I'm really excited about this story! It might be a little rushed, in my opinion. More details might be beneficial. And I'd like to know more about ages and what Mika looks like, but otherwise it's really cool! I like how it's different, like Sasuke is friends with Naruto and not a depressed bump. I'm a little cautious of the alternate storyline with the goddess, though. I guess we'll see how it goes!

Author's Response: Hmm. Details details... By now, it's been about two years since the Massacre so the threesome will be around ten and nine respectively. The bit about Sasuke and Naruto hit me in the bathroom where -most people- I fantasize about my characters. I spent ten minutes cackling about it. Basically Mika looks like a genderbent version of Madara, including the uncontrollable hair. She does have Itachi's eye lines though. Her looks will be described in a later chapter once she starts taking missions and becomes known. And it's not the goddess you have to worry about. :3 Hee hee... I really hope the twists work out and don't murder me in my sleep. I've been beating my head on the desk trying to figure out how to slow it down... but I can never get around it's "hurry-up" nature. Frustrating......