Reviews For Bite Back The Curse
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 17/07/12 - 07:45 pm · For: Act 11: Memories of an Old Life
Aww, poor Makita... You have to feel bad for anyone who has to eat out of the trash...
Whoa, she fought Kakashi? That's so insane! O_O
I wonder about that last line... It sounds so eerie... I'm a bit creeped out, who was that guy?!
Nice double update, DDTD! Keep up the good work!
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 17/07/12 - 07:28 pm · For: Act 10: A Purpose
I feel like I saw a lot more mistakes than usual in this chapter, which kinda stinks because it's a shorter chapter. I think your biggest problem is homonym issues. Definitely slow down when you're writing.
Other than that... Kiba! Love him! It kinda sucks that Makita hates his whole clan though... I want him to live! Don't touch him!
Ooh, double update... I'll be back soon with another review haha.
Name: ShadowXNight13 (Signed) · Date: 17/07/12 - 12:46 pm · For: Act 11: Memories of an Old Life
kakashi, will she meet him once again? i get the feeling there is more to that past dream
Name: ShadowXNight13 (Signed) · Date: 17/07/12 - 12:42 pm · For: Act 10: A Purpose
oh my god! it was hinata?! i never realized it. and it made me just wonder, how old are they right there? thank you for comming back! i love your stories. i hope everything goes well for you.
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 17/07/12 - 10:24 am · For: Act 11: Memories of an Old Life
I love how you will just randomly add in Naruto characters, and I almost laughed when I read the guy had silver hair because I knew exactly who it was. Speaking of her dream, I wonder who the man at the door was and what he meant by the soul. My first thought was it was the Inuzuka dude that changed her, but there was no mention of red fangs. I also enjoy getting these looks at her old life and how she used to live, how she used to think. You can still see a lot of similarities, but there's differences as well.
Once again I feel bad for what happened between her and Hinata. When someone used to being alone suddenly has someone there, it's hard to return to before. Trust me, I know this feeling. I really hope she feels better, or even better, meets Hinata again.
This was another great update, DDTD. I'm eager to read more whenever you get the chance to update. I'm sure even if I had to wait months, it would be worth it.
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 17/07/12 - 10:14 am · For: Act 10: A Purpose
Sweet! A double update. And don't worry, DDTD. As long as you update sometime, your readers should be happy. If they get irritated because you don't, then they don't deserve the great updates you bring us.
Wow. So, Makita was turned by an Inuzuka? Interesting twist. And could Kiba understand her, or did I read that wrong?
It was really sad to see Makita and Hinata part (I knew it was her and Kiba!). It's not being a mutt with a companion. It was more like two friends. I don't think she knows just how much everyone needs that. The betrayed feeling was also sad.
This was an awesome update, DDTD, that I really enjoyed. I hope that Hinata and Makita meet again, but that's up to you.
Name: RawrTheDinoLycan (Signed) · Date: 08/07/12 - 03:44 pm · For: Act 9: Found
O.O OHMIGOTH! Moooooooooore *drool*
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 03/07/12 - 03:19 pm · For: Act 9: Found
The boy's Kiba and the girl's Hinata. I just know it! If I'm wrong, well...... That is one heck of a coincidence.
This was a great chapter. I enjoyed the dream of her past. It shows how she used to be. Very worse from how she is now, huh? And then you had the twist of who the people are (who I still say are Kiba and Hinata). And uh-oh. She's ready to kill O_O. Run, Kiba, run!!!!
Name: Shizake uchiha (Anonymous) · Date: 01/07/12 - 07:39 pm · For: Act 9: Found
Short update but I liked it. I really liked the dark brooding emotion also. Lol it must be kiba. Great job can't wait for the next update
Name: Charlie (Signed) · Date: 29/06/12 - 09:31 pm · For: Act 9: Found
Sweet! You updating! I was, like, wondering if you quit, or something!
Short, but neat installment. And dude, is that... Kiba? And if that dudes Kiba, then the kid Makita's been hagin' with... Wow... Tell me I'm wrong so I don't feel dumb :P
Wow, I just noticed you okayed me calling you Zonbi. Heh, um... Awkward...
Name: ShadowXNight13 (Signed) · Date: 29/06/12 - 09:02 pm · For: Act 9: Found
wow, i never thought she failed to kill someone. i wonder who was that guy. andi hope things become better for you! good luck!
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 29/06/12 - 08:45 pm · For: Act 9: Found
Yup, just the ending of this chapter was so worth the wait. This just got so intense :D
The dream from the past was really interesting, it shows us her past personality as a human.
I liked this chapter, nice job.
Name: Shizake Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 16/06/12 - 06:07 pm · For: Act 8: The Food Chain
Nice chapter. Liked the action. Can't wait for the next one.
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 16/06/12 - 11:04 am · For: Act 8: The Food Chain
I found out something - animal fights are fun to read! I really enjoyed it and am loving the animal PoV more and more. It seems to be drawing a lot more reviewers than usual.
Her and that girl make a cute little travel group, and for some reason I am thinking of a Pokemon and trainer. Strange, but oh well. I really enjoyed this chapter and I can't wait to see more. Go Makita!!!!
Name: RawrTheDinoLycan (Signed) · Date: 16/06/12 - 07:43 am · For: Act 8: The Food Chain
.... You little bad ass haha
Geez, your short chapters are going to be the death of me @.@
Name: purpledinosaur (Signed) · Date: 15/06/12 - 05:12 pm · For: Act 8: The Food Chain
At the beginning of the chapter, I thought it would be wolves walking towards Makita, but I was very surprised that they were turkeys. I know some turkeys are wild, but I notice not many writers aknowledge that in their writing when the setting is a forest. Also, I was suspecting there to be a whole pack of wolves after Makita if they smelled the food, but when they were fighting over the kill, I remembered from a TV show on natgeo that wolves like to kill their porey. Not take it from other wolves and or animals. I really liked the chaptet though and I didn't mean to be harsh in any way.
Name: Kakashifan727 (Signed) · Date: 15/06/12 - 04:41 pm · For: Act 8: The Food Chain
Better than most of these types of fics on FF.net. Trust me, they are lulz...yours is good so far. I enjoyed it.
Name: ShadowXNight13 (Signed) · Date: 15/06/12 - 11:51 am · For: Act 8: The Food Chain
well, durning the fight scene you put 'y' instead of my once. but other than that, it was nice :). she beat those wolves! haha! too bad they each got hurt though...
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 14/06/12 - 07:57 pm · For: Act 8: The Food Chain
Aww~ Those two are so cute together. It would honestly be really sweet if they could stay together forever, but I don't think our doggie friend needs a companion on her journey.
This was a really intense yet sweet chapter. I liked it, nice work.
Name: Charlie (Signed) · Date: 14/06/12 - 05:38 pm · For: Act 8: The Food Chain
Aw man, you don't have to thank me *rubs back of head sheepishly* I like this story; it's cool.
What's a ninjen? Nah, I'm kidding :P This mistake really just made me lol, though!
That is, like, way more capable than my little sister XP
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 11/06/12 - 11:22 am · For: Act 7: Breakfast
Well, two annoying creatures down, one little sister to go XD.
Anyway, this was an entertaining chapter. I really enjoyed it, and even if it was a bit extreme (to me) for her to kill those birds, I'm just glad they shut up. Annoying little pests, they were. They got breakfast, though. So yeah.
Sadly, there were some mistakes. Most of them were just messed up words, like peaks instead of beaks. Great job, though. I loved this chapter.
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 11/06/12 - 11:10 am · For: Act 6: Rescue Dog
Have I ever let it be known I feel strange reviewing a chapter with more than a few reviews? I don't understand why, but I do.
Sheesh. Apparently there's a lot of dog lovers on Tonfa. I mean, seriously! How do you get all these reviews?
This was a great chapter, even if there was no doggy kick butt action. Oh well. I really liked this chapter and I'm really curious as to how this will play out. Who is the girl? Why was she kidnapped? What's going to happen next? I must know!
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 11/06/12 - 10:40 am · For: Act 5: The Animal Kingdom
Poor dudes. No idea they're going to get their butts kicked by a dog *sigh*. This was a fabulous chapter. I really enjoy it, and I find it so fun seeing it through a dog's eyes. I've always loved movies like that. I never realized I'd also love stories like that. But yeah, I absolutely love it!
Name: RawrTheDinoLycan (Signed) · Date: 09/06/12 - 11:39 am · For: Act 7: Breakfast
Hmmm, wonder how she'll be when confronted with the Naruto Gang and Konoha.
Haha, stupid birds.
Name: Charlie (Signed) · Date: 09/06/12 - 11:19 am · For: Act 7: Breakfast
Dude! That was freaking awesome! I wish I could kill birds that easily! And dang, kids pretty capable. I don't know how to make a rotisserie lol