea.
 
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Title: 'When life gives you Emails' by SamaSurreal
Rated: 18 Liked [Reviews - 136]
Summary: When you hear a bing what do you get? Mail. A sasuke and naruto story. ^^ * Special Oneshot.*
Category: Shonen-ai/Yaoi Romance > Top Pairings > Sasuke and Naruto
Characters: None
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 18 | Completed: No | Word count: 25671 | Read count: 5045 [Report This]
Published: 29/12/06 | Updated: 04/06/07


Reviewer: demonchick25 Signed Liked
Date: 14/10/07 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

that was amazing^^ i loved the whole thing^^



Title: 3 Things Uchiha's Don't Ever Do!!! by Hinata1
Rated: Liked [Reviews - 18]
Summary: Since when does Sasuke blush,stutter, or sweat(when not in training)? Well, Sasuke does get flushed when he talks to HER. To Sasuke Hinata is perfect. To Sasuke, Naruto is the biggest BAKA ever, but does the Hyuuga heiress like the last Uchiha?Or will she always love Naruto?

I couldn't help it. I had to write another Hin/Sas story.
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Genres: None
Warnings: None
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 6 | Completed: No | Word count: 3963 | Read count: 12177 [Report This]
Published: 27/05/07 | Updated: 02/09/07


Reviewer: demonchick25 Signed Liked
Date: 18/01/08 Title: Chapter 6: Say it

oooo i like, plz update soon >.



Title: And Now for Something Completely Different by Silent Witness
Rated: 15 Liked [Reviews - 12]
Summary: A Monty Python inspired surreal absurdist comedy, skewering your favorite cliches about fandom, Naruto, anime and life in general. Something a bit more light-hearted than usual for me.
Category: MadFic > Parody
Characters: Kakashi Hatake, Naruto Uzumaki, Sakura Haruno, Sasuke Uchiha
Genres: General, Humor, Parody
Warnings: OOC
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 4 | Completed: No | Word count: 3791 | Read count: 5381 [Report This]
Published: 30/01/08 | Updated: 02/04/08


Reviewer: demonchick25 Signed
Date: 31/01/08 Title: Chapter 1: Sketch 1: Not Your Normal Night of Theatre!

ah, the 16 ton weight! will you also be teaching us how to defend ourselved against fresh fruit?

I think it a great idea!

Author's Response: Maybe. Depends on how the coming weeks flow. Thanks for the support, I\'m trying to have it be at least fifty percent original material or more, but I might pull a few gags from Python.



Reviewer: demonchick25 Signed
Date: 01/02/08 Title: Chapter 2: Sketch 2: The World Emo Championship

I'll be as direct as i can, while not being a compleat bitch; as an EMO myself, this chapter commes off as a little offensive. i mean, i know it's all joking, but it's overly streo-typical(not to mention the over-kill).again, i know it's just a joke, but i've seen a little too much of this kind of stuff. so i hope you'll keep this kind of stuff in mind when you write more.

Author's Response: Srry \'bout that. Don\'t worry, emo jokes aren\'t the only thing in my arsenal. I\'ll keep this in mind later.



Reviewer: demonchick25 Signed
Date: 28/03/08 Title: Chapter 3: Sketch 3: Owl Stretching Time

lol XD love that last part

Author's Response: I\'m glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for the review!



Title: Akatsuki Romance Series: Hidan by Shiori Hikaru
Rated: 15 [Reviews - 1]
Summary: The first addition to my 'Akatsuki Romance Series.'
Category: OC-centric, General Fiction > Naruto Shippuuden
Characters: Akatsuki, OC
Genres: Romance
Warnings: Death
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 | Completed: No | Word count: 1780 | Read count: 1726 [Report This]
Published: 03/08/08 | Updated: 03/08/08


Reviewer: demonchick25 Signed
Date: 05/08/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter One

Well it's not a bad start, but there wasn't much of an introduction to the main character. Also, you made this a second person fic and it's a lot harder to read and write. There aren't many descriptions either, it's harder to visualize the story.

The structure of the story seems cluttered and nothing is isolated, it's easy to loose your place. Things like the diary entry should be isolated so it won't be confused with the rest of the text.

I also feel like you over-used Deidara's "un." it doesn't need to be at the end of every sentence.

I'm sure if you try to improve on these things it will be much easier to read.