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Reviews For Shizu Aburame

Name: Voyna (Signed) · Date: 16/09/14 - 04:40 pm · For: Epilogue
It is over. I shouldn't have read all the chapters today. I feel so terribly sorry. I wish Kishimoto will have the same respect for his readers and just show the happy-ever-after of each and every one of his characters. *sigh* this was perfect and I am so ridiculously sad at the idea that it is over. Goddamit. Write that Kiba oneshot, please. PLEASE!


Name: Voyna (Signed) · Date: 16/09/14 - 04:34 pm · For: Count Down
You know, Kiba is a weird dude friend. I mean were I fueled by testosterone, I would most probably rip out his arm and make him eat it. But it was nice that they all came to an agreement. But I am left ... slightly perplexed. What is a winter melon? I hope that is not a new kama sutra position. Sorry to all the little babies I shocked out there. I am just curious ... Ah, love. This is beautiful and makes us romantics wish that such stories truly existed.

Author's Response: Kiba is Kiba(and we love him for that fact lol)A winter melon is actually a gourd type vegetable and according to the data book Shino's favorite food. So nothing kinky friend, I did have a laugh over it lol.


Name: Voyna (Signed) · Date: 16/09/14 - 04:12 pm · For: A Deadly Aburame Indeed
Is it me or are Shizu and Kiba are having a pissing contest at the beginning. I feel like they are both territorial. Kiba considers himself the leader, Shizu considers her private little life bubble to be threatened by that nosy dog-breath (remember his old nickname?). But I loved the ShinoShizu interaction just there. It was subtle, affectionate and ever so sweet. Great job, but that is not surprising coming from you!


Name: Voyna (Signed) · Date: 15/09/14 - 07:54 am · For: In Shino’s Stead
Honestly, I really felt bad for Shizu. I mean, this is a lovestruck girl from a pretty stern clan. She feels abandoned. She tries to make this marriage thing work just as much as Shino but the thing is, Shino still has the chance to run away from all the stress of it. She however stays behind and has to deal with all that load of pressure being in the clan and missing Shino. I love how you depict Shizu and Hinata looking out for each other, their relationship is nice. Hinata is soft, Shizu is straight-to-the point. Very realistic. However, I wonder, is there some type of romantic tension between Hinata and Kiba? That tell-tale blush of Hinata's when Shizu mentions Kiba? But then your little spinoff promise (you better do it lady or else I scream) makes me think not. You have me wondering so much ... I don't like it. I want to know right away D:

Author's Response: Not to give to much away but Hinata is still pining for Naruto. I do have the Kiba spinoff in the works. I confess to getting the idea from hearing The Best Song Ever by One Direction, for Kiba's love interest's personality. I can't say to much more or I'll spill the beans. Let's just say that Kiba will be completely(blissfully)blindsided.


Name: Voyna (Signed) · Date: 13/09/14 - 12:26 pm · For: Welcome To My World
WAIT WAIT WAIT. WOAH. LADY, A SECOND!!!
The last time I read this fic, it was supposed to finish on chapter 2. WTH! I MISSED 6 CHAPTERS OF IT, HELLO!!!
This was my favorite on this site. Wait a second now. I have 6 chapters to make up. Jesus Lord.
Your Shino truly is a gentleman. Such understanding and careful men are rarely found outside of stories. Usually, the average man would try to horde his whole life and keep away his future bride from anything that had to do with him. For the simple reason he wouldn't want all his responsibilities to follow him around. And here you have your Shino doing the complete opposite. However, as all men, he is oblivious to the needs for a woman to get a goddamn goodbye kiss!
I still love your Kiba. He is playful, welcoming, impulsive, sure, but ever so boyishly cute. My favorite of all your characters, you just understand him perfectly. If only you wrote a little fic about him too, I would be the happiest of women!
I unfortunately need to go work now. I wanted to read on >.< First thing you learn in uni: there are things that you want to do and things that you don't. Oh well, the reviews will be appearing in the upcoming days. I am so happy this story is longer than what I thought!

Author's Response: Hmmm a Kiba story *scratches cheek in thought* maybe I should have a spin off of this story for Kiba? Maybe not as long but something anyway. Hmmm I'll have to see what I can come up with and from who's POV it should be from, most likely Kiba's. For you my friend I'll kick this around but I think I have something forming in the dark area's of my mind, but I know she won't be of the Inuzuka clan waahaha


Name: Lady Sun (Signed) · Date: 27/06/14 - 03:30 am · For: Epilogue
This is so darn cute. It really shows a whole different side to Shino's personality! As to Shizu, I think she's even cuter. Kind of naive, yet strong - that's adorable in my eyes. I'm kind of glad this went the way it did. I'm kind of tired of most arranged marriages having to do with both characters hating each other at first, so this was a nice change.


Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 27/01/14 - 09:33 am · For: Future Husband
First of all, sorry for being so so behind in your other story and then only getting to this after you've finished. I've been busy lately or I wouldn't have taken so long.

I really enjoy the concept of a ShinoOc story since I haven't really seen many at all. Shizu is also an interesting character in the way she seems to be getting used to everything after being sheltered because of her dangerous ability. It makes it interesting to read her reactions to everything.

Is Shino actually the heir or did you make it that way for the story? And also, aren't they only 15-16 here? How could that be delayed to making an heir, especially during this time? Then again you could be thinking of the time girls were expected to produce almost soon after they reached their teens. I can't remember if that was Japan or not, but I do remember somewhere heirs were coupled up quickly and expected to have children fast. However, if you're not thinking of this time, I don't think they'd be behind. Sorry for the rambling there. Did not mean to do that

Author's Response: I'm glad you like it. I feel Shino and Choji need more love sent their way lol(I've been kicking around a ChojixOc idea but nothing yet) As far as if Shibi Aburame is the head of the clan, is just really speculation on my part and what I've gathered from the manga and anime. Iruka Umino's class seems to be made up of mostly the children of the heads of the major clans ie Shikamaru, Choji, Sasuke, Hinata and Ino even Kiba could be put in this group since it also seems his mom is the head of their clan. You never see any other children from these clans(except in flashbacks you see a young Torune Aburame who gave me the idea of the nano) As far as the age, from what I've researched once a girl hits puberty and is able to bare children they are married off for various reasons depending on the location and time. So technically speaking Shizu could have been married off to Shino sooner except for her lack of controlling the nano and the Naruto world is a little more civilized than the time of the stone age lol. Hope that answered some of your questions. I am a stickler for researching which is why this story took me so long to finish. I've watched so many(dubbed)episodes of Shino talking to try and keep his speech pattern and mannerisms as close as I could to canon. Plus, just to give into my own curiosity, the reason the Aburame dress like they do and wear sunglasses which I give in the story but it's just speculation on my part.


Name: Jang Wo Li (Signed) · Date: 27/01/14 - 06:24 am · For: Epilogue
I realy enjoyed this story and look forward to seeing what you'll do next. might you let me in on the name at least so I can keep an eye out for it?

Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed it! Pretty much all I have going is a total revamp of my Kimiko Kazuki story. I do have an Shingeki no Kyojin (Attack on Titan) LevixReader one-shot on another site.


Name: Jang Wo Li (Signed) · Date: 10/01/14 - 11:11 am · For: And So It Begins
I realy enjoyed this. most stories sideline the aburame cause they're difficult to write for.

Author's Response: Glad you like it! In keeping with his character(as close as I can)that's why it takes me so long to update, I love how Shino's personality is, it's what makes him so great!


Name: Purple Dinosaur (Signed) · Date: 21/11/13 - 08:12 am · For: In Shino’s Stead
Yay :3 I wanted this to be an actual story and now it is!! I love it, and I can't wait for Shino to be in it...ugh I need to get back to my stories, so bai!!

Author's Response: So glad you love it! Yes Shino will be showing up in the next chapter.


Name: Maia Nishikawa (Signed) · Date: 27/10/13 - 11:42 am · For: Future Husband
I think it's great that you did a shino love story. It's uncommon to find one and especially after the most recent arcs in the naruto story, he seems like a very nice guy. Well written too. :)

Author's Response: Thank you, just trying to share the Shino love!


Name: Voyna (Signed) · Date: 17/10/13 - 04:50 pm · For: First Look
*sigh*
Pray tell, why aren't there real men like Shino! I love the idea that he doesn't look at any woman because he knows he has to get married and wishes to honor his wife above anything else.
And you know, it is nice to have some fluff about Shino too, everyone needs love and so does Shino! It is exactly this idea that some characters get more action than others without any reason. Shino is plenty mysterious and bad boy. He deserved this, and he deserved his Shizu forever. I am sad it is done, I would have loved to read it on forever.

Author's Response: Yes Shino is the man! I have been kicking around the idea of continuing Shizu and Shino's story. There is still a story to tell here. So glad you have enjoyed it so far!


Name: Voyna (Signed) · Date: 17/10/13 - 04:45 pm · For: Future Husband
I simply love your Kiba!!! It is so like him. Completely frank and out there.
And you know what, your cheeky little Aburame is growing on me. She is such a strange mix between the Aburame coolness and something like wanting to be accepted. I guess it goes back to that abandoned-child concept that gets to me. Nonetheless, great job, author!


Name: Purple Dinosaur (Signed) · Date: 09/10/13 - 06:03 am · For: First Look
Pshhhh that's it? >_< I wanted to know what happens next lol. Well I'll keep an eye on your stories and watch how you progress. Are you a new author on Tonfa?

Author's Response: I'm glad you like the story! I'm currently doing a full revision of my I am Kimiko Kazuki of the Hidden Leaf story, I could see about adding to Shizu Aburame after the revising is done.


Name: Purple Dinosaur (Signed) · Date: 09/10/13 - 05:58 am · For: Future Husband
I think this is a pretty good start to this short story. Not many people do an OCxShino love story...I can't wait to read more!


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