Reviews For The Diary of Kiba - A KibaxHinata Story
Name: Pidgeon_small (Signed) · Date: 03/07/10 - 09:39 pm · For: Chapter 6 - Saints and Saviours
I have one nitpick about the formatting. Some of your paragraphs are gigantic. This can make reading your story harder than it needs to be.
Big blocks of text feels daunting and tiresome on the eyes. Cutting some of your paragraphs in half would work wonders.
Name: Pidgeon_small (Signed) · Date: 03/07/10 - 05:30 pm · For: Chapters 1 and 2 - Joy and Despair in Konoha
I love reading this story. It seems to have a lot of detail. Though I tend to love anything with a lot of Team 8 and KibaHina in general.
Name: Day Eight (Signed) · Date: 14/09/07 - 11:18 am · For: Chapter 9 - The Life of a Ninja
What a well-written piece. I even cried! I think it's about time you move onto that novel!
Author's Response: Well thank you for the kind review. This is one of the greater chapters I have written so far, a few readers have cried and it also inspired a great poem by Swords_and_Bandages. rnrnI am just happy to have moved people with my writing. Thanks for reading, and I hope that you will continue reading in the future :)rnrnAnd I hope you continue writing and improving yourself too. Have a good one mate :)
Name: SHank (Signed) · Date: 04/09/07 - 06:43 pm · For: Chapter 10 - Kiba's Past and Future
writing a story like this is quite clever, i was thinking of writing one in letters between a few characters. very creative
Author's Response: Hey thanks for the review, and for reading. Most people see how word heavy it all is and they don't bother reading it, so it's nice to see that some people can enjoy a long story. As for right now I'm working on Chapter Three of the second season, but it'll be a few days. In any case, thanks for stopping by :) Cheers!
Name: SHank (Signed) · Date: 04/09/07 - 06:42 pm · For: Chapters 1 and 2 - Joy and Despair in Konoha
Interesting seeing some of the characters like this.
Author's Response: Yeah, it started as a short story which would have ended after Chapter Three. So much for that :D
Name: Lamerstu (Signed) · Date: 15/08/07 - 04:18 am · For: Chapters 1 and 2 - Joy and Despair in Konoha
That was very good, but one thing bothers me, though, a very little thing. I think Kiba was a bit too... mild in those diary entries. I've always though of him as kind of a second Naruto. Apart from that, everything was awesome. I'll have to read more of this story if I find the time! ^_^ Also, if you have time, please check out some of my stories, too!
~Tasi Lamerstu
PS: I read your chapter from the Questions Bulletin.
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-- TTM : Thanks for the review :) In regards to his normally boisterous self, I have omitted that in the journal entries because I don't think he just wouldn't write about it. And quite frankly the live action scenes are a bit too serious for his fooling around, although in later chapters you do see his violent side and anger. Again, thanks for the review, and I hope yow will fond the time :D Cheers!
Name: milliexchan (Signed) · Date: 28/07/07 - 04:50 am · For: Chapter 10 - Kiba's Past and Future
oooooooohhhhhh! i'm so excited! what is this mysterious thing that happened with the Inuzuka clan? i hope Kiba will be alright!!!
i really cant wait for the journal of kiba! *jumps around in excitement*
this story has been amazing, simply amazing, and an absolute pleasure to read, thankyou so much!
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-- TTM : Thank you for your compliments. I am just as excited about Season Two, which I will hopefully begin this week. Thanks for following. It's readers like yourself which make the hours I put into this project worhtwhile. Cheers.
Name: Kibakun (Anonymous) · Date: 24/07/07 - 12:25 pm · For: Chapters 1 and 2 - Joy and Despair in Konoha
EXCELLENT STORY!!! You write awesome. Normally, I'd normally be deterred by the 'bad-dish' light it puts Kiba under but you write so well it doesn't bother me. I will have to read the other chapters soon.
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-- TTM : Well, I've always seen Kiba as someone who would beat you up if you talked badly of him and he found out about it. As the season progresses he is faced with new challenges and becomes a better person, although he is still ready to defend himself and Hinata with violence. Thanks for reading, I hope you'll continue and that you'll read Season Two after I write it as well. Cheers :)
Name: Swords_and_Bandages (Signed) · Date: 24/07/07 - 09:48 am · For: Chapter 10 - Kiba's Past and Future
So many blessings while life stresses them. For all the joy and the hurt. For all that has been, is, and ever shall be. May happiness be theirs for eternity. May peace and love reign on earth for all time.
2:14, huh? Nice symbolism. Good job.
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-- TTM : Glad you enjoyed it :) Well, before I begin Season Two I have been asked to make an index, explaining the Japanese words I use but we should be in business in roughly a week. Thanks for reading mate, your feedback was very much appreciated. I hope you keep writing too.
Name: Swords_and_Bandages (Signed) · Date: 15/07/07 - 12:44 pm · For: Chapter 9 - The Life of a Ninja
The blue fang, the color deep as the sea, shall forever bear the memory of a friend now passed away. Beautifully written, my friend. Very good. Can't wait until the next chapter.
This even inspired me to write a poem. Check it out, if you like.
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-- TTM : Glad you liked it mate :) This was a very powerful chapter for me to write, so I took my time and poured emotion into it. Obviously I did something right. Thanks for the kind review, and I saw the poem. Pretty sweet :D
Name: milliexchan (Signed) · Date: 15/07/07 - 10:54 am · For: Chapter 9 - The Life of a Ninja
Yet another brilliant chapter. Poor Shino, how horrible for them all. I like the way that Kiba's made a fresh start with the new colour of his tattoos. All I can say is: well done! This story truly is amazing! >.
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-- TTM : Thank you for the support, I think that this chapter is one of my best yet, and I am particularly proud of it myself. And I'm glad you liked the tattoos :)
Name: Swords_and_Bandages (Signed) · Date: 11/07/07 - 07:22 pm · For: Chapter 8 (Part 2) - Judgement
One thing I do like is these romantic fanfics. Hell, I bet I won't be able to turn out anything even as half decent as this. This is marvelous. Of all the emotionally charged fanfics I've read, this easily ranks in the top 3. Hope you'll update soon. I really look forward to a happy ending.
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-- TTM : Thanks mate. I'm working on Chapter Nine now, but it may be a while as my bro's birthday is on this weekend, so it's down tools while he's home. As for yourself, just keep practicing. You'll get better with practice. That's what I've been doing :)
Name: milliexchan (Signed) · Date: 10/07/07 - 10:03 am · For: Chapter 8 (Part 2) - Judgement
wow. this story is just... so good! please update it soon?!?
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-- TTM : Thank you for reading! I find that many are put off with how 'word heavy' my FanFic is. Fear not, because I am working on the next chapter. There are but two more chapters left in the Diary of Kiba, but after that I will go onto a second season. I hope you will continue to follow, and enjoy reading it as much as I enjoy writing. Thank you again for the review!
Name: milliexchan (Signed) · Date: 10/07/07 - 09:26 am · For: Chapter 6 - Saints and Saviours
This story is absolutely amazing, I literally cannot stop reading it!
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-- TTM : Cool :) Thanks
Name: ANBU Captain (Anonymous) · Date: 08/07/07 - 09:03 pm · For: Chapters 1 and 2 - Joy and Despair in Konoha
Great story! Update soon!
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-- TTM : Thanks for the review mate, just posted the next chapter last night. You're the second person to review the story and it's been here over a month, so thanks for the input. There are two more chapters to be made then I move to the second season. I hope you'll continue reading it :)
Name: thenarutofanfreak22 (Signed) · Date: 19/06/07 - 11:33 am · For: Chapters 1 and 2 - Joy and Despair in Konoha
Excellent Story :) Very Excellent, you get a 10
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-- TTM : Hey, wow! A response! I didn't think my Fic would get noticed here and only posted the first part. I updated it to where I have authored to date, please feel free to read and review it at your discretion. Thanks for the support mate!