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Hinatas change by Inner Hinata

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Hinata dressed qiuckly into a pair of comfortable jeans

and a red v-neck shirt. she tried to slip out quietly so

as not to arouse suspicion. but thats exactly what she

did. as she stepped out the door she turned around and

looked up into nejis ashen eyes. she wanted to

dessapare. "where do you think your going,Hinata?" he

asked sharply. his voice almost demanded an answer. "I,

I,...I was in-," she trailed off. she desparately wished

Neji would go away, but a wish isnt the same as

reality. "You what?" Neji asked. she wanted to avoid the

answer fearing he would go back and tell her father. " I

was invited."she blurted out. Neji cocked an eyebrow,

dumping a bucket of quilt over Hinatas face. " Invited

where?" he asked losing patience

fast. "IwasinvitedtoSakurasforasleepoverwiththeotherkonoi

chiofthevillageandimustgopleasedonttellfather!" she

ducked around him and ran from the Hyuuga clan house.

Neji watched after her angrily. "a ninja does not run

from her problems." he recited to himself. "i wonder

where she was going anyway." he shrugged it off, turned

on his heels and headed into the house.

Hinata finally stopped running next to the ramen shop

and hung her head down to catch her breath when a

familiar voice called her name. "Hinata! wait up!" a

fiminine voice called. Sakura stood with Sasuke, Naruto,

and Kakashi. Hinata looked up. "hello Sakura." she said

in an almost inaudible voice. Naruto put his hand to his

ear. "What did you say!" Sakura hit him over the head as

Sasuke shook his head shamefully. pathetic, he thought.

Sakura went up to her dragging Naruto with her by his

ear. "i know the party is tonight, but ive got a quick

mission." she explained. "there are still things for the

party i need to get but i wont be here. i was wondering

if you could handel the errands for me." she said

sweetly.

Hinata smiled. "sure Sakura." Sakura smiled as kakashi

lifted his face from his ichi-ichi paradise

book. "Sakura i doubt she'll be able to carry all the

things on the list." he said plainly. Sakura put her

finger to her chin. "i guess your right...." she pushed

Naruto forward. "so Naruto can help you!" she said

smiling. before Naruto could protest the fifteen year

old konoichi was off with Sasuke and Kakashi. "good luck

loser." Sasuke called back. Hinata blushed as Naruto

handed her the list. "well, i guess i have to shop like

a girl." he mumbled looking agrily to his groups

dessapearing form. Hinata at a loss for words, smiled

sheepishly. "Naruto?" she said just below a whisper. he

turned his head towards her. "yeah, hinata?" she stared

at her toes as the blood rushed to her face. "um,

I, ...." "yeah?" she turned away. "I mean we should

start on the list...soon." she said lowly. "yeah sure.

whats the first thing?" he asked. " she handed him the

list. she waited as he read it over and handed it

back. " whats the first thing?" she asked. he

shrugged. "i dont know. Sakuras hand writing is like

chicken scratch." he said. she read it herself. "

streamers." she said. Naruto pointed towards the gift

shop. "right there. and they have video games too!" he

took off in the direction of the shop. Hinata sruggled

to keep up but ran in after him. moments later they left

the shop with the first thing on the list. Naruto walked

ahead of her for the simple fact that she walked slow

and she was afraid of being next to him. she looked up

as he suddenly stopped. "what is it, Naruto?" he

intwined his fingers in hers and kept walking. "nothing

now. you walk kind of slow." he said. she blushed bright

red and clasped the bag of streamers she was carrying to

her chest with her free hand. Naruto is holding my hand,

she thought. as she adjusted to his pace she walked side

by side to him. While she felt like her body was on fire

Naruto looked at it as a way for her to keep up with

him. in moments they reached a gift store. Naruto let

her go. "second thing?" he asked. " baloons, and i think

we can get her a gift here." Hinata said catching her

breath back. Naruto found the baloons in no time and

threw them onto the counter. "one down." he said holding

her hand again. "one more to go. lets get her a gift."

he said pulling her towards the racks of feminine gifts.

As he looked up and down the racks, Hinatas eyes were

focused on their hands. the blonde had no idea what she

was looking at. he kept his cerelean eyes on a teddy

bear. "we should get this for Sakura." he sugessted.

Hinata looked up. "we?" she said confused. Naruto gave

her a charming kool-aid smile. "yeah, a gift from both

of us." he said. "unless you want to get her your own

gift." he said. she immediantly protested. "no, no. we

can give her a gift from the two of us." she said. he

smiled and hugged her tightly. "great!" he yelled. "now

we wont have to spend as much money." he yelled.

suddenly a familiar voice interupted them. " dont be so

loud and obnoxious. your so troublesome." Shikamaru said

dully. Ino and Chouji stood behind him. Choujis face was

buried into a bag of chips and Ino had her eyes on

Naruto and Hinata. "well well. you two are finally

together." she said. Hinata and Naruto blushed releasing

each other. "aww, it was just a hug, dont make such a

big deal about it!" Naruto yelled her. Hinata was

grateful for the excuse but was a little dissapointed

by "just" a hug. Inos face was filled with rage. "what

did you say?!" Shikamaru but his head down. " what a

drag. you two are humliating." he said. "what do you

know? your not a genius!" he said loudly. "quit yelling"

shikamaru said. "im not yelling!" he said. Hinata

realized in a way he was telling the truth. "please

excuse him he just talks loud." she said. Shikamaru

sighed. "whatever." Ino jumped on it. "dont flirt with

him!" she accused Hinata. Hinata stepped back from the

finger in her face. "I, I.....wasn't, flirting, I-." Ino

rampaged further. "yeah right." she said. Hinata put her

head down as a loud voice stepped up for her. "What does

it matter to you, Pig?! Nara isnt your man anyways, hes

Temaris!" Naruto cried withunknown defense. Ino crossed

her eyebrows. " Temari? the sand girl?" Shikamaru turned

and left with chouji as the store clerk came up. "buy

and get out." he ordered them. Hinata took down the

teddy bear and grabbed the baloons, handing them to the

clerk. meanwhile Ino ,felt betrayed and was not about to

lose an argument so easily. she was the boss, not

him! "Naruto you take that back! Shikamaru has no

intrest in her!" she demanded. "why do you think he left


stupid?!" the store owner immediantly kicked them out.

they stood facing opposite directions as Hinata walked

out with the supplies. she gave the store manager a

polite wave as he returned to her a smile. Naruto

quickly grabbed Hinatas hand and started off in the

other direction. "come on Hinata," he said with

irratants. she followed after him looking back into Inos

spiteful gaze.
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