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Reviews For SEME LESSONS

Name: sasunaru_fangirl (Anonymous) · Date: 23/09/07 - 12:48 am · For: Seme Lessons, I did not want to know
hehehe i love it!!!!!!!!! it's funny because all of your jokes in here are like almost all of the jokes that me and my friend have!!!!! like the death note one and the uke thing and the sakura thing!!!! so funny t made me laugh so hard


Name: RamenFox (Signed) · Date: 21/09/07 - 06:13 pm · For: Seme Lessons, I did not want to know
Once again...LOLOLOLOLO!!! I think I died...again. ^^ THAT WAS SO HOT!!! Well...cold I guess. But poor Gaara. He didn't get some. xD Naru is just SO cute! And we ALL know that Sakura will never get some. Balls or no balls. We know. lol

Author's Response: lol thanx XD i love your reviews

Author's Response: lol thanx XD i love your reviews


Name: RamenFox (Signed) · Date: 21/09/07 - 05:29 pm · For: SEME LESSONS UKE TAKE OVER
LOL!! LOL!!! That was SO funny! HE LET GAARA IN! HAHAHAH!! Poor Naruto is the Uke again....YAY! What a creative way to use popsicles. ^^


Name: RamenFox (Signed) · Date: 21/09/07 - 05:22 pm · For: Seme Lessons
OMG! LOL That was SO funny i think i died from either laughter or loss of blood. But anyway i'm using gods computer and I must say I LOVE THIS FANFIC!!! YEAAAHHH!!! And I love the idea of Sasuke being top A LOT, LOT, LOT, LOT, LOT-...A LLLOOOOOTTTTT more than Naruto. Actually he should be Seme permanently. Period. ^^ LOVE IT!!!


Name: Akumu_Kage (Anonymous) · Date: 18/04/07 - 01:09 pm · For: Seme Lessons
That was funny!!! And Sasuke should demonstrate a few kinky and very seme control techniques with Naruto like: Sex toys and playing dress up or role playing and group orgies... (Yes I'm sick in the head, but I don't care!) JA!


Name: Landagoshin (Signed) · Date: 13/04/07 - 05:39 pm · For: Seme Lessons
It was an honestly well-meant second story. But here are a few things that could make your stories a bit better.

1. Research the topic you're writing about. Doesn't hurt to do a little information seeking about the subject on which your story is based. For example . . .As you can see from your other lovely reviews, it really is 'seme', not 'semen'.

2. Inside jokes do not belong in fan-fiction. They can be in the Author's Note, they can even be subtle in the story, but whatever you do, don't write "(Inside joke, sorry)"

3. Before you post a story, upload it onto Microsoft Word or another program that has spell check AND USE IT. Spell Check is your friend with benefits. For reals.

4. Try to find a beta reader; someone who reads your story before you post it and helps you with any errors you may have made. If you want to find one, go to a user's page and at the bottom, it should say if they want to volunteer to be a beta reader.

Hope some of this helps. If it doesn't . . . well . . . I'll just be looking for your next story Kotoha. :D

Yes. There ARE Grammar Police in this world. I don't think I'm one of them, but they will sweep down like a hawk and rip out all motivation to write another story.

Have fun ;)


-Landagoshin

Author's Response: …I have one really important statement to your comment *clears throat for this* I’M FUCKING DYSLEXIC GOD DAMMIT! And for your info I had I friend edit it for me and as you can see it did not come up to your overly ridiculous standers of grammar and to that you screw you ^.^ …..I all ready know I cant spell and I don’t need some one who I don’t even know to tell me I suck, but thanx now I know I suck at grammar too, so are you happy you help and solved nothing but you get a cookie any way now that we got that out the way I really hope you have a very happy day =^^=rnrnfrom me: VEE


Name: Sasuke_Luvr (Signed) · Date: 13/04/07 - 05:15 pm · For: Seme Lessons
*eye twitching* Um.........okay.........a few questions........don't you mean 'seme' instead of 'semen' ? Okay, so that was only one question, but I really want to know. Other than that small little error........this was good, especially the ending where Naru and Sasu are yelling at each other, hehe! ^^ But, yeah, you might want to fix the semen thing.....

Author's Response: ....i did


Name: A Vampires Butterfly (Signed) · Date: 13/04/07 - 04:08 pm · For: Seme Lessons
Umm what do you mean by semen? Do you mean seme? Very funny if you do. With much love, A Vampires Butterfly ^.^


Name: takahiro8 (Signed) · Date: 13/04/07 - 04:04 pm · For: Seme Lessons
ok since im here first in posting ill say it nicely



IT'S SEME
NOT SEMEN
GOD
I WAS LIKE' 'WTF IS WRONG THIS PERSON'

AND YOU KNOW WHAT ELSE YOUR GRAMMAR MADE MY EYES BLEED!
IT WAS VERY PAINFULL!!!

NOT ONLY THAT< YOUR ARE NO WHERE NEAR FUNNY, IT WAS JUST EXTREAMLY STUPID.

AS WELL, A SEME IS THE ONE CONTROLLING THE RELATIONSHIP, MEANING THEY CAN.......TAKE IT, AND STILL BE SEME.








see wasnt that nice.


Author's Response: ...you know i really don’t care what the fuck you say cuss obviously you had nothing better to do thin try and ruin some ones day (which you failed =^.^=) anywho I hope you have a fun filled life rnrnfrom me: VEE =^^=


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