Reviews For Pain Transfer
Name: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: 01/01/08 - 02:35 am · For: Chapter 2: Taken Over
No offense but this story S-U-C-K-S SUCKS!!!!
Name: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: 01/01/08 - 02:34 am · For: Chapter 2: Taken Over
No offense but this story S-U-C-K-S SUCKS!!!!
Name: MizuHime123 (Signed) · Date: 09/06/07 - 08:14 am · For: Chapter One: The Beginning of it all.
Wow. This is a pretty good fic. I like where it's going so far.
The only criticism I would offer is to watch your grammar. Most of it is really good, but there are spots here and there that are not as good.
Please update soon!
~MizuHime
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-- Aphrodite : Thanks for the review! ^_^