Reviews For You Think You Can Save Me?
Name: recita1717 (Signed) · Date: 16/07/07 - 06:55 pm · For: Session 1
A fix to my previous response... Does Itachi WANT, a bondage night? I hope that it is something sexual and not monetary, mostly because I'm perverted XP I love this story I'm so glad I actually got my head out of the hole it was in and started reading it!
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-- LittleCrane : bahahahahahahahaha. your funny. i like that. lol. Does Itachi want a donage night? god... i hope so lol. He's a sexy badass evil babe.. gah *drools*.. ok that was weird. Hmmmm bondage night with Neji... gah *drools again thinking about Neji tied up*... ok i have to stop doing that. dont worry, its not something as boring as money... thats so old lol. Im glad you like the story and ill update soon, just for you! Dante
Name: recita1717 (Signed) · Date: 16/07/07 - 06:49 pm · For: Session 12
I'm pretty sure everyone has put "Ichiraku's" by now but here it is again. OMFGs ITACHIIIII!!!! Hotness galore, does he was a bondage night? Whats he want whats he want I wanna know *pouts pouts* OMG I NEED a chapie! Oh man I am imagining all the little perverted outcomings of Itachi! He's so domanient and crazy he could, like, rape Neji and Gaara has to save him and EEEE!!! It's non-con ITANEJI!!!! I LOVES YOU!!!! *LOVE LOVE LOVE Hoshi gives a sloppy deer kiss...ew.* Sorry about that... BUT I LOVE YOU!
Name: puresugar13 (Signed) · Date: 16/07/07 - 12:34 pm · For: Session 12
*hisses* Naruto better keep his hands off Gaara and go find himself a Sasuke! Itachi! *squee!!!* I luv Itachi! He's so awesome! *faints* 1... 2... 3... 4... 5... *wakes up* I'm up! Great story so far! I can't wait till the next chappie!
Laterz,
Kat
=^.^=
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-- LittleCrane : ahahahaha yeah.. i wonder where Sasuke could be... i know.. i love Itachi too lol. Glad you like it and ill update soon! LittleCrane
Name: lovefantasystuff (Signed) · Date: 16/07/07 - 06:15 am · For: Session 12
this was ace thx for updateing so quick!
oh its session 12 not 13 lol
naruto back off neji and garra would make such a gd couple
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-- LittleCrane : hahahaha yeah i just realised that then... im like.. oops... mistake. ill fix it now. Glad you like it! Dante
Name: lovefantasystuff (Signed) · Date: 16/07/07 - 03:17 am · For: Session 11
i can't guess sorry.
tis hell of a gd so far please update soon.
xx xx
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-- LittleCrane : hahahaha lol its ok. I was just curious as to who people would think it was... or who they would want it ot be lol. Im glad you like it and ill update soon! Dante
Name: coolbeans13 (Signed) · Date: 15/07/07 - 11:50 am · For: Session 11
Yeyey, it's so good! Updates are needed soon :)
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-- LittleCrane : oh thanks! im a pretty quick updater... so it shouldnt be too long =] thanks for the review!!! Dante
Name: puresugar13 (Signed) · Date: 15/07/07 - 11:43 am · For: Session 11
Great story! As for guessing, I'ma go out on alimb her and say... Ew... Gai? *runs in circles screming* *puls off clothes* *puts on PJs* *burns clothes* *sets self on fire* *brushes teeth* *uses mouthwash* *uses car polisher* I'm barely half way okay right now after that.... sorry you had to read me like that... Great so far! Can't wait for the next chapter!
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-- LittleCrane : bahahahahahahahahah thats funny... mainly because id be doing the same thing... so no.. good try but not gai. glad you liked it though!
Name: stylin_crimson (Signed) · Date: 15/07/07 - 11:26 am · For: Session 11
Argh. Girl that was to cool! Swear down.
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-- LittleCrane : hahahaha thanks! Swear down? lol... confused... Dante
Name: BloodOfANinja (Signed) · Date: 15/07/07 - 05:32 am · For: Session 1
ooh wow!
that was really good!
=] x
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-- LittleCrane : oh thank you! im glad you liked it! Dante
Name: MurderScene__ (Signed) · Date: 15/07/07 - 01:47 am · For: Session 11
Ah, I loved it! [: Haha, that was my favorite line, too. "You are possibly the best and worst thing that ever happened to me. I don’t know whether to thank you or kick you."
*Giggled* I have no idea who it could be though,
I would so laugh if it was Gai or someone like that. c_c.
Yeah, loved it! Can't wait for more. *Grins*
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-- LittleCrane : hahahaha thanks! yeah... i like that line lol. Im so impressed with myself its not funny lol. hahahaha Gai... yeah that would be funny... gross... but not funny. Its not Gai though lol. Glad you liked it! Dante
Name: A Vampires Butterfly (Signed) · Date: 15/07/07 - 01:32 am · For: Session 11
*giggles* I loved that line. '"You are possibly the best and worst thing that ever happened to me. I don’t know whether to thank you or kick you."' I need to use that line some time...for something....*grins* Anyway! I loved it! Poor Neji...Still can't freaking figure out who his ex is! *frustrated over puzzlement* I so can't wait for more!!! Wonderful job! With much love, A Vampires Butterfly ^.^
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-- LittleCrane : hahahaha thanks!!! gah... you're awesome.. what a loverly beta. i was actually rather impressed with that line too...i came up with it all by myself =]. Anyway... no one has been able to guess so far... well at least not on FF.net, but you know... think outside the box ; ). Thanks for the loverly review dear! xx Dante
Name: recita1717 (Signed) · Date: 14/07/07 - 08:26 pm · For: Session 10
Yayayayay! Happy happy chapie! Gaara is growing so naturally in this, there is no sudden dramatic change (unlike in my writting XP) that makes it seem fake. This is something that could actually happen really, which makes it oh so good! The only problem I have is that I get a little lost with the rapid fire dialog. Sometimes you have two different lines for the same character, and that throws me off *How I do not know... I was in English honors and yet I am a dunce...* But I still love it and take the time to reread to get the full effect! The pauses make the story all the more better, but being in two different lines confuses me. Anyways, LOVES AND WANTS ANOTHER CHAPIE!!!
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-- LittleCrane : oh thanks! glad you like it... So you mean like if Gaara, for example says something, but then there is some kind of pause, and he continues, but on a different line? Lol... i think thats hat you mean. Sorry about that! I'll change it in future chapters to make it less confusing! Im glad it doesnt seem too fake... its hard because there are like timeskips and such, where not a great deal happens... just minor things... but yeah.. i dunno. Im glad its not fake! Ill update soon! Dante
Name: puresugar13 (Signed) · Date: 14/07/07 - 10:54 am · For: Session 10
AWWWWWW!!! I love it so far! Poor Naru!Poor Panda! Great story, please keep up the good writing!
Laterz,
Kat
=^.^=
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-- LittleCrane : oh thanks so much im glad you liked it! Dante
Name: MurderScene__ (Signed) · Date: 14/07/07 - 01:57 am · For: Session 10
I loved it! Amazing. Sad, funny, fluffy.
Good work! I loved it. [:
Can't wait for more.
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-- LittleCrane : aw thanks! Yeah it had a range of things lol. Glad you liked it! LittleCrane
Name: A Vampires Butterfly (Signed) · Date: 14/07/07 - 01:16 am · For: Session 10
*blushes, grinning madly* Thanks for the advertising...=^-^= I was happy to beta a story like this! I hope to beta the next chapter as well! Anyway! Poor Naru-chan...I loved how you made them both have such a sad past. And the coin thing made me laugh. Of course the fluffy ending was the best! I'm glad your making longer chapters, but now I can't seem to tell you everything I loved about it! xP. Well I can't wait for more!!! With much love, A Vampires Butterfly ^.^
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-- LittleCrane : hahahaha you absolutely deserve the advertisment! Couldnt have done it without you! You can totally beta the next one for me! You can beta as many of my things as you want lol. Yeah i think i needed longer chapters... i thought they were long enough... but im like... nah... they can be better. Im in a huge writting mood... i might do the next one now... im not sure lol. Im really glad you like it! xx Dante
Name: recita1717 (Signed) · Date: 10/07/07 - 08:10 pm · For: Session 9
Yayayayayayyyyyy! Not crap, it's a builder chapter. You need to be nicer to yourself! These are not "crap" chapters, their "builder" chapters. If you read my story, "Notice" then you'll see one crappy story! I just don't want to take the effort to delete it. Anyways, keep it up :D
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-- LittleCrane : hahahahah oh thank you! im glad that people can see that they are like... important chapters! and fyi i will read that story and i bet its not crap! but ill read it tomorrow... i need sleep now lol Dante
Name: lovefantasystuff (Signed) · Date: 09/07/07 - 02:42 am · For: Session 9
this chaps really gd!!
bring on the nxt one!!
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-- LittleCrane : oh thanks! i should update soon =] Dante
Name: JustAnotherSoul (Signed) · Date: 08/07/07 - 03:59 pm · For: Session 9
YOSH! Gaara finally comes out of the closet!
And Naruto...aww, he's so kawaii! ^__^
And Neji.. Hehe, he really is a pervert.
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-- LittleCrane : hahahaha yeah but everyone loves a pervert! or rather... everyone loves Neji the pervert... i know.... im like... gah... Gaara, you now know your gay. Great now we can move on! lol... i love naruto... i just wanna give him a great big hug! Thanks heaps for the review! Dante
Name: ChiyoChan (Signed) · Date: 08/07/07 - 02:01 pm · For: Session 9
Nah, I didn't think it was bad. Quite a bit of development there... Things are progressing. I can't wait to read more!
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-- LittleCrane : ohhhh thanks! im glad people still like it even though its probably not as good as some other chapters. I should update soon... not like i have anything else to do at the moment! LittleCrane
Name: A Vampires Butterfly (Signed) · Date: 08/07/07 - 01:08 pm · For: Session 9
Believe me, I am on all hours of the day and night, so next chapter just feel free to send it to me and I will most likely see it the minute you do. *nods* I'm so glad that Gaara is finally realizing he is gay. I mean, how long that take him? *grins* Is Naruto going to get together with someone? Or just stay single? I loved it, as always! Can't wait for more, but please send it to me first? With much love, A Vampires Butterfly ^.^
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-- LittleCrane : hahahaha i surely will i promise =]. Oh and we will just have to wait and see about Naruto wont we? tjey're may be a little twist and turn about to happen... we just dont know ; ) xx Dante
Name: Neon_Ultrahh (Signed) · Date: 08/07/07 - 09:18 am · For: Session 1
hahah right.... theres two people owning this accoont (can't spell) so thats why theres two reviews sorry if there was any confusion xxx Neon and Ultrahh
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-- LittleCrane : oooooooh right! im like... hmmm did they forget they reviewed? uh well... thats an rxtra person who liked the story! lol. oh and for future reference its account lol =] Dante
Name: Neon_Ultrahh (Signed) · Date: 08/07/07 - 06:50 am · For: Session 9
oooo its getting mighty interesting...
cant wait for the rest!!
xxxx
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-- LittleCrane : lol... ah yes and there is much more to come... really... this is nothing compared to what ive got planned =] LittleCrane
Name: Neon_Ultrahh (Signed) · Date: 08/07/07 - 05:17 am · For: Session 9
Awsomee write more!
Love from Neon and Ultrahh
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-- LittleCrane : oh thanks! Glad you liked it :] Dante
Name: fanngirl_92 (Signed) · Date: 08/07/07 - 04:49 am · For: Session 9
that was a good chapter. it wasn;t crap. it made me laugh when Gaara got jealous with Temari and started calling her a whore and slut. what a caring brother (:
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-- LittleCrane : hahahaha yeah... well... i would too if my sister started acting like that with my hot shrink... of course... my sister does act like that... but with anything with boy bits...and i do call her that lol. Im glad you like it and dont think its shit... i didnt really like it... but then again im just the author... and i dont really like anything lol. Thanks heaps :) Dante
Name: MurderScene__ (Signed) · Date: 08/07/07 - 04:27 am · For: Session 9
This is amazingg. Hah, I love it.
I don't usually like Gaara/Neji fics..
But I love this one!
Good work! [:
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-- LittleCrane : oh wow! that makes me happy then! im glad you like it. what couplings do you usually like? Dante