Reviews For The Girl With The Blazing Blue Eyes
Name: Cloud Enix (Signed) · Date: 07/07/14 - 12:00 pm · For: Chapter 4 - Reviving the Clan
and toneshift...
is she going to stab him? I feel like i'd probably stab someone if I was treated that way, sasuke's treating her like a slave.
Name: Cloud Enix (Signed) · Date: 07/07/14 - 11:52 am · For: Chapter 3 - The Talk
lol
I never thought I'd encounter a slenderman reference *is still laughing*
Name: Fire_and_Ice (Signed) · Date: 04/07/14 - 03:32 am · For: Chapter 4 - Reviving the Clan
This story confuses me a lot. Took me a long time to figure out what time it was set in, and the events are just so quick to happen with little thought or background. Especially this forcing-her-to-reproduce-with-him bit. Quite uncomfortable and rocky writing, in my opinion. Interesting events, but overly unexplained. The idea of the story is really good, at least.
Name: Lady Sun (Signed) · Date: 03/07/14 - 04:31 pm · For: Chapter 4 - Reviving the Clan
I want to know if she'll be able to activate it or not D: