Reviews For Machination
Name: sew123093 (Signed) · Date: 03/06/07 - 07:51 pm · For: Chapter Five Part Two
This story is absolutely incredable. I love it. Please right some more. *puppy eyes*
Author's Response: Thank you. ^^ I'm glad you enjoyed it! And please continue to read and review! Thank you, SBP
Name: Seasosassy (Signed) · Date: 02/06/07 - 07:04 pm · For: Chapter Five Part Two
Heya Ao-chan. *huggles.* Loverly story. Ha! See..I review for you, xD So..nice..can't wait to hear Invincible..O_O You best tell me about it.
Author's Response: Sure, sure.... I know you... you only want to because of the smexiness... Well, I tell you that smex doesn't make a story, the story makes the smex!!! Ga! Thank you for reviewing. ^^
Name: littleolmee (Signed) · Date: 26/05/07 - 10:13 am · For: Chapter Five Part Two
This story is so good. Poor Naruto even Sasuke is begining to not believe Garaa is real. Garaa has certainly made it seem like he isn't real. But if they found the blood that would mean that Naruto should have a wound healing right? Didn't they search him for wounds? Wouldn't that prove he didn't kill Sakura being he hadn't been shot or even grazed by a bullet? What about other murders? Garaa just killed another person in the same way he killed the others that should prove Naruto didn't do it if other murders are being committed right? Also if Sasuke thinks he might be Schizophrenic wouldn't he have a doctor examine Naruto? Well can't wait to see what you have in mind next, keep up the good work. Take care.
Author's Response: Because the bullet only grazed Gaara it meant that it had to be stopped by something else, right? So it's embedded in the alley wall. Unless they found the bullet and assessed there was blood and fragments on it by a ballistics expert they wouldn't know it had hit anyone. All they would know is that Sakura fired a shot in the general direction of something and obviously missed. As for the blood-soaked rag, yes, I've had reviewers bite my head off for that. All fanfics have their flaws, right? Eh. Besides, Naruto's been plenty wounded by Gaara's, uh, ministrations. And since the woman was killed in the same way, it'll only point to Naruto being the murderer of ALL the victims. If you're a skitso, you won't even know what's going on if you're in the 'other' state. You'll 'wake up', if you will, with no memory of what you did. That's what Sasuke thinks of Naruto - and yes, the condition is practically unheard of in Japan. There will be a doctor in a later chapter. Well, I hope that answers it all and I'm glad you enjoyed!!!!! Thanks for reviewing! SBP
Name: SappySue (Signed) · Date: 21/05/07 - 01:01 pm · For: Chapter Five Part Two
I enjoyed this chapter alot- PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE- update. ^.^
Name: bandybunny (Anonymous) · Date: 20/05/07 - 09:52 pm · For: Chapter Five Part Two
YAY love the story! omg its soooo interesting...i cant stop reading and i need to study for finals...>,< o well thankies for the read update! ^-^
Author's Response: Ha ha... I wouldn't want to be responsible for making you fail finals.... ^^' But I'm glad you enjoyed it! SBP
Name: Satoyuki (Signed) · Date: 20/05/07 - 04:33 pm · For: Chapter Five Part Two
Very nice. I love the latest two chapters, and it makes you kinda fear what Gaara has planned.
Author's Response: Yes, well... I guess you'll just have to wait! Glad you enjoyed. SBP