Reviews For Light the Darkness
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 11/08/11 - 09:06 pm · For: Chapter 15: The Return of Kei - Sensei
First off, I'm sooooooo sorry for forgetting to read ANOTHER chapter of ANOTHER one of your stories. I can't believe I've done that twice. I saw it, but then I forget to read it. SSSOOORRRYYY!!!
Okay, on to the awesomeness of your story. Well, as I just said, it was awesome. I loved the sweet/twisted moment with Gaara. I just find most things with him before he meets Naruto twisted. More so when you're actually seeing things through his head. Aiko's hatred toward doorbells is hilarious. I love her fiery temper. It's what makes her the wonderful oc that she is. I can't wait to see what happens in the future. I really hope that you write another chapter of this soon. If you don't, though, just know I'll continue to wait for the awesome chapter I know is to come.
Author's Response: Sorry, for some reason my computer likes deleting my replies.... :(... NO, why are you saying sorry? Ugh, it takes me so long to update and I come up with these stupid excuses, and still you stick by me and read my stories. You're really cool Sasui. Haha, thanks. Aiko's kinda nutty and i wrote that part with my own experiance. I think everyone hates doorbells to some exten, right? Especially annoying people ringing annoying doorbells. My bro keeps pressing the bell nonstop and goes on and on and on until someone opens the door and smacks him, seriously. Yeah, she's one of a kind, LOL. imagine opening a door without checking who's there and yelling like that. Aiko helps me discover her, whicch makes her an awesome OC. Thank you. I wrote myself into a corner on both my storie and I've been working on them. OMG, thank you soooo much, that's truly amazing of you to say.
Name: Fire_and_Ice (Signed) · Date: 30/07/11 - 05:05 am · For: Chapter 15: The Return of Kei - Sensei
Hi! I think the switch from POV to POV wasn't bad at all. I really liked the beginning part, where she took care of the Shukaku that Gaara was all nice... :3 It was cute when the doorbell made her really angry, I can just imagine how she must have looked; short, huge bags, sweaty, glaring. Haha! Plus, I don't remember the Keitaro guy, am I supposed to? I thought she had a different sensei... Oh well, great chapter!
Author's Response: Ah-ha, yes, do you remember Kaidan Fujushima? That's a character from my other story- some mixup happened and Keitaro Sorayo turned into Kaidan Fujushima in the chapter Posession. Sorrya about that. Remember the guy who got powdered donuts with her? ~ Thanks, I'm glad you liked it!
Name: DestinyGirl (Signed) · Date: 25/05/11 - 03:20 pm · For: Chapter 14: Possession
Wow! Talk about supernatural... I like it ^_^ Poor Gaara, I hope he can get some more sleep and the Shukaku could just leave him alone. But super amazing! I hope you update soon, I'm ready for the Chuunin exams!:D
Author's Response: Totally! ^^ Thanks; Aiko'll cover for him for a while, but the Shukaku... Well, bothering Gaara is like the only thing he can do all day, y'know? YES! I want the Chunin Exams to come up, mn I can't wait till they do! Writing that is going to be SO MUCH FUN!!! ...^-^...
Name: DestinyGirl (Signed) · Date: 25/05/11 - 03:08 pm · For: Chapter 13: Dog Poo (not4u if u r eating!) and Powdered Donuts!
Yay!!! Yuuuuum ~ donuts!:) No fair, I want one!:P
Lol, well thinks for the shout out! (Does happy dance with Rowanrose) And ugh, I'm glad you got the whole computer problem fixed - I hate it when they do that:(
Awesome chapter (as always) and now I'm going to the next one!:D
Author's Response: Yes, me too. Sometimes it seems all foreign computers hate me, LOL. Thanks! I'm glad you've read the story until now!
Name: 9tailedfoxrox (Signed) · Date: 31/12/10 - 10:04 am · For: Chapter 10: happy birthday... happy birthday to you
I like Kaori
Author's Response: Yeah. She's based on my cuz who is very much like her.
Name: 9tailedfoxrox (Signed) · Date: 31/12/10 - 09:56 am · For: Chapter 8: The option
Ha HA HA nice humor
Author's Response: really? cool. my bro says my sense of humor is messed up. :P I put a tack on his seat, but somehow i ended up sitting on it.....
Name: 9tailedfoxrox (Signed) · Date: 31/12/10 - 09:46 am · For: Chapter 6: Please..Please...
I love your creative writing
Author's Response: ^^ Thank you.
Name: crazykittylover (Signed) · Date: 21/12/10 - 07:42 pm · For: Chapter 14: Possession
i like the ending with the man...very amusing to think of what Gaara (his sister in control) did to make that man so. I like the chapter in a few other ways but, its a little dry....not really attention grabing i guess. its an in btwn ch. so i really not judging; good job and keep up the work.
Author's Response: ^^ Yeah, Aiko can be scary at times! I wanted the reader to imagine how scary exactly... *shudders slightly, then grins broadly as if to distract herself* Sighs.. I seem to be churning out more in between chaps by the day. Wah! Ok! *pumps fist determinedly* next one will be better! ...I hope. Thanks for sticking with me so far, and I will (try) to keep it up! Seriously, thanks.
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 21/12/10 - 04:18 am · For: Chapter 14: Possession
Okay, I have to admit, I'm confused. Was Shukaku controlling Gaara, or was Aiko? I don't know why, but I just couldn't understand what was happening. Would you care to explain? Other than that, I loved it. Poor man. He'll be scarred for life. Anyway, I can't wait to read more. It's an awesome story and I really want to read more. Good luck with the test, and I hope the little bit of sickness you feel will be gone before too long. Since I doubt I'll talk to you before Saturday (may be wrong) Merry Christmas (unless your don't celebrate it, then it's Happy Holidays)!
Author's Response: Hey! Sorry I haven't replied to this post! First of all, thanks for reviewing! (happy grin) Ok, so Aiko was controlling Gaara and the Shukaku who was inside Gaara. She wasn't connecting herself completely to Gaara because she didn't want to become so attactched that the Shukaku would be able to break free of her control. Every month she does this so that terrible things don't happen. I revised the chapter so that, I think, it would be a little easier to understand. Thanks for reading, reviewing, and enjoying! *laughs* Hapy Holidays to you too!
Name: ScreamingWriterPuppy (Anonymous) · Date: 20/11/10 - 08:18 am · For: Chapter 1: Thorns Through my Heart
Amazing! Oh, I hope you finish this story! I love it, you write amazing stories Rowanrose!
Author's Response: Of course I'll finish it! It wouldn't be fair to my readers if i didn't. ^^ Really? It's that good? (does crazy little mental happy dance) Thanks!
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 06/11/10 - 04:18 am · For: Chapter 13: Dog Poo (not4u if u r eating!) and Powdered Donuts!
Hahaha. Aiko's a bit of a sore loser. She couldn't take getting beat by Keitaro. I really liked the chapter, and I'm glad Aiko didn't have to eat the poop. The would've sucked. And you're right. School is a little hard to adjust to. In my morning classes, I have to hold a Spanish workbook, a Spanish book, a social studies book, a math book, and my binder. Well, getting back on topic, I can't wait to read the next chapter. You're story is amazing. Now I'm off to read Kokoro Uchiha.
Author's Response: i know. She was totally giving him a hard time. ^^ hehe. I'm glad you liked it! Well, the soup wasn't actually poop... School is hard to adjust to, seriously. One day you're relaxing, the next it's hit the books- or more like vice versa, the books hitting you! Ummm. bout Kokoro Uchiha.. Well, let's just say i'm gonna put up the chapter NOW. this minute. Second. milisecond.
Name: DestinyGirl (Signed) · Date: 30/09/10 - 10:41 am · For: Chapter 12: First Test! Hide and Seek!
This is AWESOME!!! I'm really enjoying it so far - it's SO original!:D
So will Aiko be going to the Chuunin Exams with Gaara (you know, since she can disappear into him and no one will know she's there except him)? I think it would be a great read from her perspective of what all happens there, but I'm just tossing around ideas of what I think may happen.... But anyway, great story! I'm really looking forward to reading more of this!!!
Author's Response: Thanks! It's awesome that you liked it so much! (even more awesome that you told me, seriously, you made my day) Well, the Chunin Exams.../evil grin, eyebrows raised in a teasing, you'll have to find out way/I've got some great ideas! I can't wait for the Chunin Exams, that's totally gonna be fun! I'm glad you are! Please stay (and be patient) with me, i hope to get some things up sooner than later....I'm just gonna update on my other story, Kokoro Uchiha! I hope you'll try that out as well! Thanks!
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 26/09/10 - 04:52 am · For: Chapter 12: First Test! Hide and Seek!
Hahaha. I love this story, and I think Keitaro is really funny. I can't wait until you update again. I'm surprised you're updating so fast, and I hope the next one is updated quickly as well. You rock, Rose-chan!
Author's Response: I'm glad you do, Sasui! Thank you! I know, me too. Gah! :P I haven't even started on the next chap yet! Sorry! My school is FINALLY starting, so i've been busy. ^^ Ohhh, thank you Sasui, that means a lot. You rock too!
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 25/09/10 - 04:48 am · For: Chapter 11: People I Hate: 1; People Who Kill Innocent Ice Creams!
Well, this ought to be interesting. I hope he doesn't manage to make Aiko all that mad. She's pretty scary to other people when she's mad. Oh, and one more thing: PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
Author's Response: Yep! I've already written the other chapter ( I'm on a roll XD ) and i'll post it up soon! Hmm. Well, we'll see whether he'll make her mad enough, and whether she'll scare him or no! Also, the chapter's name isn't supoosed to be Update! (:P) Ugh, i messed up. It's been revised and it is now People I Hate: People Who Kill Innocent Ice Creams!
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 30/05/10 - 06:23 am · For: Chapter 10: happy birthday... happy birthday to you
Hehehe. Kei likes Aiko. Really great chapter Rose-chan. I'm sorry about the move (unless you're happy), because it was pretty hard for me when I moved. I moved twice in two years, which really sucked since I had a boyfriend and all..... Anyway, I hope you make some nice friend in wherever you're moving to. I'm sad you won't be able to update soon, but at least I got to read this chapter. You rock, Rose-chan!
Author's Response: Thanks! About the Kei liking Aiko.. well, you'll see! I'm sorta happy because now i'll have my VERY OWN ROOM! but i've lived in this house practically my whole life, and i'll miss it.. I guess i'm sad and excited? It hasn't really hit me yet that i'm moving. Yep, i hope to make some friends too! There weren't any kids my age at all over here. I hope you and your boyfriend stayed... friends maybe? I'm sad too! i want to update! Thank you for reviewing, reviews are what keep me going!
Name: Swrestler12 (Signed) · Date: 29/05/10 - 10:50 pm · For: Chapter 10: happy birthday... happy birthday to you
YAy an update. Nice Job :D
Author's Response: Thank you! ^^
Name: crazykittylover (Signed) · Date: 29/05/10 - 10:13 pm · For: Chapter 10: happy birthday... happy birthday to you
i do say i like this chapter very much. it helped me forgetabout my cat not coming home and me smile on the inside. i have the tendency to have a passive or mean glare on my face....digressing again....
the chapter was nice; i do like how you made the giant dude girlish with the live shrimp and the mom.. its good any how, nice job
Author's Response: I'm sorry about your cat not coming home. If my cat didn't come home, i'd be really worried! I love that cat to death- my brothers and father love him to death literally. :P Ok, i'm going off topic too.. Thank you for reviewing! I'm so glad you liked it so much! It helps me with my confidence a-lot!
Name: Swrestler12 (Signed) · Date: 18/05/10 - 01:55 pm · For: Chapter 9: Seriously, cuteness is a weapon... of war!
nice job. please keep writing
Author's Response: Thanks! I will try my best to!!! Ah, i'm trying to put up the next chapter soon. I think it will be up before my other story's. ^^ Poor Koko... (she's from my other story) thank you for reviewing!
Name: crazykittylover (Signed) · Date: 15/05/10 - 09:02 am · For: Chapter 9: Seriously, cuteness is a weapon... of war!
oh boy....well i do like that the young girl helped that preteen boy and it was very amusing that she feel asleep in the sand. very cute and amusing; keep writing for you're doing great
Author's Response: Thank you! ^^ really? you think so? i'm so glad! Huuray! Ilove writing. :P :)
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 12/05/10 - 01:48 pm · For: Chapter 9: Seriously, cuteness is a weapon... of war!
First of all, Fricken Terdmonkey Callaloopu licken crapzoids....... I get bored easily ^_^. Second of all, apparently cuteness is not a weapon against big, mean, adult bullies. I really liked this chapter and can't wait to read the next one. Finally, I wanted to tell you Ninja War Chronicles is out incase you hadn't noticed.
Author's Response: Yep, it isn't. ^^ it's a weapon against Aiko, though... I'll try to update soon, and i can't wait to try NWC! Yay! It seems so interesting!
Name: crazykittylover (Signed) · Date: 06/05/10 - 06:57 pm · For: Chapter 8: The option
O.Olll scary little girl there....very much like Gaara I dare say...
I like this chapter quite so. It's short but, it serves its purpose; nicely done.
Author's Response: :) Thanks! yep, it's short, i'm sorry! I'll try to update more, but my chapters are getting short... Thank you so much! I'm glad you like it! And yes, she is his twin in more ways than looks. ^^
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 05/05/10 - 02:57 pm · For: Chapter 1: Thorns Through my Heart
Of course it's fun. Why else would I do it so much? Flippen Coodalooten Foolonger! (I just made those ones up for fun)
Author's Response: Haha! ^^
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 04/05/10 - 01:26 pm · For: Chapter 8: The option
Really great chapter, Rose - chan, and I can't wait to read the next chapter. Sadly, it had very little action or surprises, so I'm not able to say anything from my funny vocab....Ah, what the heck? Holy farten carpizoidal sickle pops. =D
Author's Response: Yup, this chapter dind't have much action, although it's important to the story. ^^ Kalgazop sen sarten! I have no idea waht that means, but it's fun!
Name: Swrestler12 (Signed) · Date: 26/04/10 - 09:07 am · For: Chapter 1: Thorns Through my Heart
^_^ Good job, Keep writing
Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing! ^^
Name: Ninja Ally (Signed) · Date: 22/04/10 - 09:44 pm · For: Chapter 7: Torn Away
O.o Poor Aiko-chan! She'll fight for her spot won't she! She can't be taken away from Gaara! Gaara will protest. He has too, or will they both be considered one person....hmmm.
Author's Response: You'll see! This was actualy a big dilemna (did I spell that right?) for me, I was wondering what to do for a loong time..