Reviews For Affinity
Name: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: 02/05/12 - 05:27 pm · For: Lost Time
Please write more this is a Asomwe story
Name: kiki (Anonymous) · Date: 31/08/11 - 12:14 pm · For: Lost Time
Please don't let this be the last chapter I love this story!!!
Name: moshstar (Signed) · Date: 22/08/11 - 05:07 am · For: Lost Time
Addicted. I need more
Name: Cakeat (Signed) · Date: 12/09/09 - 10:18 am · For: Lost Time
I so hooked!
I can't wait to see what happens to Naruto and Sasuke. Hopefully Naruto will find it in his heart to forgive Sasuke for what he had done. And the cliff hangers, argh! I'm so curious to see what will happen next. I so drawn to this story and I love how your writing has a hint of comedy, angst, maturity and excitment in it. Unlike some fics that I have read, I can sense the maturity of it so well and it helps me flow into the rythm of the story. The plot is great and the characters show their own traits. I especailly like Sentsuna (Did you watch Gundam 00-same name). His character carries the comedy through the story and so does Naruto. Meanwhile Sasuke represents angst. Sakura and Neji was a coupling I have yet to find but then again I have only joined 1 or 2 weeks ago.
I can't wait to see what happens next. :)
Name: KKEYA2008 (Signed) · Date: 17/03/09 - 10:23 am · For: Lost Time
"...I donr17;t have a gag reflex. Itr17;s quite a handy little talent..."
LMFAO! I'm sure as hell it is! XDDDDDD
Gawd, I really can't wait for the next chappie! Hayaku Hayaku!!! >w
Name: Miki Everless (Signed) · Date: 17/03/09 - 06:02 am · For: Lost Time
I KILL you for the cliffhanger.
Then resurrect you for the great chapter. ^__^
Name: Uchiha Scipia (Signed) · Date: 16/03/09 - 07:54 pm · For: Lost Time
... !
Naruto's teaching Setsuna Rasengan... There's something just awesome about that... Is he teaching Setsuna the way Ero-Sennin taught him?
This was awesome and I laughed when Naruto said he didn't have a gag reflex. So THAT'S how he always eats so much ramen! :P At least Setsuna likes something else and won't live off of cup ramen for most of his life.
I was in hysterics over the bit where Neji asks for his blessing to marry Sakura. Naruto needs to freak a little less... :P
I can't wait for another update! This one was great!
Arigato, Akiru-chan! :)
Name: Uchiha Scipia (Signed) · Date: 07/03/09 - 07:18 pm · For: Reunion
...pardon the fangirlish-ness of the following comment, but...
This fic is amazing. My epic love for it cannot properly be described. (And now I have the mental image of Lee saying stuff like that, oi...)
I would like to see the fic updated, myself, but really, I get how writing is (I'm writing my first Naruto fic now, it's a rather daunting idea) so if you want to take a week off from this to write another, I say go for it. :)
Name: Miki Everless (Signed) · Date: 04/03/09 - 06:03 pm · For: Reunion
WHOOO! Setsuna must be the happiest mofo alive right now! Same for Naruto! But... Sasuke... *grabs stuffed Sasuke doll, rips off head, burns doll, dances happily on ashes*
Name: GlowDance MoonSong (Anonymous) · Date: 21/02/09 - 03:53 pm · For: Father
would it urk you if I confessed my undying love for you?? XD I am now officially the #1 fan of this story!!! I won't forgive you if you let me down! or maybe I could just write an alternative ending... lmao I shall sit around and wait for the next chapter like the valiant knight I am!
Name: KKEYA2008 (Signed) · Date: 11/02/09 - 12:27 pm · For: Father
Lmao Sasuke. XDDDDD
Name: Miki Everless (Signed) · Date: 10/02/09 - 11:27 pm · For: Father
BAHH! I hate how Sasuke gets to share father-son bonding time with Setsuna instead of Naruto! SASUKE DIDN'T DO SHIT! Naruto.... WAHHH! *bursts into tears*
Name: CapriaStar (Signed) · Date: 29/01/09 - 02:31 pm · For: Lineage
I think I was reading this before, but I'm not sure. This story is absolutely wonderful. I love how you're developing the characters and the plot is really strong and enthralling. I can't wait to see where you take it.
Name: moshstar (Signed) · Date: 21/01/09 - 03:58 pm · For: Lineage
Beatiful work :D
I'm faving
Name: GlowDance MoonSong (Anonymous) · Date: 19/01/09 - 10:54 am · For: Lineage
OH MAI GOD! That was by far the best fan fic I have read since Spiral Falling! And spiral falling was the very first fan fiction I ever read!!! God, you've got me on edge. It's like reading twilight all over again, it has me hooked and wanting more!
Name: Miki Everless (Signed) · Date: 19/01/09 - 05:36 am · For: Lineage
MMMMM! SO CLOSE! Setsuna's going to be so surprised when he finds out who his parents are.
Name: HPTR Fangirl (Signed) · Date: 17/01/09 - 10:06 am · For: As Time Passes
Hi ya,
I read 3rd chapter at FFN, and I will say this is a fine story. (I can't leave a review at FFN since my internet browser just shuts off when I try to login / give review) I just hope that Naruto has a happy ending with the family ending together, and Sasuke won't kill Setsuna after learning about his existence. I'm looking forward to chapter 4.
Thanks.
01. 17. 09
Name: Miki Everless (Signed) · Date: 10/01/09 - 03:15 am · For: As Time Passes
GAHHH! You need to update! Quickly! Before I die from the suspense!
I think that I'll LOVE this story. Continue ^_^