Reviews For Sinfully Yours
Name: stylin_crimson (Signed) · Date: 13/10/07 - 06:48 am · For: blushing is a specailty
That's a good story so far. Hurry up and review please.
Name: ForyourLove (Signed) · Date: 12/10/07 - 06:55 pm · For: blushing is a specailty
*giggles* that was cute.
Heh, yeah I like to review whatever I read. and I LOVE to help out newbies but most think they are too good for help xx If you ever want help for anything go right ahead and contact me ^_^
And I see you forgot a / in one of your HTML codes XD I do that a lot myself.
How many chapters do you have? Oo
Author's Response: thank you for you review! :) i actually wrote one big chapter, but i decided to cut it up. my computer was being stupid. o0
Name: ForyourLove (Signed) · Date: 12/10/07 - 06:35 pm · For: Tears
You have a good use of detail, but its kinda short, no? *giggles* and don't forget the " " around things people are saying.
And it felt kinda dry, you know? It was good in explaining whats happening to her but not so much in reasoning and emotions. *shrugs* Probably just me.
Hn, well...good luck with the next chapter!
Author's Response: thank you for your review. :) im still trying to figure out the stupid "" quote thingies. I'm a writer in training (10th grade) so i'm trying my best to do my best. this is my first fanfiction, so i hope i get better along the way. :) rnrnthank you again for your comment. :)