....O_O shirogan?!?? oh balls,i dont even want to picture the amount of ass whooping enkou is gonna dish out

I like the idea, it's just you've introduced so many OC's at once my head is spinning a bit. It's quite hard to take all in at once, or maybe it's just my small mind :P I don't know.

I'm going to try and read more, but it does seem a bit "cluttered" in my opinion, but maybe that's why I don't usually like stories with a lot of OC's in them that I have no background on since I tend to lose track of people.

My advice, make a bingo book please. I like this stories concept, but I just want a little background on everything. That's all. Keep up the hard work, you're doing just fine.

Author's Response: Thank's for the review; I understand where you're coming from, when it comes to the OC's. I wanted to try and let the readers come up with some looks as far as the b/g characters go. As you've seen, the more important people have gotten subtle takes on their appearances, such as hair color, or a style of shirt. It's the Naruto Universe after all, so I figured there wasn't much need for 'extreme' detail on what they were wearing. On another note, I actually do have a bingo book for this village, listing/detailing every shinobi, minor citizens, and even the academy residence; but i found that posting those, leads to a few people stealing characters, techniques, and other things; I've had it happen before. If I 'do' get more comments about it, I'll most likely end up posting it on a 'series' page.

I read all 4 chapters, and all I can say is that this isn't good at all... It's freaking awesome!

Author's Response: ty man ^^ there will b updates very soon i hope u enjoy it, u will c that some TWISTS will appear soon