Reviews For Lost Heritage
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 12/11/12 - 10:09 pm · For: Civil Disobedience
o_O Did they make it?! Is Izuna okay?! Was the mission a success?! I wanna know what happened~
Even though you took a while to update, I really liked this new chapter. Very action packed, well done, Hazard-san. Looking forward to more, update soon please :D
Author's Response: Ha, great to see your liking the new chapter! Yes, I left a bit of a cliffhanger, but it's all good. We're about to get into the meat of the plot where there will be some pivotal turning points, so stick around!
Name: Shizake Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 12/11/12 - 07:46 pm · For: Civil Disobedience
Interesting Interesting...Izuna definitely proves a worthy challenge to anyone and I like his fighting style. Good chapter bro.
Author's Response: Glad you like it man! I'll have more out the gate soon enough.
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 20/08/12 - 08:00 am · For: Different Seasons
Yay, such a long update. And a fairly epic one too. Izuna is seriously messing with the Leaf ninja now, and sending that ANBU as a messenger should be getting him right into the bingo book.
I wonder how Konan and Izuna will get along. They don't seem terribly awkward or anything do maybe they will trust each other.
Nice work, Hazard-san! Don't worry about slow updates, it's alright. Whatever you post is awesome anyway. Keep up the good work!
Author's Response: It's just the start of something dangerously catastrophic between the Akatsuki and not just the leaf, but the ninja world with Izuna's radicalism thinking. He's more like Madara than he realizes, and you'll be seeing that progression as the story continues.
Name: Shizake Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 19/08/12 - 11:37 pm · For: Different Seasons
Sweet update. Just as expected from Izuna, very powerful. Update soon!
Author's Response: I'll try to update soon!
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 07/08/12 - 10:09 am · For: Something in Common
Oh my with the cliffhanger. Zetsu has always creeped me out, but this just seems to add to it.
I hope Izuna knows what he's doing by betraying his brother. There's going to be a whole lot of tension between the Uchiha, I can already tell. It's going to be intense.
Good job on this update, Hazard-san! Keep up the awesome work!
Author's Response: Oh hello there Wolf-chan! yes, lots of tension already, and Itachi hasn't even gotten in the mix. Izuna is quite touchy about how he " gave up" his eyes so trust is a very bog factor, and he is trying to find his way in this new world of his. Much more coming up, and more suspense!
Name: Shizake Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 02/08/12 - 11:56 am · For: Something in Common
Nice development. Can't wait to see the next chapter
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 17/07/12 - 07:17 am · For: Our Purposes and Beliefs
Whoa, it really surprises me that Izuna isn't just following Madara with this. That's actually really smart of him, but if he's going to somewhat oppose his brother, it could end quite drastically O_O
Hooray for plot development! I'm definitely hooked on this and looking forward to more. Keep up the good work, Hazard-san!
Name: Shizake Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 16/07/12 - 11:13 pm · For: Our Purposes and Beliefs
Damn you can do so much with this story. You've set it up real nicely for future events too. Wonder how Izuna will affect all of it...Nice chapter!
Name: Shizake Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 11/07/12 - 10:39 am · For: Solstice
Shit. I did not expect that turn. I don't even know what to expect at this point. Great job keep it up.
Author's Response: I didn't think you would anticipate this, and more updates are to come soon!
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 11/07/12 - 07:15 am · For: Solstice
Oh my, Madara and Izuna reunited? This is going to be crazy. And possibly not the good kind of crazy, those two seem like dangerous masterminds when together...
Speaking of time travel usually hurts my head, but I actually understood Madara's answer as to why and how Izuna is there. The whole different dimension thing is easier for me to understand.
Great job on this chapter! I'm looking forward to more!
Author's Response: Muhahaha, yes it doesn't look to be the good kind of crazy at all, but it is to be feared for sure. Izuna probably won't blindly follow Madara this time, but only time will tell.
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 04/07/12 - 07:25 pm · For: Acension
The only thing I want to nitpick on is that Ino's team is 10; you put 8.
But anyway! I love how Izuna was so threatening toward Ino. She definitely deserves it at times for being so annoying. And Izuna's sparring match with Asuma was pretty cool. Short, but I still liked it.
Well done on this chapter. I look forward to more plot thickening :D
Author's Response: Thanks, I'll probably go back and change it. Glad you're liking it!
Name: Shizake Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 04/07/12 - 10:18 am · For: Acension
Huh, never expected Izuna to hang with Ino and Sakura. It was pretty funny though. I liked the sparring match too, Izuna definitely is a master at genjutsu. Nice update, can't wait for the next one.
Author's Response: Well he still doesn't know anybody really, so that's what he was stuck with. Next chapter is coming up soon!
Name: Shizake Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 26/06/12 - 10:57 am · For: New Role
It's interesting to see him trying to catch up on all of these things. Though I never expected him to vouch for Hokage. I would like to see him as Hokage though. And I wonder how an encounter with Itachi would go since Izuna could probably murk his ass into the ground. Nice updates man, keep em coming.
Author's Response: Well he was just trying to press Danzo's buttons at first, but then he realized he actually should do it for his clan's pride, and himself. You'll see plenty more soon!
Name: Shizake Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 26/06/12 - 10:46 am · For: Revalations
WTFUCK that was creepy as fuck. Dude, I'm lovin this story, off to read more. Keep it the fuck up dude!
Author's Response: Muhahaha, glad you're loving it.
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 26/06/12 - 06:47 am · For: New Role
Sheesh, Izuna comes off as almost sinister. Ready to challenge Tsunade for the spot of Hokage. Wow. I guess it makes sense, but now I'm worried about just what he'll do to get that seat.
Great work on this double update, Hazard-san! Both chapters were awesome!
Author's Response: He's an odd, one but what can you expect from Madara's younger brother? it's getting gritty, and I'll have more tense chapters to come.
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 26/06/12 - 06:18 am · For: Revalations
Holy. Crap. That is really spooky O_O I never understood time travel and how it can affect the past and future. So this is really frightening.... Well I'm off to read the next one! This was a great chapter!
Author's Response: Glad it's a bit ominous, and I do have an explanation later on in the story. Glad you're liking it!
Name: Shizake Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 19/06/12 - 11:10 am · For: Interface
Yep. This is going to be an awesome story. I want to see another chapter now!
I like how he's already meeting Sasuke. So this should definitely get interesting. Nice job!
Author's Response: You will get a new chapter soon enough! lol, I'm going to probably be doing bulk updates with multi chapters just to see how that goes over, but it will be less frequent.
Name: Shizake Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 19/06/12 - 11:05 am · For: A New World
Nice. I totally forgot they never called the Senju a Hokage until way later.
It'll be interesting to see how a new Uchiha will interact with the world especially since all of the Uchiha are dead. Nice!
Author's Response: Yep, lots of stuff went on in the many years he missed, and it will be something to be reckoned with for sure.
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 19/06/12 - 07:17 am · For: Interface
Wow, Naruto is so rude to have worn orange to a funeral -_-
Anyway, Izuna and Sasuke have met! This is getting really exciting now. I wonder how this will all work out with Izuna there. I'm looking forward to more of this. Keep up the awesome work, Hazard-san.
Author's Response: Yeah, Naruto will be Naruto...but yeah next chapter will be quite the shock for Izuna once he learns the truth of his clan...
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 19/06/12 - 06:57 am · For: A New World
Hmm... The only thing is that the deal with Hanzo happened way before Orochimaru's attack on Konoha. Hanzo was around when the Sannin were young, so maybe a good twenty or so years before the Third Hokage died :P
Other than that, this was still an interesting chapter. I'm kinda glad Izuna didn't just end up in Konoha, that's never fun XD The pacing was good in this chapter, and so far, I think you're doing a really good job of having Izuna be confused of his whereabouts but determined in trying to find some clues. I'm liking this so far. I'm off to read the next one!
Author's Response: I'm talking about the civil war between Pein and Hanzo, not the 3rd shinobi war. I figured Ame ( I originally planned for him to meet Tobi, but I'm saving that for later) would be a good starting place since it beats out the generic " Suddenly in Konoha" ordeal.
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 12/06/12 - 05:57 pm · For: Prologue
Oh my gosh, I feel so bad... I had no idea who Izuna was T_T I'm ashamed of myself... Gah~
Other than my brain lapse, I really liked this. He's not really shown much at all throughout the plot, so you can really do a lot with his character. I really like the creativity with the jutsu and abilities, you've really taken a different approach with it. I like the imagination here, and I'm looking forward to seeing how Izuna fares in another time period. Nice idea and nice first chapter, Hazard-san. Keep up the good work with your stories!
Author's Response: Ha, yeah he's hardly mentioned, but he was powerful in his time and I think it's time his character got a worthy story. Glad you liked what you saw, and much is to come!
Name: Shizake Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 12/06/12 - 04:52 pm · For: Prologue
Ah very nice. I do like it.
Can't wait to see more of this as you can probably tell I'm a big fan of any Uchiha.
Author's Response: Figured your a fan :D and glad you liked the introduction.