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Where cast of the Naruto Universe are inserted into an alternate universe.
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An area to submit intelligent essays debating topics about the Naruto Universe and writing tutorial submissions.
 
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Any Naruto fanfiction focused without romantic orientation, on a canon character in the current Naruto Universe.
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Self-evident
 
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Any Naruto fanfiction with the main plot orientating around male same sex couples.
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Any fic with no real plot and humor based. Doesn't require correct spelling, paragraphing or punctuation but it's a very good idea.
 
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Name: Jacqui (Anonymous) · Date: 26/07/11 - 01:47 am · For: In Which Some Genin Train and Kyuubi Appears
Nice I like it better than the original. You have a great talent. I look forward to the next chapter


Name: Rahvin (Signed) · Date: 10/08/09 - 03:34 am · For: In Which Some Genin Train and Kyuubi Appears
great story,
i love the little quotes throughout, they jst seem to tie it all together.
i am really enjoying the story and a somewhat new approch to its telling.
cant wait for the next chapter :)


Name: MidnightWolf (Signed) · Date: 14/07/08 - 10:33 pm · For: In Which a Journey Begins
aaaaaahhhhhhhhh no!!!! what's with the cliffhanger! do u want to drive me insane?! i relie on this stuff 4 sanity!!


Name: SilverSoulShadow (Signed) · Date: 18/02/08 - 08:29 am · For: In Which a Journey Begins
Okay, for starters, this is fuckin' awesome! I absolutely ADORE your version of Naruto! The 'strength behind the mask' deal is always a wicked take on this!

I love how easily he got along with Sasuke and the fact that Itachi isn't a bad guy. I seriously don't think that he killed his entire clan, blood on his sword and him standing over their mum and dad or not!

Yes, Sakura is a pink-haired bitch...most of the time. I hope you got in mind how you're going to get her out of the 'fangirl' stage!

XD


Name: yvorazz3986 (Anonymous) · Date: 20/01/08 - 11:45 am · For: In Which Uzumaki Naruto Returns
Dude, i've read chapters 1-5 you need to update quickly quickly, i want to see the birth [birth???wtf] of ita/naru. its funny how naruto hates sakura. keep up the good work though!!!


Name: Justeene (Anonymous) · Date: 16/01/08 - 05:29 pm · For: In Which Uzumaki Naruto Returns
PLZZZZZZ!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! update this, its totally amazing and i want to read more. ^_^


Name: Diaspro465 (Anonymous) · Date: 22/12/07 - 09:03 pm · For: In Which Team 7 Fights
lovelovelovelovelove......


Name: Diaspro465 (Anonymous) · Date: 22/12/07 - 08:31 pm · For: In Which Naruto's Past is Revealed
I Loved this chapter!


Name: Moon Ecstasy (Anonymous) · Date: 16/12/07 - 10:10 am · For: In Which Team 7 Fights
YIPIEEEE! I love this story it's so good... the only one single thing that makes me sad about it is that Iruka still doesn't like Naruto.... I always liked Iruka... hohum... but still AWESOME!

Author's Response: Oh Iruka will come to his senses sooner or later....Kukuku.....Anyhow, thanks for the review!


Name: kiratenshi (Anonymous) · Date: 14/12/07 - 05:38 pm · For: In Which Naruto's Past is Revealed
This is a good story so far. I hope to see what else you put in. Though it almost feels like there's a forshadowing of the Akatsuki leader being Uzumaki Ryoma. I also have to say that I was saddened that you used the name Ryoma, because it's one of my favorite names out there.

Author's Response: I love the name Ryoma too, but I wanted to use it on the bad guy.....I feel messed up now XD. And we may see more of Ryoma in the future.....Things he's done, allies of his, things like that. Ryoma, however, won't come back to life and haunt Naru. Thanks for the review!


Name: vivpiv (Signed) · Date: 12/12/07 - 02:00 am · For: In Which Naruto's Past is Revealed
This story is amazing.I loved all of the chapters and now I'm looking forward to the next one. I hope that you'll update soon.

Author's Response: Chapter 4 is up! Thank you so much for your review!


Name: Moon Ecstasy (Anonymous) · Date: 10/12/07 - 12:30 am · For: In Which Naruto's Past is Revealed
YIPPIEEEE!
Finally a new update.... but you're forgiven... mainly because I always check back every day and that makes it seem longer then it really is and you write long chapters that are really satisfying! I LURVE YOU!

Author's Response: Ahahaha.....*smile* Thanks, I guess. I'll be sure to update soon.


Name: Diaspro465 (Anonymous) · Date: 09/12/07 - 06:53 pm · For: In Which Naruto's Past is Revealed
U MUST CONTINUE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: Oh it's continuing all right! THE POWER OF YOUTH!!!!!!!!!!! *crickets chirp in the background* Ehehehe.....Anyhow, thank you for your review!


Name: Diaspro465 (Anonymous) · Date: 09/12/07 - 06:20 pm · For: In Which Team 7 is Formed
Awesome


Name: Diaspro465 (Anonymous) · Date: 09/12/07 - 05:47 pm · For: In Which Uzumaki Naruto Returns
This Kicks ass!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


Name: evildarklore (Signed) · Date: 09/12/07 - 08:29 am · For: In Which Uzumaki Naruto Returns
MOREEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


Name: Noleta (Signed) · Date: 08/12/07 - 09:54 pm · For: In Which Naruto's Past is Revealed
This is truly and amazing and awe inspiring story. I swear that I'm not sugar coating anything.Only a story this wonderful could make me review like this.

You want proof? Check my other reviews....

Author's Response: Ah.....Thank you. I don't really know how to respond to such praise....*smile* I'm glad you like it so much.


Name: Moon Ecstasy (Anonymous) · Date: 27/11/07 - 01:16 pm · For: In Which Uzumaki Naruto Returns
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more
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*gasps*
*sand drifts across a body dehydrated from lack of a good fan-fic*
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more

Author's Response: *laughs* I know that feeling.....Damn if I haven't been starved for good fanfiction for a while. Anyhow thanks for your review, even if it was monosyllabic.....XD


Name: Moon Ecstasy (Anonymous) · Date: 18/11/07 - 11:49 pm · For: In Which Team 7 is Formed
Wow, I love you! This is really good and very well written. (Some fanfics I swear must be written by illiterate kindergarten-ers)
Keep updating!

Author's Response: I know what you mean about the kindergarten-ers; some stories I try to read are poorly written in both ways; all sorts of spelling/grammar errors (not that I don't have any....heh XD) and a bad/cliche plot line. Thank god for all the good fanfiction in the world, ne? Thanks for the review.


Name: Hyuuga Akenai (Signed) · Date: 18/11/07 - 04:05 pm · For: In Which Team 7 is Formed
Raiden! Woo!

And Kakashi's such a wierdo in this. I love it! Ita-san is wonderful too.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: I adore Kakashi (despite my annoyance for his obvious favoritism for Sasuke) and he'll show up a lot during AIT. Plus he's a fun character to write; I love making him do crazy things I wish I could do in real life. Itachi is a bit harder, as I don't have a real grip on his character (I suck at writing the emotionless, stoic people) but I'm hoping that I'll get better at him with practice. And yes! Raiden enters from stage right! I'm glad you enjoyed it!


Name: Rowanashke (Signed) · Date: 17/11/07 - 10:31 pm · For: In Which Uzumaki Naruto Returns
Wow! That's amazing! I love how you've taken all the elements of the anime and blended them together with your own stuff to create a new, but still familiar story! You are really awsome with the details, too, giving us nice depth without overwelming us in pointless trivia! n.n I love it!

Author's Response: I know what you mean about pointless trivia; I've seen a lot of it in other stories. I'll do my best to keep all the little details you don't really need to know out AIT, but I'm pretty sure they'll show up anyhow, the stubborn little buggers....Heh. Anyhow, I'm so glad you liked it, and thank you for your wonderful review!


Name: Hyuuga Akenai (Signed) · Date: 17/11/07 - 09:57 pm · For: In Which Uzumaki Naruto Returns
Wow... this is incredible! I love how you tie in actually events from the manga and then edit others so they all fit together. And you do it logically, which is the best part. I've seen a lot of writers attempt what you have done and not do a good job.

Be proud of yourself.

And continue! I can't wait for the next installment!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm glad that it made sense; a lot of the time I wonder if certain details should be put in, or if chunks of the story have actual logic.....Heh. Anyhow, I'm so happy that you liked it - it's nice to see my baby get some loving! XD I hope it continues to live up to your expectations.


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