Reviews For Machination
Name: sheechiibii (Signed) · Date: 02/02/08 - 04:45 pm · For: Chapter Nine Part One
Great story, i loved it so much. It was awsome. Its now favourated and so are you! your an exelent writer! totaly rock dude =] this story was soooo gripping and detailed it actualt so rules!!! one of the best iv ever read.Loved every part of it. To tell you the truth at the start i wasnt sure if i would like it at all, but omg i was so rong, it was on a whole other lever and now im off to find invincible hehe xx 1000000 stars
Name: Ashley (Anonymous) · Date: 26/01/08 - 08:16 am · For: Chapter Nine Part One
I liked this but i wanted to clarify schizophrenics do not have multiple personalities. It means to be separated from reality and these people often suffer delusions will sometimes speak in rhyme or go through a series of random thoughts while talking. For an example watch sybil with sally fields. In this movie sybil has disassociative identity disorder or multiple personality syndrome and her mother has episodic schizophrenia. Watch for the lettuce scene.
Name: Kuryu (Signed) · Date: 29/12/07 - 05:32 pm · For: Chapter Nine Part One
Great! Great! I love this story! I can't stop reading it! ^^
Name: Blood and Ink (Signed) · Date: 31/07/07 - 07:16 am · For: Chapter Nine Part One
I've fallowed this story since the begining, And the difference did not disappoint.
Its wounderful! You've done a fantastic joke with this story. I'm so happy I get to read all of it.
Name: SappySue (Signed) · Date: 02/07/07 - 01:14 pm · For: Chapter Nine Part One
You..you didn't have to make Gaara die! Oh well, My love for Gaara won't make your story any less good as it is now- Now I'm off to read Invincible..
Name: Satoyuki (Signed) · Date: 01/07/07 - 11:10 pm · For: Chapter Nine Part One
My friend, I am proud to say that you are welcome, and I'm gonna be one of those who's reading Invincible.
Name: Wild_Flower (Signed) · Date: 01/07/07 - 10:51 pm · For: Chapter Nine Part One
Aww! Sasuke and Naruto get a happy ending! I love it! Wonderfull job, really! Hehehe! I'm off to read the first chapter of Invincible now! ^_^
Name: A Vampires Butterfly (Signed) · Date: 01/07/07 - 06:54 pm · For: Chapter Nine Part One
*wipes away tears, grinning like a fool* I-I'm so happy it had a happy ending...yet it isn't over. Oh gods, that means it isn't a happy ending! That means something horrible happens and they need to have it all sorted out before they can ever have a happy ending! *cries again* Still it will be interesting to read! I am just about to go off to read Invincible, right after I finish this review! You are so welcome for the reviews, it was no problem reviewing for such a wonderful story! Well I'm off, once again this is was really, truly a masterpiece and almost a short novel! Well it deserves to be a novel anyway, it has all the material for murder mystery novel. Okay I'm going to stop rambling and go and read the first chapter of yet another sure to be masterpiece, works of art! With much love, A Vampires Butterfly ^.^
Name: RamenFox (Signed) · Date: 01/07/07 - 06:25 pm · For: Chapter Nine Part One
Your welcome for reviewing, It was an awesome story!!! I love the ending! I can't wait for Invincible! xD