Reviews For The Retrievel
Name: kakashi66 (Signed) · Date: 13/08/07 - 03:57 pm · For: The Retrievel
plz write more
Name: kakashi66 (Signed) · Date: 04/08/07 - 08:27 am · For: The Retrievel
hurry and update
Name: kakashi66 (Signed) · Date: 02/08/07 - 07:14 am · For: The Retrievel
plz update soon this is good
Name: kakashi66 (Signed) · Date: 13/07/07 - 02:07 pm · For: The Retrievel
more
Name: kakashi66 (Signed) · Date: 06/07/07 - 08:47 am · For: The Retrievel
omg this is good oh and i wouldnt mind kakashis member poking me either
Name: Challa (Signed) · Date: 06/04/07 - 01:18 pm · For: omg I get dirty
I know how it is, so dont worry about it ;) Hope to read more of this story soon. :)
Name: Challa (Signed) · Date: 06/04/07 - 07:53 am · For: omg I get dirty
You should get yourself a Beta reader. The chapter was ok, poorly written though. I know you can make it better.
Author's Response: well I kinda did it in a rush last night I was up till 12:00 and I was so tired that I didn't even think to edit it, come to think of it I shall do that right now
Name: Challa (Signed) · Date: 01/04/07 - 10:17 am · For: The capture
I'd love to feel Kakashi's 'member' poking my behind *drools*
Author's Response: hehehehe me too
Name: Challa (Signed) · Date: 31/03/07 - 02:46 pm · For: The Retrievel
moooooore! ;)