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Name: Geishagrl (Signed) · Date: 09/04/13 - 04:45 am · For: Act 22: Jinrai’s Strike System
OoO I can't wait to see what happens!!!


Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 06/04/13 - 07:50 am · For: Act 22: Jinrai’s Strike System
Oh wow. I know you said this would be shorter, but still, it surprises me Makita is already being turned back. I was waiting for her to be sent off on a journey somewhere with Team 8 or something. Don't ask where that idea came from - I'm not totally sure.

I am excited to see Makita change back, though I'm a bit sad by the prospect of not seeing doggy Makita again. Then again, that would mean she was stuck as a dog forever..... Not good. Reformation, huh? Did you ever read Silverwolf's old Pirates of the Mist? Because it makes me think of that. I can't wait to see what Makita will go through. Surely Jinrai has something planned. Will Team 8 be involved. Now that you've brought them in, I seem to be stuck on the idea of them hanging around Makita more U^_^.

Anyway, amazing chapter, DDTD. I can't wait for more!


Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 01/04/13 - 01:42 pm · For: Act 22: Jinrai’s Strike System
Wow, I can't believe she's actually going to be changed back O_O I'm kinda excited but at the same time this bit about her having to show signs of progress and reform is really interesting. I'm looking forward to seeing how she fares in that. Nice update, DDTD. Short but still good.

Author's Response: Yes, I figured we're far enough into the story that we can introduce Human Makita. Finally. I'm excited to see how everyone preserves her, and see if anyone sees a serious change in her as we go. I have a lot of stuff planned, and showing how she fares with Jinrai's expectations should be interesting.
Anyway, thanks for stopping in! I always appreciate your reviews!!


Name: RawrTheDinoLycan (Signed) · Date: 24/03/13 - 07:21 am · For: Act 21: Jinrai
Damn your cliffhangers =.=


Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 16/03/13 - 09:48 am · For: Act 21: Jinrai
Gotta hate sudden tests. It always teaches a great lesson, but sometimes they majorly hurt. At least Makita and Jinrai didn't take too much damage.

I'm actually glad he tested her. It seems like it was something she needed. I'm curious about where this corny answer is going to get her. And it makes me like really Ryouken. He really did a lot for Makita.

Another fabulous update, DDTD. I look forward to more ^_^


Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 16/03/13 - 09:34 am · For: Act 20: A Reputation
Ooh. We finally were able to meet Jinrai. He sure is fierce dog. Just reading your description makes me never want to cross him. I'm just glad his anger toward Makita has wavered a bit after this.

I really liked the talk between her and Kiba. I do t know why, it was just interesting. It makes me wonder if he'll play anymore of a roll. Probably not, but it would be awesome.

Great chapter, DDTD. I'm very eager to see where this goes.


Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 02/03/13 - 08:57 pm · For: Act 21: Jinrai
These past two updates... so good :O The first one because Kiba was in it, obviously XD

But seriously, I really enjoyed seeing the big Jinrai and Makita meeting, and the fight he tried to start surprised me because he seemed so calm just before then o_o

Really interesting updates, I enjoyed them a lot.

Author's Response: Well! I thought the little spell between Makita and Kiba would be nice for everybody reading, although I had originally planned for her to talk to Akumaru instead, but that kind of fell through after I realized how much italics I'd have ended up using -_-
As for the fight between Jinrai and Makita, I've actually had that planned for awhile now. I wanted a scene where I could have those two talking, but I wanted it to have an aggressive feel, but still seem kind of laid back... Eh, I don't know. I guess it was really just a way for Makita to blow of some the steam from her past with Ryouken. I thought the was important.

And I'm glad you enjoyed these updates! I'm hoping to get another two out before the end of this week! It's kind of hard for me to adapt to a schedule after being gone so long, but I'm hoping by getting AT LEAST one update a week I can get back into a normal posting routine again X3

Anyway, thanks so much for the review SilverWolf!!!


Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 24/02/13 - 02:19 pm · For: Act 19: Fool’s Errand
O.o I definitely did not expect Ryoudan to be Kiba's grandfather. Or even for Mikata to be captured by Tsume and Kakashi. I wonder if she'll figure out it's him (at least I'm pretty sure it was). And now she's going to meet Jinrai. Will he tell Tsume her part in her father's death? I'm very eager to see what will happen next chapter.


Name: Geishagrl (Signed) · Date: 20/02/13 - 08:58 am · For: Act 19: Fool’s Errand
Again, I'm so glad you're updating again :)


Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 19/02/13 - 11:15 am · For: Act 19: Fool’s Errand
I liked this chapter, getting caught by Tsume and Kakashi of all people. I'm really excited to see her meet Jinrai, I wonder how that little reunion will turn out. Anyway, nice work on this chapter. I'm really happy to see that you might be back with a somewhat regular schedule :D


Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 16/02/13 - 04:35 pm · For: Act 18: A Change of Heart
Wow. Her quest sure has taken a sudden change. But you sure can see Makita growing just in the space of these few chapters. Ryouken didn't die in vain at least. Unless Makita suddenly spirals. I wonder if that would happen..... This was a really great and strong chapter, DDTD.

Author's Response: I'm glad you're seeing some development in our good friend Makita XD She's still a spit fire, I think, but I kind of want to mellow her out a bit as the story progresses because of what I have planned for her... I think you'll enjoy it :3


Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 15/02/13 - 07:05 pm · For: Act 18: A Change of Heart
Nothing else to really say except... I really loved this chapter. So much good emotion and insight in this chappie and just... so good...


Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 11/02/13 - 02:33 pm · For: Act 17: Becoming the Beast
Again, thanks for the shout-out.

Oh, wow.... This was definitely an outstanding flashback. I knew it was going to be intense, but wow. It was just fabulous.

Once again you give us insight on your character and her personality. And the small fight Sven was definitely nice. I enjoyed it muchly. Though I think my favorite part came afterwards. For some reason the man's words before changing her and her reaction fascinated me. Of course, I also loved the transformation just because it was so well described. But I really loved the other two parts more. Even if it was her fault for killing Ryoudan, it was still really sad to see her state. Wait, crud. Forgot another favorite that may beat the other two - when he asked about the others' families just because its so true.

This was an amazing update filled with parts I loved. Great job ^_^


Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 10/02/13 - 12:53 pm · For: Act 17: Becoming the Beast
Jeez, just as I'm getting through the first couple updates, you update again! Gosh DDTD, disappearing and then suddenly a whole bunch of updates... Not that I'm complaining or anything :D

This is an interesting turn of events, for her to find the doctor who fixed her up. I wonder if he'll be around now for longer in this story? And this flashback was really good, really descriptive and vivid in all the right places.

Nice work on all of these updates, DDTD! Looking forward to hopefully seeing you around more!


Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 10/02/13 - 09:24 am · For: Act 16: Faces from of Afterlife?
First off, I see you have a new story rather than Joji's under Coming to a Computer Near You. I'm very excited for it even if I don't know what it is.

Awwww. Thank you for the shout out ^_^. You definitely deserve the reviews I gave. And if you return to normal, that'll be awesome. If not, though, I'll understand.

This was an amazing chapter. I really enjoyed seeing this new character. The first thing I thought was Hinata and Higata were only one letter difference. Doubt that was purposeful, though. I was a bit surprised to find out he was an Inuzuka and the guy's brother, but it's very interesting.

I'm really glad that Makita is okay and that an old friend(?) found her. Though I wonder if she'll run into Team 8 again later since she's caught their attention. That would make for a fun scene.

Great update, DDTD. I hope to get to the next chapter soon, though some family stuff will probably delay it until tomorrow or later.


Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 09/02/13 - 12:17 pm · For: Act 15: Final Attack, suicide?
Man, DDTD, you nearly made me cry at the end. It was really fun to see this different side of Makita. She was just an innocent child then. Then how she'd give anything to argue with her brother again. *sniffle sniffle* It was just so sad.

So wjat shall happen now? The genin are down, so shall Kurenai find her? Someone has to or she's likely to for, and that cannot happen until she is human or finds peace or something. Just not yet. She may be more the bad guy, but I live her too much for her to die.

Great chapter, DDTD. I really loved it.

P.S. I love the new banner.


Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 09/02/13 - 11:31 am · For: Act 14: Never Underestimate Your Foe
I guess Makita is just now realizing how amazing Team 8's tracking skills are.

It was really sad when Makita felt betrayed by Hinata. I'm really curious as to what Hinata was thinking at the time since she's such a gentle girl and all, then having to do that to someone who saved her.

I love seeing Akamaru talk. I don't know why. It is just so cute to imagine and it's so interesting. I love it. You having the main character be a dog sure adds a lot of stuff to it. And her fighting is quite interesting as well.

Great chapter, DDTD. I really loved it.


Name: Geishagrl (Signed) · Date: 04/11/12 - 07:57 am · For: Act 13: Ambushed
This is awesome! And so unique! I can't wait to see what happens to Makita ^^


Name: RawrTheDinoLycan (Signed) · Date: 22/10/12 - 05:24 pm · For: Act 13: Ambushed
Hot damn your stories are always so good!


Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 16/10/12 - 01:47 pm · For: Act 13: Ambushed
I agree with Silverwolf on the Kurenai thing. It's just not logical. Otherwise I just saw a few scattered mistakes like a obnoxious. But nothing major like the jump on information thing.

It was definitely interesting to see that reunion. It made me sad, though, since I wanted Makita and Hinata to stay reunited. That's just a great friendship. Haha. It's so fun to read Makita's bitterness at Inuzukas, and then how Kiba reacts.

With this new development, I am very eager to read more. This was a great chapter, and I can't wait to read more.


Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 10/10/12 - 09:04 pm · For: Act 13: Ambushed
Wow~ I think it's really interesting how you brought back Hinata and her team. I can only imagine Makita's irritation at being tailed by them, especially an Inuzuka XP

I'm wondering though: "...and I realized she must be the sensei of the Genin I had run into earlier." How does Makita automatically know this woman she's never seen before? If you had mentioned her Konoha headband or something, I'd understand, but as it is, you just describe Kurenai as a random woman with Uchiha-like eyes (though that could be like anyone with red eyes). A little more reference there would have been good.

This was a nice change of events, bringing back the Konoha shinobi. I'm wondering how it will turn out for Makita. Keep up the good work.


Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 02/10/12 - 06:15 pm · For: Act 12: Despite My Victories
First off..... YOU'RE GETTING MARRIED? Wow. Congratulations, DDTD! I hope this guy deserves your love. If not..... My scythe is always an option XD.

Wow. What she says about the hero(ine) not always winning is very true, but it is still like a slap in the face. It also makes me wander if we'll be seeing more of that in the later chapters. It also just helps to develop her more in a way.

It's really sad to see that bond she has with Hinata severed. I really hope they meet up again T_T. They made good friends, and I think Hinata would have been good for Makita. *sigh* Anyway, I cannot wait for more, DDTD! But, well, seeing as you're busy, I'll wait.


Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 26/09/12 - 09:12 pm · For: Act 12: Despite My Victories
Oh... My... God... YOU'RE GETTING MARRIED?! HOLY CRAP! CONGRATULATIONS, DDTD! So happy for you! I hope this person treats you well :D Ah, love stories, makes me wanna hear all about this *_*

Anyway, it was nice to see an update from you. It's like you disappeared, but I mean... with good reason, obviously :3

Considering you're in a pretty good mood, this chapter seems so depressing T_T First Makita is in a bad mood and then she can't save the guy. That's really disappointing...

Anyway, it was good to see this updated. Looking forward to more from you soon. Keep up the good work!


Name: RawrTheDinoLycan (Signed) · Date: 22/07/12 - 06:39 pm · For: Act 11: Memories of an Old Life
My goth this story is awesome, I cannot wait to find out more about her.


Name: RawrTheDinoLycan (Signed) · Date: 22/07/12 - 06:38 pm · For: Act 10: A Purpose
Awe


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