Reviews For Jealousy to the Max: a NaruSaku fanfic
Name: Superkid3 (Anonymous) · Date: 18/09/13 - 01:50 am · For: Always and Forever
this whole thing was great . please write more .
Name: Saraena (Anonymous) · Date: 09/03/12 - 11:54 pm · For: Always and Forever
No comment. ... ... ... How could I resist?! (Tear, weeping) It's so beautiful. Best story I have ever read in my whole live.
Always and forever…I’ll never let you go---- gorgeous ending.
Name: Saraena (Anonymous) · Date: 09/03/12 - 11:46 pm · For: Ever
“Temari called it,” the girls said simultaneously, then giggled.
---- LOVE that!
Name: Saraena (Anonymous) · Date: 09/03/12 - 11:36 pm · For: Fight (What a simple title...*sweat drop*)
. . Narutoooooooooooooo!!!!!!!!!!!!
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U cant leave now!
Name: Saraena (Anonymous) · Date: 09/03/12 - 11:30 pm · For: Provoking
Go Naruto! Rip that f**kin' jack*** apart! CHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!
Name: Saraena (Anonymous) · Date: 09/03/12 - 11:24 pm · For: Only Naruto
OhmygodOhmygodOhmygodOhmygodOhmygodOhmygodOhmygodOhmygodOhmygodOhmygodOhmygodOhmygod!
(shriek) This is so exciting! What will happen next?!!!!!!!!!!!
Name: Saraena (Anonymous) · Date: 09/03/12 - 11:12 pm · For: Confession
Oh no, oh man! Panicking, panicking now! Damn that Daaaaiiiiiiiicccchhhhiii!
P.S. I just marked dislike because I hate Daichi. Amazing story, though. I wish you could write more like this one. :)
Name: Saraena (Anonymous) · Date: 09/03/12 - 11:02 pm · For: An Old Friend...I Guess...
U go Temari - love u!
Grrrrr... I hate Daichi!
Narusaku 4ever!
Name: Saraena (Anonymous) · Date: 09/03/12 - 10:49 pm · For: Perverted...er, um...Fantasies *blush*
Daichi -1. Naruto - 1,000! Oh yeah! Great all the way so far!
Name: Saraena (Anonymous) · Date: 09/03/12 - 10:44 pm · For: Who She Is
OOOOOOOOOOOO! Action and jealousy rising!
Name: Saraena (Anonymous) · Date: 09/03/12 - 10:36 pm · For: Fireside Conversations
Hilarious! The food burning... I could only imagine Daichi's face. Haha!
Name: Saraena (Anonymous) · Date: 09/03/12 - 10:30 pm · For: Prince Daichi the Flirt
Damn that stupid Daichi! Great story coming along, though!
Name: Saraena (Anonymous) · Date: 09/03/12 - 10:16 pm · For: Sleepy Sakura
Awesome! Just truly beautiful. You should be a writer! :)
Name: Chikara no Seigi (Anonymous) · Date: 17/07/11 - 10:44 pm · For: Always and Forever
Nice story. I think it really let out a lot of emotion. Sure, it was clichéd, but... I personally love that stuff.
Oh, and I dunno if you're the same person or you gave permission or something, but I think that this awesome story was plagarized on fanfiction.net. The culprit, Summer Sensation, renamed it "A Pinch of Jealousy". You might wanna check it out.
Sou, yosha! Ja ne!
P.S. Watashi wa, Inuyaha ga suki desu! So don't steal him from me! (lol)
Author's Response: ...Wow. They DID plagiarize. Holy crap, I'm shocked that someone would steal something this bad. XD I'm not actually angry, I'm more...amused. Heh heh. But thanks for letting me know, I'll make sure to message this person and see what I can do. Oh, and watashi no kokoro wa Inuyasha no desu. My heart is his, and you'll break it if you take him from me!! ;) Again, thanks for letting me know about the plagiarism...it's kinda awkwardly funny. And even more, thanks for reviewing this story...I wrote this when I was...thirteen, I think. I'm nearly 17 now, so this is...bad, to say the least, haha.
Name: sasusakuchild (Anonymous) · Date: 01/06/11 - 03:53 pm · For: Newest Mission
die? i ove this, does sasuke get jelous ir is it narusasu narusaku or sasusaku SaSuSaKu 4ever
Name: Persy321 (Signed) · Date: 26/08/09 - 10:29 pm · For: Prince Daichi the Flirt
lol! that was funny how sakura was all shocked...couldnt say anything at all... XD sry..its been some time since i read your story! gomen gomen! >.< anyway....awsomeness! 10!
Author's Response: It HAS been a while! I missed you, ha ha ha! :D Nice to have you back and reviewing, Persy321. Thanks for the review!
Name: Crimson Lily (Signed) · Date: 08/07/09 - 11:30 am · For: Always and Forever
T.T
AWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!
this story was probably the cutest thing i have ever ever ever seen!!!
AWWWWWWW.....
i've been grinning my face off for the past five minutes because of this chapter...I HOPE YOU'RE HAPPY!
haha thanks for writing so amazingly, and i hope to read more from you!!
Ja ne!
Crimson Lily
Author's Response: Sorry that I forgot to respond to this!! I'm really, super sorry!! But thanks a million for reading. <3 It means a lot to me. And...I know you hate yaoi, but I have a lot of het focus in my yaoi stories (the yaoi stories are actually requests from friends-- I don't really write them cuz I'm crazy about them).
Name: Crimson Lily (Signed) · Date: 08/07/09 - 11:18 am · For: Fight (What a simple title...*sweat drop*)
AAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!
OMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMG!!!
how could you DO that????
this story is sooooo good! i just read everything so far, and OMFG ITS SO GOOD!
okay, i've gotta read the rest....
OMG!!!
Author's Response: Ha ha ha, I'm so glad you like it. Which reminds me, I recommended your Vampire Rose fic in the latest chapter of one of my stories. :D
Name: i_heart_notebooks123 (Signed) · Date: 07/05/09 - 01:21 pm · For: Always and Forever
Awww, what a sweet ending! I can't believe I hadn't read it yet!
I love the little children and their parents were introduced subtly so it was all very cute.
And Sai and Ino!? Who woulda thunk? Actually, that's a pretty good pairing... I mean honestly, Ino would never date Choji....
I love Naruto's triplet's names too. Very nice. Ren reminds me a bit of Skip Beat's Ren (I love that manga ^^. I'm sort of assuming you got it from there).
All in all, a very sweet ending to a very sweet story. You should be very proud, you did a great job. ^^
Author's Response: Thank you, and I'm sorry it's taken me a few months-- cough-- to er, reply. I'm bad about those things...
Name: Crimson Lily (Signed) · Date: 24/04/09 - 01:43 pm · For: Prince Daichi the Flirt
YES I READ INUYASHA!!! its AMAZING!! i luv it so much!!!!!
haha love this story!
:D
Author's Response:Thanks a million for reading-- I can't seem to get anyone to read het romance anymore... *sweatdrop*. That's why my next fic is a yaoi.
Anyway, I LOOOOOOONE INUYASHA! It's one of my favorite animes/mangas of all time! Tee hee, I love Inuyasha-- I want to "SIT, BOY!" him so bad.
Name: i_heart_notebooks123 (Signed) · Date: 16/03/09 - 12:53 pm · For: Ever
Woah. My computer dies for a while and I come back to read that Naruto's foot got ripped off and now he's getting married.
I like the touch of faint SasuNaru. And, maybe it's just my yaoi fangirly-ness, but when Shikamaru says Naruto means a lot to him too, man, did that give me ideas of a ShikaNaru!!!! ^-^ You know, there aren't enough of those... maybe I'll write one. Maybe you should write one!
Sorry, off topic.
I love everything. The romance was beyond sweet, but not in an overly done, over rated kind of way. Such real emotions, and the fight scene was well described. No mistakes that I caught.
Overall, and amazing two chapters. ^-^
Great job!
Really.
Really great job.
Like, incredible.
Author's Response: Thank you! And is your computer ok? I hope it's not all messed up. Thanks for reading!
Name: ChicagoIsCalling7 (Signed) · Date: 16/03/09 - 12:49 pm · For: Ever
AWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
This chapter was cute and sad, but also funny. Mostly funny. With a pinch of cute. Maybe a teaspoon- no, tablespoon, and a pinch of sad instead.
Yup, that's the recipe or an amazing 13th chapter.
^-^
I wonder if you ever get tired of hearing how amazing your chapters are? 'Cause, if I could think of better words to describe your brilliant chapters, I would, you know, to get some diversity. But I really can't think of that many words that would do your writing justice.
But that's just me.
Anyway, because of my limited vocabulary, I'll just leave it at this:
Wonderful! Superb! Brilliant! Ingenious!
Hey... I could think of a few more words.... ^-^'
Author's Response: Thanks, thanks, thanks to the infinity squared! Ha ha ha, I never get tired of hearing that my chapters are good.
Name: ChicagoIsCalling7 (Signed) · Date: 16/03/09 - 12:46 pm · For: Fight (What a simple title...*sweat drop*)
Goodness! And when his foot got ripped of!!! Double goodness!
But not goodness in like, a good way, goodness in like a, OMG, way.
Not that it wasn't good too!
Actually, it wasn't good.
It was incredible!!!!
^-^
Yes, I finally got around to reviewing (don't kill me!!) and I'm glad I did. This was such an intense chapter. You did really well Sarah.... honestly, I thought you would be better at sticking with romance and not drifting into action-y stories, but this worked! And you were good at it too! I'm sorry I doubted you. >.<
Anyway, that's really all I have to say for this chapter. Great job! Yup, that's all.
Author's Response: Thanks a million! I was afraid I would be bad at fight scenes, but evidently I did ok.
Name: ChicagoIsCalling7 (Signed) · Date: 03/03/09 - 02:01 pm · For: Provoking
Yay, a fight scene! I love fight scenes in the anime, cause then the cool music starts playing, and Naruto is totally awesome, and I just get so proud of him... sorry, about your amazing story, not... what ever I'm thinking of. ^-^'
This is actually a really great cliffhanger/introduction to a fight. Building up the intensity, plus Naruto's smack-talk (wouldn't be Naruto without it)... yup, this is getting exciting!
I'd say update soon, but I know you will.
So instead I'll say something else I always say, but you already know.
AMAZING JOB!!!!
Author's Response: Naruto is like, the KING of smack-talk. I'm just waiting for him to bitch-slap Daichi or something, just to get him a little riled up. Ooh, maybe I should do that...?
Name: ChicagoIsCalling7 (Signed) · Date: 03/03/09 - 01:57 pm · For: Only Naruto
Awww!!! Thank you for that little dedication, Sarah-kins!!! Aw!!! ^-^
Okay, when I read an amazing manga- which is like all the manga I've ever read- when the main character is sad, I feel like I'm going to cry. When they're happy, I'm happy.
That's how it is for me with this chapter.
And in case you can't see where I'm going with this, my point is, you did an incredible job.
I mean, and I know I've said this a lot, but I'm not the biggest fan of het romance when it comes to Naruto.
But this chapter... well, like I said above, it's like an amazing chapter from one of our favorite shojo mangas. Except with out the pictures. ^-^
THAT'S how good it was.
Really, really, really, really, REALLY, good.
Amazing. Brilliant. Perfect. Cool. Great.
And everything else that means "good".
Author's Response: Aww, thank you, Hannahkins! >_< I made it special for you and i_heart_notebooks123. I'm glad I could trigger emotions with my writing-- it's what every author aspires to do, right?