Reviews For Kokoro Uchiha
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 26/02/11 - 08:56 pm · For: Chapter 39: "That's right. We'll see them soon."
Ah! I've been wanting to read this story for a long time, but things kept coming up that prevented me from getting into it. I've finally caught up, and may I just say... I am so glad that I decided to read this! I couldn't tear my eyes away from the computer, this story is so good! Everything that has happened so far is completely amazing and fantastic. Everything seems to tie in so well, and the plot is just phenomenal! I love Kokoro and Luna and all of your other OC! This is just a great story overall, and I can't wait for the next update. This story is incredible, I hope you know that. Please post the next chapter whenever you find time, because this fic is just too good. Thanks for posting this!
Author's Response: 100th review! Wow, this is such a nice review; I'm so glad that after 39 chapters people are still reading my story and a hundred people told me what they thought about it! ^^ Really? That's so nice, i'm really happy! It's so cool that you think this story is incredible (incredible!) and I'm glad you told me.
Name: StawberryVixen (Signed) · Date: 23/02/11 - 02:39 pm · For: Chapter 1: The Calm before the Storm
This is getting really interesting. Can't wait to see what she does to their uncle >:D
Author's Response: Oooh, boy, I have that tale all written out and ready to post, LOL, can't wait to put it up.. I just made a promise to myself to make things fun for you guys, so until I'm totallly done.. Please wait! Promise it'll be worth it !rnThanks for reviewing!
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 22/02/11 - 03:11 pm · For: Chapter 39: "That's right. We'll see them soon."
Man, I wish you could write more, but apparently now. It's an awesome, wonderfully amazing story that I love to read. I'm glad Kokoro escaped, or that's what it sounds like. I hope you write more as soon as you can. It's too great of a story not to. BUT (there's rarely a but with me, so you won't be used to seeing that word) you need to go back over this when you get a chance as well. It has a fair amount of mistakes in it. Other than that, it was perfect!
Author's Response: Haha i find that funny.. (sort of tired, worn out laugh) lots of mistakes but perfect! Thanks for making me smile Sasui. Hope you have an uneventful school life because that's not what's happning to ME! Sorry, sorry, a little pent up hatred at the world in particular after a whole bunch of homework. ^^ Thanks for reviewing Sasui, seriously, your reviews always cheer me up! (bedazzling grin) Now (slumps back, worn out from the bedazzling grin) i need to get back to being happy again by (sorry, i should work on Kokoro but i don't feel up to it) watching tv! have a nice week! I 'm glad you enjoyed! Thanks a bunch, you're seriously a really cool reader, you know that?
Name: SandShinobi21 (Signed) · Date: 18/01/11 - 12:20 am · For: Chapter 38: Uncle!....?...#$@%!
Omg I love this story!! It is amazing! A little long with the side arc and all, but it works and I like it! Good job, please keep writing and update asap! :)
Author's Response: Hi! Thanks! (happy) yeah, the side arc was beginning to wear on me a little but I'm glad you think it works! I've just had this brilliant flash of inspiration (it was dragging on me a little bit) and I'm near the- *grins* wellll, you'll see!
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 13/01/11 - 05:36 pm · For: Chapter 38: Uncle!....?...#$@%!
Sorry it took me so long to read, but I'm glad I finally did. It's an amazing chapter and I can't wait to read more of it. I can't wait until the next chapter. I really want to know what the uncle has planned. Please write more soon!
Author's Response: Naw, I'm glad you're bothering to stick with my story until now! Yeah, uncle... Well, let's just say he has a hidden agenda of his own. (grin)
Name: 9tailedfoxrox (Signed) · Date: 11/01/11 - 07:58 pm · For: Chapter 38: Uncle!....?...#$@%!
I couldn't stop reading....finished it in one night!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Haha! That's amazing! I'm glad you liked enough to do so! I'll try to update soon.... ^^
Author's Response: Haha! That's amazing! I'm glad you liked enough to do so! I'll try to update soon.... ^^
Name: 9tailedfoxrox (Signed) · Date: 11/01/11 - 07:50 pm · For: Chapter 36: Why do I (Hawk/Kokoro/Itachi) Feel This Way?
I can't wait intell the next chapter!!!!!
Author's Response: Haha, yeah, I love reading long fanfics, cuz then I don't have to wait for the next chap! Enjoy! Thanks for reviewing! Tell me the ups and downs of the story. ^^
Name: 9tailedfoxrox (Signed) · Date: 11/01/11 - 07:39 pm · For: Chapter 33: Fight! Fight!
One word: Amazing
Author's Response: *laughs* I'm glad you like it so much! Thanks for reading (I'm pretty sure you did that part, right?) Reviewing, (helps ALOT) and enjoying (apparently you did so! I'm glad!) !!
Name: 9tailedfoxrox (Signed) · Date: 11/01/11 - 07:25 pm · For: Chapter 30: Tinkling and Shopping
Ha HA ha flushes her self down a toilet...lol
Author's Response: lol... I thought that would be funny.. Have you ever tried taking a toddler to the bathroom? Believe me, it's not pretty. Well, with my brother that is, lol. Thanks for reviewing!
Name: 9tailedfoxrox (Signed) · Date: 11/01/11 - 07:15 pm · For: Chapter 27: A Glimpse of the Past Part. 1
So cute...I cried my eyes out when She started to cry for her parents...lol
Author's Response: Yeah... ^^ Thanks for reviewing!
Name: 9tailedfoxrox (Signed) · Date: 11/01/11 - 07:07 pm · For: Chapter 1: The Calm before the Storm
I freakin love this story!!!!!!! It's awesome and amazing....thanx for putting so much effort into it!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Haha, really? If you saw the smile on my face right now you'd think it's amazing because it's so broad i'm pretty sure it's physically impossible! Thanks for reviewing! ^^
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 14/12/10 - 05:10 pm · For: Chapter 37: You were saying...?
I don't know what to say but that that was a great chapter. I'm wordless. Please update soon, Rose-chan. Heck, it doesn't have to be this story, just one of your stories.
Author's Response: Thanks, Sasui, seriously, for your continued support in all of my stories. ^^ *laughs* I'll try to update soon! I've hit a pothole on Light The Darkness and I need to research some stuff on Metal Birds May Fly, so most likely, the next story to be updated will be this one!
Name: Rowanrose (Signed) · Date: 14/12/10 - 05:06 pm · For: Chapter 26: WE DON"T KNOW THEIR NAMES! O.O
MiGOD, the beginning thingie for this was longer than the chapter! Haha, can't believe I did that!
Just rereadng some of my own cahps folks. ^^ don't mind me...
Author's Response: Hello, me!
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 15/11/10 - 03:34 pm · For: Chapter 36: Why do I (Hawk/Kokoro/Itachi) Feel This Way?
Really good chapter, Rose-chan! And just so you know, Metal Birds May Fly is awesome times ten. I loved it, and this chapter, just like I knew I would. You're one of those people who can always write well. I really liked the end with Itachi. It's nice to see what he thinks. Itachi always has been one of my favorite characters (T-T Why'd he have to die!!!!?). Please write more soon, Rose-chan!
Author's Response: WHAT!? He DIES!? Oh boy... Thanks! I'm so glad you liked MBMF so much! And I'm glad you loved this chapter! ^^ Yeah, Itachi's a big softie. An idiotic softie who killed the whole Uchiha Clan and- ...never mind... I will! ..Try!
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 07/11/10 - 04:50 am · For: Chapter 35: Revenge of the Assassin!
=( Poor Kokoro. I feel bad for her having to go through the such fear from when Kane tortured her. I'm interested, though, about the way she's making a bit of her tigerness come out. Hawk is really going to get it. She's got to be scarily powerful now. If not, big whoop. I'm wrong. Anyway, please write more soon. I can't wait to read the next chapter!
Author's Response: Yeah. I just reread that chapter and i got the chills.. Well, you'll find out! I will. ^^ hopefully... I started a new story. Can you check it out? By the way i read Cursed Saint. Two words- LOVED IT!!!
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 06/11/10 - 04:22 am · For: Chapter 35: Update-Summary of Story till now!
Well, it was nice to review some of the story since it's been gone for so long I forgot some. I can't wait to read Revenge of the Assassin. Oh, and if you haven't, could you read my newest story, Cursed Saint
Author's Response: Seriously, i can't believe you found something to review on on this chapter. It was so painfully short i myself winced! Thanks for the review, and i'd love to try your story out. It sounds nice! Love the title.
Name: DestinyGirl (Signed) · Date: 26/10/10 - 08:43 am · For: Chapter 16: Sasuke's 'Dream'
Wow! This story is soooo fantastic!!! I've really loved each chapter so far but this one takes the cake! It was so awesome and I hope Sasuke and Kokoro reunite soon!:D
Well, I've loved reading this so far and I'll continue reading here shortly! But great writing! ♥
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed each chapter, that's a real relief. Thanks for reviewing, it helps A LOT, seriously. I'm glad you've read until Sasue's Dream, and i really hope you would continue. Thanks! ^^ total big smile on my face.
Name: xaneresx (Signed) · Date: 10/05/10 - 04:56 pm · For: Chapter 33: Fight! Fight!
This story is excellent; you're a brilliant writer! Keep up the good work! =]
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm so glad you liked it. ^^ (me happy!) thanks for reviewing! It helps a lot!
Name: crazykittylover (Signed) · Date: 06/05/10 - 07:16 pm · For: Chapter 33: Fight! Fight!
.........hm... the multiple POVs are annoying and slightly confusing and the entire chapter with all the battle happening seemed rushed. I would length the battle scenes with better not quicker description of what is happening. The POVs... I would trying seeing if those are really nessairy; if all really need to be there. Just some tips.
CKL
Author's Response: Yep, let me re-do that chapter! I thought the POV's would be interesting (seeing things from other people's points of view, and how they delt with their baddies) but i suppose not. Hmm..... thanks for the suggestions CKL! I'll try them out.... I haven't gotten the hang of battle scenes quiet yet... Although i can't wait to put Aiko in a seriously good one!
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 04/05/10 - 01:20 pm · For: Chapter 33: Fight! Fight!
Holy friken crapizoial assist (these are my three favorite words in my colorfully weird vocab)! I loved this chapter, Rose - chan, and can't wait to read the next chapter. Update soon please!
Author's Response: I will try my best! Thank you! Kitty cat cooties! :)
Name: crazykittylover (Signed) · Date: 29/04/10 - 10:10 pm · For: Chapter 32: Ambush!
hmmm.....this story is so interesting! I keep wondering wat will hapn next; its very nice to find a story in fanfiction that has its own unqiue kick. good job!
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm so glad you think it's unique!
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 29/04/10 - 01:52 pm · For: Chapter 32: Ambush!
Wow. I wonder who the people who ambushed them are. They're going to get their buts kicked by one of the following people (I think) : Kokoro, Itachi, Shura, or a new character. I can't wait to read the next chapter, and you'd better be lucky I didn't die because my parents forced me to go to school, and the food was just too darn delicious looking to ignore. It was chicken! But you may not be so lucky next time. Oh, and here's some words to describe the way your writing makes me feel: holy fricken crapzoidly flying monkey terds. Yes, once again, my vocab is colorfully weird..... If that makes sense.
Author's Response: ^_^ - my lips are sealed. Haha, i'm glad i'm lucky! I don't want to be accused of murder.... *life spent in jail flashing before eyes* tell your parents they saved me from a sad life in jail! Tell them they also have a mean black mailing daughter. (kidding) No, it doesn't make sense, but it made me laugh- again! ^^
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 06/04/10 - 07:42 am · For: Chapter 31: Hey AK
Holy friken terd monkeys! That was one heck of a twist. Oh, and, by the way, similar to the dogs used by the Akimichi clan ; it's Inuzuka clan, not Akimichi. That's Chouji's clan. Other than that, I saw very few mistakes. I can't wait to see what happens after this. Please write more soon!
Author's Response: Hahaha! Holy friken terd monkeys! Haha! Gosh, that made my day ! Yeah, I edited that, I was having trouble remembering it,... Thanks for telling me! I will try my best to, sorry I take so long! Seriously, I need to work harder! I wonder how terrible I'll be, when I'm a writer and I have deadlines.... You'll read my stories, won't you?
Name: Fire_and_Ice (Signed) · Date: 06/04/10 - 03:53 am · For: Chapter 30: Tinkling and Shopping
All I can say is, thank you for updating! I liked this one, and it was a lot better than Sasuke's angst, but I'm wondering when Kokoro and Sasuke will finally meet and realize they're siblings. It's something to look foreward to!
Author's Response: Yeah, it is! I'm sorry I have so much angst in the story, sorry to disappoint.. Thank you for rreviewing! You have no idea how much reviews motivate me! :)
Name: crazykittylover (Signed) · Date: 06/04/10 - 01:47 am · For: Chapter 31: Hey AK
wooh......that was very interesting turn of events...Itachi first saw her.....his thoughts thou remind me of an asshole but meh. im curious wat will hapn nxt!
Author's Response: Aha, yeah, in my opinion, he is an asshole! I'll try to put up another chapter soon, sorry. I m currently orking on Aiko's story.