Reviews For Why Cant You Ever notice me
Name: arsenic_android (Signed) · Date: 17/03/08 - 05:32 pm · For: Chapter 1
i'm assuming that this is hailey? correct me if i'm wrong.
that was such a sad story.. good though!
Name: Sushix (Anonymous) · Date: 24/12/07 - 09:48 pm · For: Chapter 1
some grammar and spelling problems...but other than that, its a good story! plz update!
Name: Sushix (Anonymous) · Date: 24/12/07 - 09:47 pm · For: Chapter 1
some grammar and spelling problems...but other than that, its a good story! plz update!
Name: hinata_darkmoon (Signed) · Date: 20/08/07 - 09:04 pm · For: Chapter 1
heyy baby
love yur story
post new chapter soon
love you ^_^
Name: vivpiv (Signed) · Date: 16/08/07 - 01:12 am · For: Chapter 1
It was short but it seems interesting. But you should correct the mistakes you have. If the speech is separated from the other text it will be easier to read. Also don't forget to update soon.
Name: XxSasukeLovexX (Signed) · Date: 15/08/07 - 04:11 pm · For: Chapter 1
You have a lot of spelling error but other than that, good job. Cant wait for next chapter.
Name: emogirlS2 (Signed) · Date: 15/08/07 - 02:29 pm · For: Chapter 1
It's an awesome first chapter. But there are a few errors that make it a little hard to read. Anyway, I'm adding it to my favorites and I can't wait for the next chapters! please update soon!
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-- narubaby : thanks i writ fast so yea i might be hard to read lol thansk alot fo the fav adding :>