Reviews For Dark of The Moon
Name: sasfan14 (Anonymous) · Date: 21/04/11 - 11:55 am · For: Chapter 10: The Other Brother
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Name: Veja24 (Signed) · Date: 20/02/09 - 06:47 pm · For: Chapter 9: A Dangerous Mind
Hmm... I was little confused. How come Itachi hates Sasuke this much? It doesn't make sense, why didn't he killed Sasuke instead of his family then? Also, Itachi providing a speck of comfort during rape was off, then (if Itachi really hates him).
Name: Veja24 (Signed) · Date: 20/02/09 - 06:43 pm · For: Chapter 4: Help Me...
Wow... that a great rape fic! I love it so much b29; Itachi can be such a sadist, poor Sasuke
Name: kaiden (Anonymous) · Date: 08/11/07 - 01:11 pm · For: Chapter 10: The Other Brother
ok, is good, but dont you think is a litle too fast,forget it!!! naruto is THAT! crazy!!! ah update fast!!
Name: saya (Anonymous) · Date: 24/09/07 - 06:02 am · For: Chapter 10: The Other Brother
i love it cant wait to see more of a protective naruto and a possesive itachi
Name: nellie330 (Anonymous) · Date: 21/09/07 - 05:09 am · For: Chapter 10: The Other Brother
NICE!
Name: Ayame_kun (Signed) · Date: 16/07/07 - 08:54 am · For: Chapter 9: A Dangerous Mind
Hi, I just want to say I really enjoy reading your work, you a clearly a very talented writer!
The majority of the folk on here, myself included, tend to write reasonably well with a few jarring mistakes here and there with spelling, grammer etc. However you don't... it really is like reading it out of a book.
Sadly I've noticed you haven't updated the story in agessssssssssssss... I really hope you're ok and the wonderful insperation that triggered you into creating this brilliant works hasn't abandonned you...
Whatever the reason I really hope you safe and well!
Love your work... please keep it coming!
Ayame_kun
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-- Firesong : Eheh.. Thanks ^-^ I try my best to spell everything right and use proper grammar because I'm a bit of a perfectionist. Also, I'm an aspiring auther, so that might be why it looks like it's from a book. I mean, I plan on making my living off what I write, so it's gotta be good!! ^-^ *sigh* Yes, I realize it takes me a long time to update. That's been the most consistant complaint I've gotten about my stories. Not only that, but that my chapters are too short. I'm working desperately on both of those points!! And no, for once I haven't lost my inspiration. I'm just a little iffy about what direction I should take in the next few chapters. I DO know how it'll end, but I can't reveal that yet ^-^ So yeah.. thanks for your review!!
Name: Akasuna no Ai (Anonymous) · Date: 22/06/07 - 08:46 pm · For: Chapter 9: A Dangerous Mind
Holy fuck, this is an awesome story. It's really sad and angering what's happening to Sasuke, but it's nice that he has Naruto to help. ...for now... Itachi is a real PSYCHO here, huh? Yeesh... Awesome job with this! I'd loove to see where this goes.
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-- Firesong : So you think I did well on the "A Dangerous Mind" chapter? Heheh.. yeah, it's probably one of my more well-written parts, and it also shows that I can portray a psychopath's mind pretty well... Although, I guess, I don't really KNOW what goes on in a killer/rapist/over all really evil guy's mind now, do I? >.>
Name: nejiluver (Signed) · Date: 19/06/07 - 10:27 pm · For: Chapter 9: A Dangerous Mind
that was the best story i've ever read on TONFA so get more chapters in soon! Oh and if you want to , read my story im still writting! It's called The Return By:Nejiluver. But why'de you have to go and make Itachi the bad guy?! I don't want Sasuke and Naruto to lose what they haveso far!! They make the best couple ever! =(
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-- Firesong : Eheh.. Yeah, I think Sasuke and Naruto make a cute couple, too. I guess I'm just addicted to the pain and sorrow I can cause them in my stories *evil grin* and besides, Itachi makes the perfect psycho-villain character!! ^-^ I still love him despite that. He's my all-time favorite character.
Name: XxSasukeLovexX (Signed) · Date: 19/06/07 - 07:29 pm · For: Chapter 9: A Dangerous Mind
I truely love this story! Keep up the good work! I cant wait to see what happens next!
Name: XxSasukeLovexX (Signed) · Date: 19/06/07 - 01:32 pm · For: Chapter 1: Dark of The Moon
This sounds like a really interesting story. I like it. Cant wait for the next chapter.
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-- Firesong : Well, the next 8 chapters are up!! ^-^ Hope you like 'em!!