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RageQuit by Firestar83

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Chapter notes: Only my second fanfic so bear with me here!
I'd really like to know what you guys think of it so please take the time to review.
I want to get better at this!
The rain came down in sheets as the wind kicked up water droplets, tossing them into the face of an oncoming traveller. It was nighttime so the road ahead was extremely dark

He wore a black cloak which had a hood that hid his face. He seemed to be sheltering something under the cloak. He was flanked by two Anbu.

Looking forward, the traveller noticed the destination. It was a rather complex looking facillity, the high defensive walls were large and intimidating. Armed men could be seen manning the tops of the walls and observation towers. One large building towered over the others, lights inside told the traveller that there were people working inside.

As he approached the reenforced front gate, the traveller was approached by a soldier with a small assault rifle. The traveller pulled a badge from his cloak and showed it to the soldier, who nodded and signalled to the nearby observation tower.

With a rather loud clank, the gate unlocked and slid open. The traveller walked in, his Anbu escort followed him into the large building at the center.

After entering th building the traveller noticed a massive machine. It was circular, kind of like a gateway. It was connected to a multitude of tubes and wires. A scientist walked up to the traveller.

"We heard about the attack." He said to the traveller."I was worried you didn't make it out."

"Don't mind me, you be more worried about what I've brought here." The traveller said, pushing back his cloak to reveal a parcel wrapped in bandages.

"Is it..?" The scientist asked, his eyes widening at the parcel.

"The one surviving prototype, yes." The traveller said. "We need to get her to a safe location, where they wont follow."

"I have an idea." The scientist said moving over to a control panel. "But you'll need to place her under our jurisdiction."

The traveller tensed, he was obviously hesitant. "I guess I have no choice, then." He held out the parcel, which was in fact a small child. It was asleep, curled up in the blanket that was hidden by the bandages.

The scientist took the child in his arms. "We'll take good care of her." He said.

The traveller turned to leave his Anbu escort waiting at the door.

"Where are you going?" The scientist asked.

"I need to get back home." The traveller said.

"Fine then." The scientist said. "Good luck, sir."

As the traveller left, the scientist pulled a lever on the control panel. With a noise that sounded like a muffled jet engine starting up, the cricular machine opened a glowing rift. The child began to cry at the noise.

"Don't worry, everything will be alright." The scientist said to the child as he approached the rift. "After all, your about to go home."
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