Wow...I have no idea how you can write like this. I know I can't. It all seems so planed and orderly, perfect and just well written. You obviously didn't write this on a hit of inspiration, no you probably have this story all planned out in your head you probably just need to get it typed up and posted. Sorry I just love analyzing people and reading about the authors through their stories. Wonderful job really! Your making me fall in love with Sasuke all over again, even Sakura is cool. With much love, A Vampires Butterfly ^.^

Author's Response: Thank you. I just contributed on a Round Robin on your story "New" in which I offered yet more advice... thank you very much for your review! And yes, as a matter of fact I do have it all planned out and completed, in fact. I am planning on writing a sequel, Invincible, in which will be even better than this one. ^^ Thank you again! SBP