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Reviews For A Vampire Rose

Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 14/03/11 - 01:39 pm · For: Chapter 14: Council of Nerezza Pura
Wow. This was a really good story, just like all your other amazingly original stories! This blended vampires and werewolves incredibly well, and the plot was just fantastic. I am just so impressed with this story, and I hope you continue with it. It's an amazing fic, and it would be a shame to not continue with it to the end.


Name: crazykittylover (Signed) · Date: 14/07/10 - 09:59 pm · For: Chapter 14: Council of Nerezza Pura
Wow..Sabine is a bitch. I'm totally glad to how Tenten made her entrance! It's totally like her to do that and stuff. The fluff wasn't that bad; amusing to see how much Tenten gets embarrassed with Aiden's affection.

I note saddly this is the last chapter to be updated....NOOOOOOO! *chibi tears** Mah...sadly enough I need to go to bed any way. I do say I now think about it; there are rarely any good Tenten fictional stories! I mean based on Tenten the character in any aspect! Sakura, Ino, Hinata the occassional Tsunade and Temari; hell even Hinata's sensei gets the lime light but, never Tenten...Well at least now I've finished being up to date on yours and fix the comments I wrote for your story on my favorites....I have a lot of comments to fix...ah crappioly....along with the 3 pages of 'look ats' I need to read....*sigh** Everyone deserves a chance to be noticed on this site and have their story read and review; it helps make better writers and dreamers....Mah I need to get on it anyway before the school year starts or I'll be even more behind...Crappers, I need to get to updating my stories! My readers will eat me alive!

No not really *chibi sweat and depression** I like those kind of reviewers...they're so cute being upset, etc...*mental slap* Soo....off topic and blabbering...Gomen on the blabbering; I have a habitual tendency to drone....yes habitual is a word...I looked it up...Mah; I do really hope you update soon! Your story is so adicting and captivating!


Name: crazykittylover (Signed) · Date: 14/07/10 - 09:36 pm · For: Chapter 13: Unthinkable…and Undeniable
Yes! conclusion is in the air! Acceptance is there too! *gets all happy and giddy** It's very nice to see the story progress so well. I felt worry, anxiety, happy, anger, fustration, amusment, excitement, distrust, and so much more readling your story! Why the hell didn't I read this sooner!

I original blew off thinking it was some very stupid story that was very annoying and had no point to read. I can't believe how wrong I was! Your story to now has been inspiring and thrilling! I just can't get enough it!

There's puns and comical use; drama and theaterics! Just so good and well written....Mah I've not been this excited over a story since I read Pets or ....Fire Hound, along with others. Just taken by it so much...**sigh** It's just very good. I'm sure you've gotten a lot but, more the merry eh? lolz =)


Name: crazykittylover (Signed) · Date: 14/07/10 - 09:24 pm · For: Chapter 12: I'm Sorry
Close one girl....Sorry about your computer; mine was being a dick too; I couldn't use mircosoft for 6 weeks! The horror and fustration I had writing my chapters down. It's so slow and medieval...Damn the computer age!!! No not really but, I do hate that everything is going electronic. What about a power shortage or hostile take over hm? I don't know if you people thought about eh? Or how about aliens!?

*slap to cheeks*
Sorry....brain is being a bubble butt and overloading. Mah; good story I think so far. Tenten's world is spiraling out of control and she's really losing it eh? Mah. Write On!


Name: crazykittylover (Signed) · Date: 14/07/10 - 09:16 pm · For: Chapter 11: Moon Society
Finally! The real drama continues; what will happen with the cancer discovered? How will the prince take it? I'm so excited to read more!


Name: crazykittylover (Signed) · Date: 14/07/10 - 09:04 pm · For: Chapter 10: Anger
It's not rushed; it's posttramatic stress disorder. Completely understandable how Tenten is reacting, so much is changing and she's finding it very hard to cope. But, still angry words are the worst words to have recieved or given for they are the one that are burnt into our minds the most and forever haunt us.


Name: crazykittylover (Signed) · Date: 14/07/10 - 08:52 pm · For: Chapter 9: Trust
Oh....the drama deepens! I can't wait to see what happens; confusion, betrayal, pain, etc. All seriously adicting things in reading! Write on!! (get the joke?)


Name: crazykittylover (Signed) · Date: 14/07/10 - 08:38 pm · For: Chapter 8: Falling
Monkey butts....well then Tenten will just have to figure out a plan B then to escaping eh?


Name: crazykittylover (Signed) · Date: 14/07/10 - 08:27 pm · For: Chapter 7: Her Smile, His Heart
Well things are certain getting interesting here. Tenten having internal conflicts, the prince the same and trying to make sense of everything. A very good and original plot with a good explation of the whole night and sun deal. That was brillaint! Excellent job.


Name: crazykittylover (Signed) · Date: 14/07/10 - 08:16 pm · For: Chapter 6: Confrontation
Wow..Ino is a total bitch....She was snooty in the show but, damn; she's mean...

Tenten is having a tough time coping neh? Well I hope the best for and keep up the good work mate.


Name: crazykittylover (Signed) · Date: 14/07/10 - 07:59 pm · For: Chapter 5: Refusing To Be Broken
Well....this is interesting chapter because I like how Tenten is with the vampires and I find it very amusing to knowing that those dumbasses are drinking the blood of a cancer ridden patient....I wonder if the cancer can be transfered through blood because that would so sweet.

This chapter makes me feel a little better about Tenten's predictament; she is determined to be a fighter to the end! Brava!


Name: crazykittylover (Signed) · Date: 14/07/10 - 07:40 pm · For: Chapter 4: Just a Kiss
Oh wow....go Tenten! I love the ending a lot girl! That's the best part of this chapter I swear; not really, I don't swear things. Mah, good chapter and keep up the good work!


Name: crazykittylover (Signed) · Date: 11/07/10 - 10:17 pm · For: Chapter 1: Graduation
Oh shit..........She just got kidnapped...Can't wait to see where this goes.


Name: crazykittylover (Signed) · Date: 11/07/10 - 10:12 pm · For: Chapter 3: Call To Darkness
Oh shit..........She just got kidnapped...Can't wait to see where this goes.


Name: crazykittylover (Signed) · Date: 11/07/10 - 09:53 pm · For: Chapter 2: Too Late
So.....she has that kind of cancer...That sucks a lot. I'm curious about the boy; he really sounds like the Kyuubi with the red hair and golden eyes...mah.

I like where this story is going! I'm not sadistic or any of that smuck, I just like a good drama when I see one. I say the development is good, not too fast or slow; grammar is good....Mah I don't see anything wrong with it so keep up the good work!


Name: Ardisaur_rawr (Signed) · Date: 28/12/09 - 12:16 pm · For: Chapter 14: Council of Nerezza Pura
Haha. She KICKS the door open!
That's my kind of sassiness!
I would totally do that!!
TenTen and Aiden are really really cute together!

I'm sorry that I haven't been on in so long!
I've been at my Grandma's house in NY and she doesn't have Wifi for the laptop that she got me for Xmas! LOL
So, now I'll be on all the time!

Author's Response: thank you! haha, now that Tenten and Aiden are finally TOGETHER (oh i love saying that!) I have to be extra careful about keeping Tenten's lovable sarcastic/doesnt take crap from anyone attitude, cuz without that she'd slowly morph into a lump of spineless mush...which is NOT very interesting...


Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 25/12/09 - 02:50 pm · For: Chapter 14: Council of Nerezza Pura
Wow. Sabine is a real jerk. How dare she take Tenten's clothes. Anyway, I love the story and can't wait for the next chapter.


Name: inuyashas_only_1 (Signed) · Date: 25/10/09 - 05:19 pm · For: Chapter 13: Unthinkable…and Undeniable
ACK! Tonfa deleted my review. Here's the rest of it...

Okay, a few things:
1) IT'S BACK!!! IT'S BACK, IT'S BACK, IT'S BACK!
2) I absolutely loved this chapter. Your best to date, I think. I can just imagine every bit of it...
3) I really liked Aiden in this chapter. Again and again I am just touched by how much he likes Tenten and is willing to do so much for her. Also, the last line-- "Aiden didn't reply, but the look in his eyes was enough of a 'you're welcome' to send my heart racing..." I can just imagine that look in his eyes. And he's tilting his head a little, and he's got this little half-grin that isn't spiteful or mean, but it has a kind of happiness to it, and his eyes are just ever so slightly squinty, the way they are when someone is really happy...
I can tell that they're in love...
4) YAY! He bought her friends! As I read what I've just typed I can't help but think that it sounded really perverted, but YAY!
5) Updates may be slow, but make every update as good as this, and I won't care!!!
Kisses, Crimson dahhhling,
Sarah-hime

Author's Response: hahaha i didnt even have to look at the name of the reviewer. i just saw how long it was and thought "it's THAT reviewer...the one that is fricken amazing and awesome in every way"!!! Yes, I'm glad that i started writing this again, love tenten and aiden...the perfect yet so UNperfect couple. :P Yeah, sorry if its slow, i'll really try hard to go as fast as I can!!!


Name: inuyashas_only_1 (Signed) · Date: 25/10/09 - 05:17 pm · For: Chapter 13: Unthinkable…and Undeniable
Okay, a few things:
1) IT'S BACK!!! IT'S BACK, IT'S BACK, IT'S BACK!
2) I absolutely loved this chapter. Your best to date, I think. I can just imagine every bit of it...


Name: Ardisaur_rawr (Signed) · Date: 24/10/09 - 07:01 pm · For: Chapter 13: Unthinkable…and Undeniable
How cute!!
Aiden's such a doll! :]


Name: bre2k8 (Anonymous) · Date: 23/10/09 - 07:00 pm · For: Chapter 13: Unthinkable…and Undeniable
Wow!I love this chapter,Crimson Lily!I really love your writing,and can't wait until you add the next chapter to any of you stories.


Name: ToraHime (Signed) · Date: 29/09/09 - 10:35 pm · For: Chapter 2: Too Late
O.O


Name: ToraHime (Signed) · Date: 29/09/09 - 10:26 pm · For: Chapter 1: Graduation
wait...edward?! omg....

eepness


Name: inuyashas_only_1 (Signed) · Date: 08/09/09 - 05:09 pm · For: Chapter 12: I'm Sorry
...KYAAAAAAAAHHHHH!!!!!!
I loved it, Crimson, I loved it. Once again-- great writing style, awesome description, and the plot's moving along nicely. I missed this story...


Name: Ardisaur_rawr (Signed) · Date: 27/08/09 - 09:08 pm · For: Chapter 12: I'm Sorry
Awwwww..... LOL


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